Hey so I was rereading a lot of this and I've decided I'm going to rewrite the moments series, but better.
It'll be a bit of a wait, but trust me it'll be worth it.
I guess what I'll do is make a new story entirely and as I revise and/or rewrite each chapter, I'll delete it off of the original story (this one) as I post it to the new story.
Why am I doing this you ask? My writing has improved so much in the past year and I thought that the earlier chapters should be rewritten to include my better writing.
Changes you will see:
• different plots. (A good different though. No random plots that make no sense (see chapters 4 and 5) No plots that are nearly impossible happenings (see chapter 9)
•better descriptiveness. No more chapters that are 96% dialogue.
•I'm merging Moments and Stardust for better readability
• it's not all going to be centered around romance (I mean yes the Kristanna chapters will have a heavy dose of fluffitude, but some of the chapters, especially the Elsa-centric ones will have themes based around the politics and economy and stuff happening in Arendelle.
•better OC for Elsa... I suck at writing OC's. Just give me time. Also am working on the bisexual Elsa theory.
•honestly just give it time and this story will be a gazillion times better, I swear.
(And now a mandatory story but so this doesn't get deleted. Disney owns Frozen)
"Hey Elsa!" Anna said as she ran up to her sister. "Ice to see you!"
The Queen sighed. "Anna... What did I tell you about the puns..."
"Sorry... Anyway, how's it snowing? I... I mean going! How's it going?"
Elsa laughed. If Anna had to make ice puns like that, she could at least make some new ones. "It's going good."
"Wanna do something?"
"Like what?"
"I dunno... Maybe ride our icicle- I mean bicycle."
"Enough with the puns!" Elsa snapped.
"C'mon, Els! You need to chill! You need to just-"
"Don't say it!"
"Oh you know I'm gonna say it..."
"Don't..."
"You need to..."
"No."
"LET."
"Stop."
"IT."
"Anna..."
"GOOOOO! LET IT GOOOO! WHEN I'LL RISE LIKE THE BREAK OF DAWN! LET IT GOOOOOO!"
Elsa joined in. "LET IT GOOO-OOOOO! THAT PERFECT GIRL IS GOOONNNNEE! HERE I STAND, IN THE LIGHT OF DAAAAA-AAAAAY! LET THE STOOORRRM RAAGE OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNN!"
"The cold never bothered me anyway." Anna giggled.
"That was fun Anna, now can I please just work on signing these trade agreements? Alone?"
"Snow problem!" Anna laughed as she left.
