SO SORRY FOR THE LONG WAIT! I have been in rehearsals, work and choir lately! I also just graduated so it's hard for me right now! Also I might take a break from my current writing and post what I have because I found new interest. Anyways just positive reviews please!

After breakfast, everyone went to the Qudditch pitch and to the stands and towers. Topanga went with the Ravenclaws while the rest went with the other Gryffindors. Meanwhile, Harry, Shawn, Oliver, and the other players get on their Qudditch robes and got their broomsticks before heading to the door.

Oliver looked at Harry and Shawn and asked, "Scared?"

"A little," Harry replied.

"Me too," Shawn says also.

Oliver smiled. "That's all right. I felt the same way before my first game."

Harry looked at him and asked, "What happened?"

"Uh, I don't really remember. I took a bludger to the head 2 minutes in. Woke up in the hospital a week later."

Harry and Shawn looked at each other really nervous before the doors opened and heard cheering. The team mounts onto their broomsticks and zoomed out above the large field of the Qudditch pitch. They start flying around receiving cheers and applause.

A Gryffindor commender starts announcing from the tower, "Hello, and welcome to Hogwart's first Quidditch game of the season! Today's game Slytherin vs. Gryffindor!"

Cory, Ron and Hermione cheers as did Topanga from the Ravenclaw stands.

They get into positions in a circle in the air as the Slytherin Qudditch players take their place as well.

The commender continues, "The players take their positions as Madam Hooch steps out onto the field to begin the game."

Madam Hooch walks to the center of the field and shouts firmly looking at everyone, "Now I want a nice clean game. From all of you." She kicks the trunk open and the balls zoom out except for the quaffle.

"The bludgers are up...followed by the Golden Snitch. Remember, the snitch is worth 150 points. The seeker who catches the Snitch ends the game," the commender informs the spectators as the golden snitch zooms around Harry's head and to the other team Seeker's head before disappearing in the sky. Hooch takes the quaffle and throws it in the air.

"The quaffle is released…." The commender stops before the ball falls toward the players. "…And the game begins!"

Shawn catches the quaffle sending the opponent Chasers into a swarm and he zooms away with it with them following him. He flies over one of the Slytherin players and moves away from the players whoa re trying to get the quaffle. One of the Slytherins actually shoved him along the way to the hoops. The bludger ball zoomed near Shawn and he ducked. The ball missed his head and he kept on going. He finally reached the hoops and he threw the ball that made it through successfully receiving erupting cheers. He zoomed down to George and high fives him.

"Shawn Hunter scores! 10 points to Gryffindor!" The commender awards points.

"YEAH SHAWN!" Cory yells waving his Gryffindor flag.

Harry shouts raising his fist in triumph, "Yes!" But the blunger zoomed nearly knocking Harry off his room, but he kept his steady.

The commender spectates the game and gives a play by play, "Slytherin takes possession of the quaffle. Bletchley passes to Captain Marcus Flint."

Shawn zooms his broomstick just as Flint the Chaser for Slytherin throws the quaffle to the hoop but Oliver blocked the hoop by whacking the quaffle with his broom making it go toward Shawn who caught it. The other Chaser for the Gryffindor team zoomed over and he passed it over to her when two Slytherin chasers were trying to block either of them. Eventually as the near the tower, the Gryffindor Chaser takes hold of the quaffle zooming away from them, turned around fooling them, showing it to Shawn who again throws it at the hoop which made it though before the Slytherin Keeper was about to block it which was too late.

"YES!" Harry shouted, "GO SHAWN!"

"Another 10 points to Gryffindor!" The commender then awards more points.

Shawn smiled and ran his fingers through his hair making the Gryffindor girls in the stands cheer for him.

But then the game got ugly as the Slytherin chaser takes the quaffle and was throwing it at one of the hoops. Luckily Oliver caught it and he throws it at another Chaser for the team. The team captain takes the club from the beater and the bludger came down and he takes the whack at it sending the bludger to hit him in the stomach making him fall backwards through the hoop and down to the ground.

Shawn kept on going trying to get the quaffle from the Slytherin but they threw it through the hoop being awarded 10 points. He takes the quaffle heading for the other side of the field dodging the bludgers but the two Slytherins zoomed with one on the left of Shawn and one on the right of him and sandwiched him in between them making him steer his broom uncontrollably. They steer him making him head toward the drape that was covering one of the towers. They disperse taking the quaffle from him and it all turns dark. He falls down with his broom behind the drape and he gets knocked out when he hits the ground.

Harry's eyes widened and yells, "SHAWN!"

"SHAWN!" Topanga screams from the Ravenclaw stands.

"SHAWN!" Cory screams for his best friend from the Gryffindor stands.