Alright so a couple of notes!

Uriah... yes he dies in the book but I have yet to get to that part so in my mind he lives on. Plus Uriah is too cool to die let's be real.

That one chapter that people want an extended version of... yeah that one. You can expect that to be a couple weeks. I think I am going to wait until I'm out of school.

PIE IS YUMMY

Tobias

After Uriah had told me about Tris I had immediately headed for the train. As I turned the last corner however I saw Zeke and Uriah there.

"What are you two doing?" I asked stopping.

"Uri told me everything. Dude you can't go in alone." Zeke explained. I opened my mouth to speak before sighing.

"Let's go." I push past them and out to the train. We hop on and head toward the sixth sector, where I'm certain Tris was taken.

Tris

Why does my head hurt?

I blink my eyes open and look around. I'm in a courtyard, a closer look shows that I'm in the new sector of the city. I stand up and take a step forward only to run into something. I blink again and put my hand out. It presses against something cold and smooth... glass. Another look around shows the reflections of the sun shinning through the clear material.

I spin slowly and see that the container is large enough for me to move around in. I turn and press my hand against the glass again. I push against it, trying to break it. After a couple minutes I stop but don't remove my hand from the glass. I look up and freeze. I glare at Eric as he smirks at me.

"Let me go!" I shout at him. He just smirks and points to his ear. He can't hear me... dang it. I bang on the glass a few times and feel it shake under the blows. I eventually give up. I'll need to get the glass cracked or something for me to break it.

I look again at Eric and see that he is now joined with Evelyn. I straighten my back and glare at her. She isn't looking at me though. I turn and spot Tobias. I blink and smile at him. He looks at me and anger washes over his face.

"Let her go!" Tobias yells. Oh so I can hear but they can't hear me. Well then. I watch as the typical let her go conversation goes on. Slowly some Factionless approach behind Tobias from behind. One raises a gun and I watch as Uriah jumps him just as he shoots. This causes the bullet to miss Tobias and hit the glass case. I cover my face, expecting the glass to shatter. Instead it just cracks. Isn't that convenient. I look at Tobias and a small smirk comes across my face.

I immediately begin to bang on that spot near the crack, harder with each blow. Also with each blow a factionless comes near me. I even see Evelyn approach. Eric moves toward Tobias to stop him from reaching me. With one last blow, everything slows down to slow motion. The crack from the bullet spreads across the glass and eventually everything shatters. I cover my head as this happens. I stay like this for a few seconds before standing straight to fight the factionless that lunges at me. I take him down with ease and grab his gun. I point it at Evelyn and everything stops.

We look at each other for a minute before a shot rings out and a body falls.

Cliff hanger! SOOOOOO SORRY IT'S BEEN A WHILE! I am really busy getting ready for graduation and a leadership seminar. . I hope you like this chapter. The Tris part got inspired by Lindsey Stirling's song Shatter Me. Let me know what you think and who do you think got shot? o.o Let me know!