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Yamcha's fist smashed into Frieza's nose while Gohan planted a foot right into the Frost Demon's stomach. This sent him skidding back and when Yamcha went to charge, the giant hand of the tyrant smacked him aside. Pain shot through his body as he hit the ground. But he had to ignore it, he just had to buy Piccolo two minutes.
Vegeta jumped forward just as Yamcha hit the ground. He flipped over Frieza and put his feet on the tyrant's back. He propelled himself off causing the tyrant, causing the horned alien to stagger forwards. Using this opportunity, Gohan put an uppercut right into Frieza's chin.
Staggering backwards Frieza snarled, "What is happening!?"
Vegeta grinned as Frieza turned to him, "Don't you get it Frieza!? You're going down here! And to think I would fulfill the long foretold legend!"
Frieza looked at Vegeta confused, "I'm sorry? Did you say you'd fulfill a legend? Don't make me laugh."
Yamcha got to his feet, one of his arms hung limply. That's right Vegeta…just be your arrogant self as usual…Distract him. He slowly started backing away. He then made a run for Gohan who was out of Frieza's sight.
Gohan saw Yamcha's arm and looked at him worriedly, "You okay Yamcha?"
Yamcha nodded that he was okay, "I have a plan. Remember how I taught you Spirit Ball?"
"Yeah, what about it?"
"We're gonna fire two off at Frieza and juggle him around a bit."
Gohan smiled, "Sounds good to me! Let's do it."
Yamcha smiled back, "Alright." Both fighters raised one hand, a ball of ki starting to form. Simultaneously they yelled "Spirit Ball!"
Frieza turned just in time to see the two balls of energy flying at him, "What now!?" He got hit by them and was knocked off his feet. Before he could hit the ground the Spirit Balls went beneath him and tossed him up. The two fighters were using their hands to direct and move the attacks. They began to juggle Frieza.
Being knocked around like a pinball was not what Frieza had planned for when first coming to Namek. He hadn't planned for any of this. He was just gonna come here, get his wish, and blow the planet to bits! Now he was being knocked around by Vegeta, two earthlings, and a Namekian.
Frieza shouted as he caused a massive explosion. He hung in the air breathing heavily. "What even is today!?"
Vegeta came flying up and smashed head on into Frieza, "You're day of death!" Frieza wrapped his arms around Vegeta and went flying downwards. Not this shit again… He was planted in the ground from waist to head. Frieza plucked him out of the ground and laughed.
"Seems I picked little Veggie like a vegetable." Frieza smirked as he began to charge up a killing blast. But Vegeta did what he did to Recoome and fired a blast straight up into Frieza's face. Howling in pain, Frieza threw Vegeta into a nearby mountain. "Damn you, you dirty ape!"
"It's ready! Makankosappo!" Piccolo pointed two fingers out and a spiraling beam of purple and yellow energy shot out. Frieza turned just in time for it to pierce right through him. It went straight through his lower abdomen. He staggered back, covering the hole in his stomach. Blood oozed from between his fingers and he dropped just as fast as the attack pierced him.
Yamcha and Gohan landed next to Piccolo. "Ya think that did it Mr. Piccolo?"
"Maybe kid. Just maybe…"
Frieza's body suddenly began to glow. It floated upwards to stand in an upright position.
"Piccolo…I don't think it worked…"
"Wow thanks Yamcha. I couldn't tell!"
"I'm gonna kill you Frieza!" Vegeta went flying by the three fighters and charged Frieza. There was a blinding light suddenly and Vegeta disappeared into it. Earth's fighters covered their eyes until the light faded. When it did, what they saw made them all freeze in fear.
Frieza stood there in another new form. This time he had a very lanky body with shoulder-pad like shoulders and an elongated head with horn like items sticking out of the sides of it and his upper back. He was holding Vegeta by the neck in his right hand. All his injuries were gone. Even the hole in his torso had repaired itself. "Really now. You thought a simple attack like that would get me?"
Vegeta was thrown into the air as Frieza's eyes flashed. The Saiyan prince was surrounded by an explosion which destroyed a good portion of his armor and left him a smoking body on the ground.
Yamcha's eyes widened, "That's not good…"
Gohan clenched his teeth, "Maybe Dende can heal him. I can sense his energy. It's faint, but it is there."
Piccolo charged Frieza, "I'll buy you time!" Smashing his fist into Frieza's face only hurt Piccolo himself. His hand cracked and Frieza grabbed him by the arm.
"Such a fool." He pointed a finger at Piccolo and fired off hundreds of tiny ki blasts. The Namekian warrior's body shook violently as purple explosions lit up his body.
Gohan's power began to skyrocket. "W-why you…Leave him alone!" Gohan charged and blindsided Frieza. He followed with an uppercut, knocking Frieza off his feet. He then elbowed the tyrant down and flew straight up. "You're finished!" Gohan fired an enormously powerful ki wave down at Frieza. Piccolo was just able to get out of the way as Frieza was engulfed by the pillar of energy.
Where Frieza had been was just a hole straight down for miles. Yamcha and Piccolo looked on, amazed by the half-breed child's power. How did a mere kid like Gohan have so much power? That didn't matter at the moment though. What did matter was defeating Frieza.
Frieza slowly levitated up from inside the hole he had just been in. He had scrapes and bruises everywhere. Who is this kid!? He can't be Vegeta's child or that scarred face one! Raditz? Turles? No, not those two either. No matter, I'll kill him along with the others.
"So can I just take the time to say, if Frieza transformers again, none of us are gonna live." Yamcha was shaking as he spoke. He couldn't believe the power this monster possessed.
Gohan turned to look behind them, "Do you guys sense that!? I think Dad is on his way!"
Piccolo smiled, "I sense it too. Way to be late to the party Goku."
Over behind a rock Dende was healing Vegeta. Soon the Saiyan prince sat up and cracked his knuckles. "Don't touch me vermin." He knocked Dende aside and flew for the others.
Dende sat up, a frown on his face. "Wow…I hate insulting people but he's kinda rude…"
Vegeta landed next to Yamcha. "So, any other tricks up your sleeves Earthlings?"
Yamcha chuckled, "Goku's on his way so we got that. Then I can use the Spirit Bomb maybe. That attack I used on you."
Vegeta pinched his nose, "This day is just full of disappointment. Alright, you guys do what you want. With my power up I can finally kill Frieza! So have fun!" He barreled off to fight Frieza.
Piccolo shook his head in disgust, "His arrogance is gonna get him killed."
Vegeta punched Frieza across the face and then went for a follow up punch only to have Frieza disappear. Looking every which way, he couldn't find his former enslaver. "Where is he!?"
"Right here." Frieza wrapped his tail around Vegeta's neck and began choking him. He lifted Vegeta off his feet as the Saiyan struggled to unwrap his tail. "Oh poor Vegeta. The prince of nothing. You're gonna die alone on this planet." He began to punch Vegeta in his back without stopping. There was a loud crack as something in Vegeta's spine broke.
Vegeta screamed in agony as Frieza threw him aside. Dende went to go heal Vegeta, knowing that he would get stronger if he did. That was his mistake. Frieza pointed a finger at Dende.
"Dende no!" Gohan went to catch the young Namekian. But he was too late. Dende exploded and landed on the ground. He was a smoking corpse. Vegeta lay on the ground next to the Namekian child. "Great…I'm not getting healed now…" Vegeta tried to sit up, but he couldn't. In fact, he couldn't feel his legs at all. Frieza had paralyzed him.
"N-no! I can't move!" Frieza landed next to Vegeta.
"Good thing. Otherwise it would make killing you that much harder."
Gohan, Piccolo and Yamcha stood there frozen in place.
"H-he killed Dende…" Yamcha clenched his fists, trying to keep his cool. He didn't need to just charge in and get himself killed. That wouldn't help the situation one bit.
Piccolo growled, "He realized Dende was healing us. Strategically for him, he went for his best chance of keeping us down…Killing Dende."
Frieza picked Vegeta up by the armor. "Ya know, I've grown quite fond of you Vegeta. Maybe I'll drink to your name after all this is over. The last of the Saiyans." He grinned, "Nah. Probably not." He placed his hand on Vegeta's chest. "See you in Hell." He blasted a hole straight through Vegeta's chest.
Yamcha's eyes widened, "N-no!"
Gohan froze with fear. "Vegeta!"
Piccolo cracked his knuckles, "Well. Anyone got any bright ideas?"
Frieza looked to Yamcha and the others. They all froze in fear. "Now. I am going to kill you three. And I didn't even have to use all my transformations for this fight."
A rock hit Frieza in the head and he turned. "Who threw that!?"
"Up here Frieza." Everybody looked over to a cliff that was over the battlefield.
"N-no way! I killed you!" Frieza seemed shocked, maybe even a little scared.
Raditz was on top of the cliff tossing a rock up and down. He caught it and closed his fist around it. The pieces of the rock fell to the ground as Raditz cracked his neck. "I told you Frieza. I'm harder to put down than you might think."
And so ends Vegeta! But don't worry guys, if you like Vegeta you'll like this. Yes, I've murdered Vegeta. No, he's not coming back. But I've got one better for you! I'm making a spin off within the next week called Prince of Hell. It's gonna follow Vegeta in Hell after what just happened. He's gonna eventually come back into this story around the Cell Saga with some cameos and stuff. But for right now, his story will be in that spin-off. He's going to train with Bardock and the other Saiyans. King Vegeta is gonna be there and like the title says, Vegeta's gonna be the Prince of Hell basically. So watch out for that!
Power Levels
Frieza: (Second Form) 1,021,000 (Third Form) 2,856,800
Vegeta: (Normal) 550,000 (Post-Zenkai) 2,000,000
Piccolo: (Normal) 1,094,100 (Firing Attack) 1,500,100
Yamcha: (Injured) 50,000
Gohan: (Normal) 15,500 (Rage Mode) 20,000
Q&A
Q: I hope Piccolo can wipe the floor with Frieza like in the anime.
A: He would've with the Special Beam Cannon had it not been for Frieza's survival factor.
Q: I have to say, this story is quite unique and intriguing. The whole Raditz x Bulma thing is sure to shake up the characters for the Andriod/Cell sagas. Seeing Turles' impact on them will be interesting too. I'm also curious as to Vegeta's role, or possibly lack there of. Stories in which Raditz survive that I have read (Break Through the Limit, and Guardian) tend to not include him in the andriod conflicts. I love it when a story has me asking this many questions haha, keep it up Maro! C:
A: A lot of changes come in the Android/Cell sagas. Like a lot! One of them even starts in the Garlic Jr. saga. Yes, I'm doing that XD It's only two chapters. But Vegeta will be involved in the android conflict in a surprising way. Raditz is mainly gonna take his role, but Vegeta will have a major part. Even though he's dead. And Turles will also have a major impact on the characters in the Android/Cell sagas. We're actually gonna get quite a look into his mind.
Q: (From ZECHSEFFECT) yes! show us more RADITZ X BULMA flashbacks and all oh please add our names I'd like to see my fellow readers have to say also if goku and raditz ect. don't train together how will there relationships develop?
A: I only added your name, since no one else really seemed to give me an answer on it. But Goku and Raditz's relationship is gonna kinda show in later chapters. It's not gonna be developed all that much until the Buu Saga. Because it's then that the two brothers will truly have to work together. I've kinda felt the need to flesh out Raditz's relationships with the other fighters first.
Q: im glad to be here, and i wanted to go that way because it was different and to be honest it wasnt much different that bulma and vegeta getting together, they argued with each other and even trunks said that it was more about a certain passion than anything else, of course we see vegeta change in the series but i still like it, i always wondered what it would be like for raditz to have been a z-fighter and im liking it so far. by the way i hope you make radits go super saiyan 3 eventually, that would be hilarious
A: I'm glad you like the route I'm going, and Raditz SSJ3? I don't know about that...I had other plans for Super Saiyan 3 actually.
Q: Excellent! (From Chapter 23)
A: Glad you liked the chapter.
Q: It's been a while since I've commented I see you have robbed Yamcha of Bulma but I'll let that slide, Out of Curiosity will we ever get some more Charcter Development from Yamcha Or Radiz and will Krillin get the "Yamcha Treatment" such as getting wrecked by Gero and becoming a useless character in the rest of the story.
A: So I'll just say this, Yamcha gets the girl. Not the girl you expect. But he gets the girl. Krillin will have a sort of backseat ride in the Cell/Androids saga and you'll realize why when the time comes. Yamcha and Tien get their moments. Some characters will have major parts while some will have minor parts that still do a lot. Oh, and it ain't Krillin getting wrecked by Gero. Wait until you see who does get their butt kicked by the androids.