Hello everyone.
Thank you all so much for reading up until this point. I'm so incredily thankful for all of you, both the ones who left mesages of support and of criticism.
I want to bring light to the negative reviews for a second and thank you especially. I need constructive criticism, that much is obvious. This work isn't great by any means and I regret writing some parts the way I did. A few reviews I received drew my attention to parts of the story that could've been improved if the occurences of the story were altered slightly. Seeing them opened my eyes to where I fucked up. I won't be writing any more of this story, this is the end, and I won't be going back and changing anything, however the comments have made me more conscious of what readers like and dislike, and what to avoid in my next story. I appreciate it.
Now, a question that I'm sure many of you had been wondering; why did Com have to die? Well, simply because I didn't want a happy ending. You see so many damn happy endings where everything ends up fine in the end and the main characters live happily ever after and butterflies and rainbows. I didn't want a happy ending because it was so predictable as well. I'm fed up of that kind of story. There needs to be some kind of scar on every character that's directly involved with a story or the events may as well have not happened at all. That's why Com died. To those of you who didn't like it, I'm sorry but it was something I felt had to happen.
Either way, that's about all I can say. I'll still be visiting this place, checking everything out, finding any criticism possible and reading all the reviews that come in. If you're able to spread this story in any way possible, it would be ridiculously appreciated.
That's all. Thanks for reading.
Regards,
ComradeTrick