so guys here is the next chapter thoda abhivi thoda dayanishi and thanku so much guys for ur reviews
R - special thanks to u my friend kafi acha idea diya tha tumne really isi lea mene vo add kiya agar apke pass kuch or bhi ho plz share tha.. sirf app hi nahi baki bhi or ha actually camping ke liye ko specific reason nahi ha bus manali mein kai log camping karte ha toh socha unhe bhi karvadw ashfaq ka role 2 - 3 chapter ke baad ae ga..
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at night
on mall road abhi and purvi were walking with distance... and daya and nishi were at back...
nishi - sir ab kisi tarha in dino ko pehle hath mein hath lana hoga...
daya - lekin kese..
(soon a cold wind blowing)
nishi - (happily) areh wah ise pata lagta ha ki kudrat bhi chahti ha ki dono ek ho...
abhivi side...
purvi started feeling cold she started shivring little... abhi saw that and removed his jacket... and covered her shoulder...
abhi - kafi thand ho rahi ha yeh pehen lo...
purvi - lekin app..
abhi - i am ok...
but purvi hug his arm abhi shocked...
purvi (smile) - ab thik ha...
abhijeet smile and both started moving purvi kept her head on his shoulder.. abhi just smile little...
dayanishi side...
nishi - wah ek taraf ye ha (sad) or ek taraf... (and she look around daya was at softy shop nishi patted her head and went near..him)
nishi - sir ye kya kar rahe ha app..
daya - areh tumahare liye ice cream le raha tha abhi ne bataya tha ki tumhe sardiyo mein icrle cream bahut pasand ha.. (nishi smiled shyly daya gave her the cone..)
nishi - ab chale..
daya - chalo ..
and both started following him... nishi saw a potato chips shop..
daya - areh wah ye toh abhijeet ke favorite ha..
nishi - iska matlab vo paka le ge.. mere pass ek idea ha.. (she made call to shopkeeper)..
nishi. - hello hi chod or piche dekh...
(shopkeeper saw her she waved hand) ab meri baat dhyaan se sun ek couple ae ga tere pass woh tujhse do sticks mange ga lekin tujhe ek hi deni ha vo tujhe paise.. sirf ek ke de ga or baki paise mein de du gi.. ok.. (and she kept the phone)...
daya - tum use janti ho..
nishi - bahut baar aa chuki hu or kai famous shopkeeper jante ha mujhe...
daya - wese yeh kya kiya tumne..
nishi - sharing se pyar badta ha suna ha (daya nodded) bus vo hi.
abhivi side
abhi stop at shop..
purvi - wow potato chips sticks..
abhi - tum lo gi..
purvi nodded
abhi went near shopkeeper..
abhi - do sticks dena..
shopkeeper - maff karna sahab sirf ek ha..
(abhivi looked at each other)
abhi - koi baat nahi app de dijiye..
and he gave.. abhi paid both move..
dayanishi also started following but stopped listening something
voice - bhagwaan kare tum dono ki jodi saat janmo tak bani rahe.. (both felt shy)
daya - mein vo baki paise dekar aya.. (and he left)
nishi went near beggar..
nishi (giving 500 rs happily hold his hand ) - thanku yarr bhagwaan kare teri ye baat sach ho phir agle saat janmo tak bhagwaan ke sath sath teri bhi pooja karu gi
beggar - dhanyawaad ..
nishi went
abhivi side..
abhi - tum bhi lo na..
purvi - sorry sir actually kafi thand ha or mere hath abhi abhi garam ha toh kya app mujhe khila sakte ha
abhi smiled and took out one piece from the stick and made her eat..
dayanishi.. side
daya - wah nishi kya training di ha tumne purvi ko..
nishi (smile) - nahi sir mene koi training nahi di...
daya - toh fir..
nishi (looking at him) - jo pyar hota hai na vo khud bata deta ha ki kya karna ha..
daya looked at her eyes there was a cute eyelock between them.. but soon broke down with loud rock music..
daya - ye music system..
nishi - idea.. (she dialled on the shopkeeper playing rock music on speaker) hello piche dekhiye (and she waved he hand) suniye plz"duniya" play kardijiye...
shopkeeper - (smile) thik ha beta jessa tum kaho..
nishi - thanku..
shopkeeper played..
tunning
abhi/nishi - (pov) mera favorite song
background - Bulave tujhe yaar aaj meri galiyan
Basaun tere sang main alag duniya
Bulave tujhe yaar aaj meri galiyan
Basaun tere sang main alag duniyaa
both looked at each other passed smile
purvi hugged his arm more tightly
Na aayein kabhi dono mein zara bhi faasle
Bas ek tu ho, ek main hoon aur koyi na
Hai mera sab kuch tera tu samajh le
Tu chaahe mere hakk ki zameen rakh le
Tu saanson pe bhi naam tera likh de
Main jiyu jab jab tera dil dhadke
daya nishi side..
some one hit nishi lightly due to which she was going to fall but daya saved her by holding from waist nishi hold his shoulder tightly both lost in cute eyelock
Tujhse mera yeh jee nahi bharta
Kuch bhi nahi asar ab karta
Meri raah tujhse
Meri chaah tujhse
Mujhe bas yahin reh jana
soon snow fall starts both came back to reality daya made he stand both were looking at each other
Lagi hain teri aadatein mujhse jab se
Hai tere bin pal bhi baras lagte
Bulave tujhe yaar aaj meri galiyan
Basaun tere sang main alag duniyaa
abhivi side...
purvi was trying to wear a locket which she had bought now but she was unable to wear it so abhi made her wear she turn and both look at each other with smile..
Jo hove tu udaas mujhe dekhe hass ke
Tu chaahe mere hakk ki zameen rakh le
Tu saanson pe bhi naam tera likh de
Main jiyu jab jab tera dil dhadke
both lost in each other soon they were on mall road were all couples were dancing and they also started dancing romantically... and were looking in each others eyes
purvi -Tujhse mili toh seekha maine hasna
Aaya mujhe safar mein theharna
Main toh bhool gayi duniya ka pata
Yaara jab se hai tujhe jaana
Hai tu hi dil jaan hai meri ab se
Ve zikr tera na jaaye mere lab se
Bulave tujhe yaar aaj meri galiyan
Basaun tere sang main alag duniyaa
Jo hove tu udaas mujhe dekhe hass ke
Tu chaahe mere hakk ki zameen rakh le
Tu saanson pe bhi naam tera likh de
Main jiyu jab jab tera dil dhadke
abhi -Pyar di raawan utte yaar tu le aaya
Mainu jeene da matlab aaj samajh aaya
Paraya mainu kar naa, na tu sohneya
Channa main toh rul jaana...
both came out from the thoughts when people started clapping ..abhi left her both started seeing here and there..
voice - chale ..( both turn and saw daya nishi four passed smile and move back to the camp)
in purvi and nishi side..
both were lying..
puvi - yar ye music bhi kya cheez hai na joh hum nahi keh pate music keh deta ha..
nishi - hmm..
purvi - kya hua kya soch rahi ha...
nishi - soch rahi hu daya sir ko propse kar hi du kal..
purvi ( happily) - kardo nishi issa acha time or jagha nahi mile gi ..
nishi (smile) - thik ha abb soja..
both slept..
on abhidaya side
abhi - daya... daya... abe daya...
daya (irritated and sleepy tone) - kya ha..
abhi - tu nishi ko propose kab kar raha ha..
daya sat up with jerk..
daya - abhiiii..
abhi - daya mein janta hu ki tu use pyar karta ha...or mene tujhe dekh bhi liya
daya - pata ha yarr lekin kya who mujhse pyarr karti ha..
abhi - yarr agar tu ye sab socha rahe ga toh phirse reh jae ga..
daya - yarr lekin mein kisi ko force nahi kar sakta..
abhi - kisne kaha tumse ki tum force kar rahe ho..
daya - phir bhi mujhe lagta ha she doesn't love me (changing the topic) vese tum jese baat kar rahe ho esa lagta ha.. ki tumne mujhe maff kardiya...
abhi made irritating face and slept again daya also smile but make him get up again..
daya - acha abhi agar tumne hume dekhi hi liya tha toh tumhe pata lag gaya hoga ki hum tumhara picha kyu kar rahe ha..
abhi (in flow) - hmmm
daya - tabhi tumne purvi ke sath vo sab dance vagera kiya... (with this abhi got up and saw him)
daya - kya hua bolo ab...
abhi - yarr.. vo..vo.. yarr
daya - ye vo vo or sidhe bato kya baat ha..
abhi (sadly) - yarr i think i am loving her...
daya (happily) - what thats great news agar tu use pyar karta ha toh bole dena use..
abhi - nahi yarr mujhe dar lagta ha...
daya - (shockingly) dar or tumhe
abhi - ha yarr or darr is baat ka ha ki kahi vo bhi tarrika ki tarha na kare..
daya - (confidently) - abhi vo esi ladki nahi ha...
abhi - janta hu isi lea yarr mein ek barr use moka de raha hu...i hope ki vo bhi mujhse sacha pyar kare..
daya - iska matlab tu use i luv u bol raha ha..
abhi - daya moke ka matlab ha ki mein use apni dil mein jagha bane ka moka du.. or agar usne esa kar diya...toh eye gang ke khatam hone ke baad mein use i love u bol du ga...
daya - or agar usne pehle hi tumhare dil mein jagha banali toh..
abhi - tab bhi use mein eye gang ka case khatam hone ke baad hi manau ga..
daya (shockingly) - yeh galat ha yarr..
abhi - nahi daya ye thik ha kyuki agar mene abhi bol diya toh eye gang purvi ko kidnap karke mujhe blackmail kar sakti ha or unki nazzar humare har ek kadam par ha...
daya (shockingly) - kya..
abhi - ha daya unhone apna invisible dron humpar choda ha lekin hum use dekh nahi sakte..
daya - agar dekh nahi sakte toh tumhe kese pata chala..
abhi - mujhe pata ha bus (and he slept fastly to avoid futher questioning daya was still confused)
next morning..
all got ready.. and sat on jeep
abhi - toh aage sab..
nishi - nahi purvi nahi aie abhi tak (and she saw purvi came) vo dekho vo aagai..
all saw that side.. abhi lost seeing her she was in white punjabi suit with open hairs.. her hairs were falling on her face saw she did it aside... with her fingers..
daya - abhi... abhi... (abhi jerk and saw him)
daya - (naughtyly) -.chalo ab purvi beth gai ha...
abhi (irritated) - ha ha chal raha hu...
acp - vese abhi ye mandir manyata kya ha..
abhi - sir iss mandir ki khasiyat Ramayana or Mahabharata mein ki gai ha mana jata ki jo log sache dil se mangte ha unki dua jarur puri hoti ha..
purvi (Mummring ) - esa ha toh mein apne liye sirf apke dil mein jagha mangu gi...
(daya nishi listen that and smiled)
(and he started the jeep soon they reached to the temple and went inside after sometime start coming back.. abhi was first he sat on driving seat soon purvi. also came.. abhi again lost in her.. purvi came in him)
abhi (dreamy tone) - pata nahi ese kyu lag raha ha.. ki khuda ne banaya tumhe kisi or ke liye lekin pane ki Koshish mein kar raha hu..
purvi ( dreamy tone) - app galat ha khuda ne mujhe apke dil ke liye hi banaya bus app ek bari us nazro se dekhiye...
( both lost in each others eyes)
vocie - wah wah salukhe mujhe nahi pata tha ki mere officer itni achi shayri kar lete ha
(both came out from the thoughts)
(to daya) tumhe pata tha.. ki tumhara bhai esa ha
daya - nahi sir.. (naughty) kyuki mere liye toh kabhi shayri nikli hi nahi..
nishi - (dreamy tone) uske liye mein huna..
daya saw her now both got lost.. soon they come back as abhi started blowing horn...
abhi - agar tumhara hogaya toh chale...
(daya nishi smile shyly... and sat.. )
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