I'm back! Sorry about the wait. I was on special assignment. I also kind of lost my place mid chapter and had to get back into it. Hope you still reading along and didn't give up figuring I abandoned the story or died. Hopefully we don't have another 3 week break between chapters again.
Anyways your anxious to see what happens next. On to it. See you at the notes.
The Frozen and Pierced Heart
Chapter 25
Erik helped Elsa down below decks to her room. She managed to avoid throwing up anymore but she was still feeling quite seasick. Erik with the help of Mallory gently placed Elsa on her bed. Elsa looked at him. "I'm so sorry. I'm so embarrassed."
"Think nothing of it your majesty." Erik smiled gently. "It can happen to anyone. Don't worry you'll get used to the sea." He turned back toward Mallory. "Take good care of her. Let me know if you need anything."
He left the room letting Elsa get some rest and walked to his room. Already inside where the three aids. Fredrick was already getting to work and trying to ignore Jeffry who was complaining about the room already. Anders lay on his bed moaning in agony still very sick. Erik walked over and knelt down next to him. "Well you stopped throwing up at least."
Anders groaned. "Only because there is nothing left. Do me a favor and please kill me."
Erik smirked. "Well if you insist. But how about you hang on for a little while longer? Then we can talk about putting you out of your misery if you're not feeling better."
Jeffery looked over and frowned. "Wonderful, besides this tiny room I have to share with three others, one of them is ill. Is there any way this trip could become more unbearable?"
Erik glared over at him. "You know, if the room isn't to your liking then maybe you can switch with one of the sailors?"
Jeffery glared at him. "That's more where you belong. Why don't you do us all a favor and go sleep with them?"
Erik looked over a piece of paper while answering back. "Because the queen requested I stay close by. What's your excuse?"
Jeffery huffed and growled. Erik smirked. "Let me know if you start getting sea sick as well. I can always put you out of your misery is needed."
Fredrick had to suppress a laugh.
The rest of the day passed without incident. The next day as well. The wind had died down some and the waves lessened. Elsa got her bearings more. She and her delegation spent most of the time in a small conference room that had been built into the ship going over final preparations for the summit. On its face it seemed rather simple. All the involved nations had historically been friends with Arendelle. They were all generally close as well. A few of these nations Elsa had not dealt with yet but hoped the good history between their kingdoms would make everything go smoothly.
Elsa was also becoming more accustomed to boat travel. There was still fear inside her, but so far the weather had been cooperative. However if the ship hit a wave that was slightly bigger than normal or the wind gusted her heart would jump and painful memories of her parents would be dragged up from the depths of her mind.
She had something to give her a little extra help though. Just before she had departed a letter had come from Prince Alexander. In her last letter to him she had mentioned she was taking this trip and some of the fears she had about it. He wrote back assuring her it would all be fine. She sat in her quarters and read his letter again. Slowly going over the most comforting part.
... I understand your misgivings and fear about sailing. Let me assure you though I do it frequently and it is usually very safe. In fact I am penning this letter from my cabin. Had I decided to never set foot aboard a ship then we would have never met and would not be exchanging our delightful correspondence. Now we never have absolute certainty in life. We face risk all the time, especially in our positions. Let me gently remind you that you faced and conquered those risks on your coronation. If you had not been willing to risk anything then you may as well stay locked away behind your door. I know you don't want that. You are too strong. So make the most of this experience. In my travels I have met many wonderful people. Including the one this letter is written to. Yes there have been a few scary moments. And yes, my mother still frets every time I get on one of these ships. The truth is however, I wouldn't trade everything I have experienced or accomplished for my kingdom for anything…
Elsa smiled as she read. He was right of course. This trip was for the good of her kingdom and its allies. He was also right that if she wanted absolute certainty about everything she should have just stayed in seclusion.
She looked out the porthole of her room to watch the sunset over the sea. It was a spectacular view. She smiled and decided to go up on deck. She wondered briefly if she should get Erik but decided to let him be. She was on a ship surrounded by her own naval and marine personal. She basically had some form of a guard wherever she went. She could let him have a break.
As she neared the stairs to go up the ship she heard something she had not heard while on board yet. At first a bell rang out then she heard the captain yell from the deck. "General quarters! General quarters! All hands to battle stations!"
The ship seemed to explode into activity. The crew and marines all rushed out and to their positions. Despite her surprise Elsa had to marvel at the efficiency they all got to their positions and ready even in the heat of the moment. In the back of her mind she wished politics would work like this. Everyone moving in order even amid chaos. All with one goal in mind.
She was snapped out of her thoughts when two marines ran up to her. "Your majesty. Come with us we need to get you to safety." One said and she nodded and followed them. The escorted her past marines running the other way muskets in hand as they ran to the deck. Soon Erik made his way to her. He nodded to the marines.
"I got her. Report to your posts." He said simply. The marines ran to join the others on deck as Erik escorted Elsa to a room built into the interior of the ship. I was away from the sides and had some heavy looking walls. "In here your majesty." Erik said making sure she was secure.
The rest of the guards made their way to them. Once they were all there Erik said. "I'm going topside to have a look. Stay with the queen. Keep her covered. And make sure you have a clear path to a lifeboat if needed. Understood?"
"Yes sir!" His men responded. He then turned and sprinted to the deck. Once topside he found the captain. While a navy captain outranked and army captain like Erik he could pull rank in any situation that involved Elsa's safety.
"Captain, what is the situation?" he said as he pulled out his field glasses and scanned the horizon.
The ship's captain was doing the same thing though his telescope. "Black sails spotted of starboard. Looks like a pirate vessel."
Erik found it. It was still some distance away. "Is that the Blood Sea?" Erik asked looking at the ships markers.
"Yes." Captain Tyson responded. "Looks like Captain Jasper and his pirate thugs are hunting these waters."
"Even run into him before?" Erik asked
"Yes." Tyson growled. "Heavily damaged my ship. Killed about half my crew in the engagement. Barley managed to drive him off. Nearly cost me my command. I would love to go out and blow him to kingdom come."
"I don't blame you." Said Erik. "However our priority is the safety of the queen. We can't risk her in an engagement we can avoid." He continued to watch the pirate hip which was shadowing them still as if sniffing them out. "If he were to be bold enough to try to attack us how would we fair against his ship?"
"We have them outclassed." Tyson said. "However they would be able inflict some serious damage and I could guarantee casualties. However, our two escorts should keep him from trying anything."
They continued to watch as the pirate ship continued to shadow their movements. "Should we send one of the escorts out to engage?" Tyson asked.
Erik considered this a moment then replied. "Tempting but no. It is unlikely, but I would had to have one of our escorts drawn away only to be attacked by another force."
The pirate ship seemed to edge a little closer. Erik spoke. "Captain I don't want him taking any pot shots and risk a lucky hit. If he enters firing range let him have it."
"Understood. In fact I suggest we fire a couple warning shots to let hm know we mean business. Right now he is taunting us."
Erik nodded and Captain Tyson gave the order. "Guns number three and seventeen fire!"
Below deck Elsa sat with the other guards. She looked at Lieutenant Amlore and asked. "What is going on?"
"Just a precaution your majesty." He assured her. "Black sails were spotted and it was thought best to get to battle stations just in case. But a pirate is unlikely to try to attack three heavily armed ships.
They all waited in silence for a few minutes. Then the sound of two cannons going off was heard causing them all to jump. "I thought you said they wouldn't attack!" Elsa said.
Amlore hesitated and listened before answering. "It was just two guns. Probably just trying to scare them off."
Then from the distance they heard three more cannons sound off.
Erik watched as flashes flared out from the hull of the pirate ship. Their shells landed well short of the Winter though. Erik looked at Tyson. "He's rather defiant isn't he?"
"Yes he is. He telling us he's not afraid." Tyson responded grimly. He thought for a minute then suggested. "Let's give his something to be afraid of. I recommend we send the Endeavor out no more than a mile. Far enough to close weapons range but not too far. If indeed he is baiting a trap the Endeavor will be back in weapons rage of any other threat soon. He will have to retreat or be looking down the barrel of a far superior ship."
Erik nodded. "Do it."
Tyson gave the order and a crewmen used a lantern with opening and closing flaps to signal the Endeavor. It worked. The pirate ship retreated away and no other signs of trouble were seen.
The rest of the voyage went without incident. Two days later in the midmorning they found themselves looking at the shores of Glenhaven. No one on board was happier to see the site of shore more than Elsa. With the exception of Anders who was still horribly sea sick. Elsa walked out to the bow of the ship and saw a greeting awaiting her. She looked at Erik who was standing beside her. "Tell me captain. You have travelled before. What should I expect for a greeting?" She asked feeling a little nervous.
Erik smiled just a little. "It would be best if you don't get the greetings I usually got."
Elsa looked questioningly at him. "What do you mean?"
Erik looked out at the approaching dock. "We were usually greeted by enemy fire." He stated simply. "Or best case by frightened as desperate people counting on us for liberation."
"Oh." Elsa said. She forgot at times that despite being together the last few years they both had very different upbringings. "Sorry, I didn't mean to bring up painful memories."
"It's quite alright your majesty." He gave her a reassuring smile. "It's the life I chose."
As they neared the dock Elsa could make out a welcoming committee. Many of the citizens where gathered in the streets curious to see the snow queen. AS the ship docked the delegation prepared to go ashore. When the gangplank was lowed Elsa took a deep breath and walked down trying to look regal and composed but have a friendly air about her as well. When she reached the shore she was greeted by the king of Glenhaven.
"Queen Elsa!" King Agnue exclaimed. "An honor to meet you. Thank you so much for coming."
"The pleasure is all mine." Elsa smiled a little. "Thank you for your hospitality."
The royals introduced their delegations then king Agnue led them to some coaches. "I have transportation to the palace here. I hope you don't mind an open coach. The people are so excited to see you."
"That will be fine." Elsa smiled a nodded as she got in a coach with the king.
"Most of the other delegates have arrived already. Still two more to come. Been taking this route many times greeting everyone." Agnue said.
"Well I appreciate you coming down here to greet me personally. Although it would have been perfectly fine to meet you at the castle. I understand you are busy." Elsa said as she sat down next to him.
"Think nothing of it." Agnue smiled. "I rather enjoy greeting everyone. The whole thing has kind of turned into a continuous parade."
Elsa could see that. The people lined the streets and there was even a band playing. She had been nervous about the reception but so far the people of Glenhaven seemed very friendly to her.
As the political delegations were all being introduced Erik was greeted by the captain of King Agnue's guard. "Captain, I have some spare horses for you and some of your men. Feel free to follow close to your queen's coach. When you get settled I would like to go over some things with you."
"I understand. Thank you." Erik nodded and mounted the horse and got along side of the royal coach along with two of his men.
As the procession started to the palace Elsa noticed the people waving to her and cheering. She smiled a little awkwardly and waved back. She was not used to this type of exposure. But it was going better then he initially thought. The entire trip she had nightmares about and crowd staring angrily at her. As they proceeded she heard several children in the crowd shout out. "Do the magic!"
She considered maybe doing a small display but thought better of it. Who knew how they would react to magic happening right in front of them.
When they arrived at the palace and disembarked from their coached palace staff came to take their belongings. The Agnue turned to Elsa. "Go ahead in get settled in your majesty. You are invited to dinner tonight. There will be a welcoming ball tomorrow night. Until then feel free to rest from your journey or explore. If you need anything don't hesitate to ask." He smiled warmly.
"Thank you your majesty." Elsa smiled and bowed and looked up at the palace. It was very nice. As she walked inside she admired the design and decor. It was different then her home but she found it intriguing. She had of course seen foreign art and architecture in books but this was the first time in person. Maybe this was one of the best things for her. Exposure to other cultures and peoples in person.
She was shown to her room by some of the palace staff. She thanked them and entered her guest room. She found it rather elaborate. Even more so then her own room back home. Granted she never had much time for decoration while she was in isolation. This room was almost too much. However she did enjoy the view. She walked out onto the balcony and admired the view she had of the kingdom and the sea. As she looked out she reflected on where she was. Not just physically but personally. A year ago the idea of being in another kingdom would have never crossed her mind. The mere suggestion would have sent her into a massive panic attack and freeze everything in her room. Even a few months ago when it was first told to her that should would need to leave Arendelle she had an episode. Yet, here she was. Standing on a balcony out in the open so far from home. If she was completely honest with herself she was still nervous about the whole ordeal. Yet the sky remained clear and the weather warm. No snow storm clouds forming or ice creeping across the room. Perhaps she could really do this. Control her powers and fears completely one day. What possibilities would that open up for her?
Back home in Arendelle a fire raged in the castle. Fortunately is was contained to the fireplace. Well for the most part anyways. The rug in front of the fireplace was slightly singed. Standing there looking at it was Anna and Kristoff.
"See I told you I could do it!" Anna said cheerily as she looked at her handiwork.
Kristoff put a now empty pitcher back on the mantle. "Yea. The idea though is to keep it contained. Good thing that pitcher of water was available." He shook his head.
"Oh it was my first time lighting a fire. It seems like such a simple thing to do. Might as well learn myself." Anna said
"I love your enthusiasm." Kristoff smiled. "But still you got to be careful. Even simple things can get out of hand."
"Oh please. When have I ever let anything get out of hand?" Anna asked indignantly.
Kristoff started counting off things on his fingers. "Let's see. There was lighting my blanket roll on fire and nearly setting me on fire with it. Attempting to climb a mountain by yourself. Upsetting a giant snow monster by throwing a snowball at it. Leaping off a cliff before anyone was ready. Running off on your own to find your sister with no help whatsoever…."
"That all worked out!" Anna protested.
"…dragging me into a pole face first. Attempted to compete in a wild wagon race…"
"You competed!"
"…The incident with the fireworks. The dog you were sure was just being playful. Your insistence on trying to get the guards to let you try the shooting range. The mishap at the merchants stand…"
"Alright, alright!" Anna threw her hands up in the air. "So I get a little carried away at times. But hey, at least I'm not boring."
"No you're certainly not." Kristoff smiled as he sat on the sofa and Anna sat with him cuddling up to him as they enjoyed the fire.
"You know if I hadn't gone off on that crazy journey to find Elsa this amazing moment probably wouldn't be happening." She smiled up at him.
Kristoff grinned as he got lost in Anna's eyes. "Your right. And your boldness and sense of loyalty are some of the things I admire most about you."
Anna blushed a little. "That really sweet of you."
They sat there awhile longer. Kristoff still admiring how Anna's face looked illuminated by the fire. "Anna?"
"Yes?" She looked back up at him.
"I love you."
Anna was shocked. They had been together for a while now but had never actually said the words. After the whole ordeal with Hans Anna wanted to be careful. Kristoff was different though. He was kind, gentle, caring, despite the sometimes rough mountain man exterior. She realized she cared deeply about him as well. She couldn't imagine her life without him. She gazed back into his face as he looked at her wondering what her response would be.
"I love you too Kristoff."
The next day in Glendale Elsa spent exploring the palace and becoming familiar with the treaty process. She spent some time meeting with other visiting officials before retreating to a room with her assistants to go over some preparation before the ball that night. Erik stood outside the door with his squad when one of the palace guard came up. "Captain Slovak. Praetor Kinsey requests your presence."
"Very well." Erik said. He turned to his squad. "Keep an eye on things while I am away."
Erik did not like to leave Elsa's side. But he couldn't be everywhere at once. There were things that needed his attention that took him from her presence at times. That's why he created his squad. If something was to happen to him he could trust these men to carry out his duties to protect her.
As he approached the office of the captain of the guard he noticed the guards of the other visiting royals there. Praetor Kinsey the captain of the Glenhaven guard stood waiting. "Ah, Captain Slovak. We can begin now."
The personal guards all greeted each other. Erik had seen a couple before in Arendelle but had never really spoken to them. The meeting was pretty straight forward. Just a briefing on the security of the palace and what was happening during the ball and negotiations.
When the briefing was over Erik made to go back to Elsa but Kinsey stopped him. "Captain would you walk with me for a bit?"
"Sure." Erik said and walked beside him as they walked the hall.
"If you don't mind me asking, what's it like guarding the snow queen?" Kinsey asked.
Erik thought for a moment. "Well it does make my life interesting."
Kinsey laughed a little. "I bet. I have heard the stories." He looked around and lowered his voice. "I need to warn you about something captain."
"What's that praetor?" Erik asked, feeling concerned.
Kinsey made sure no one was in ear shot. "I have been traveling widely since the coronation of your Queen Elsa. Word has spread quickly about her powers. The story of those events are spreading across the globe."
"I figured as much." Erik answered
"I want to warn you. You have friends in Glenhaven and other places. But there are places were the snow queen is reviled and feared. I have heard talk about plots to eliminate her before she becomes a threat. I have heard the stories about you as well. They will not hesitate to kill you as well. I know you have stopped attempts against her life. You must be prepared for more. I don't know when or how but keep your head on a swivel."
Erik nodded. "I appreciate the warning. I have figured as much."
Kinsey continued. "If I ever hear any specific plans I will warn you. Glenhaven is your ally. Unfortunately many out there are ruled by fear and misunderstanding."
The two continued to walk when Kinsey brought up something else. "I believe there is something else you should be aware of. There is another guest coming to the negotiation. They are a recent addition and mostly added for trade not political reasons."
"I see." Said Erik. "Good to know. However, I have no part in the negotiations themselves. I am simply here for Queen Elsa's protection. It would be best to bring this up with her or one of the staff involved in the proceedings."
"Yes under normal circumstances I would agree. However, this particular guest you are familiar with. And from what I have heard relations between him and Arendelle are not the best."
Concern was immediately etched on Erik's face. He could think of two people off the top of his head that Kinsey could mean. Neither of them was appealing to run into again. "Who are you talking about?"
His own question was answered for him. At that moment a trio of men came around the corner. Two taller strong men dressed in right red uniforms flanked a shorter man with a bushy white moustache and glasses. Erik's hand instinctively griped the handle of his sword as he recognized the man.
The Duke of Wesseltons's eyes grew wide when he saw Erik and pointed. "You!" He turned to his men. "I want that man arrested! Use whatever force is necessary. He murdered my men in Arendelle."
The men both drew their swords and advanced. Erik drew his own and stood his ground. If he had to take out two more of Wesselton's thugs so be it. And if something unfortunate happened to the duke in the process. Well, stuff happens.
Before anything could happen though Kinsey and several of his men got between them. "Gentlemen!" He said sternly. "Captain Slovak is part of an invited Arendelle delegation. He is a guest of the crown. You will take no action against him."
"He is a murderer! He should be punished for his crimes against Wesselton!" The duke said angrily.
"Then you will have to take it up with Arendelle." Kinsey said. "Glenhaven will not take part in such matters."
The duke stared at Erik. "This is not over. Mark my words both you and your witch of a queen will pay for your crimes!" He then turned and stormed off with his men.
Kinsey turned back toward Erik who waited to put his sword away until the duke was out of site. "What was that about?"
Erik keep glaring daggers down the hall but spoke. "After the coronation the duke sent his men with a search party. He denies it but orders were given to kill Queen Elsa. They attempted but failed. They were taken into custody up on the north mountain. However on the journey back down they tried to escape. Since they were a direct threat to her majesty I was forced to…deal with them." He said somewhat coldly going over his rehearsed story.
"I understand." Said Kinsey. "I would recommend you not wander alone that often. Wesselton is known for being crafty and underhanded. I don't want to deal with the queen of Arendelle's guard being kidnapped on our soil to be secretly extradited back to Wesselton."
"Don't worry I won't let them get their filthy hands on me." Erik said. "I had better get back to the queen. Thank you again for your warning."
Erik proceeded back down the hall but took another route. Instead of going back to Elsa he stealthy followed the Duke of Wesselton and his men. He kept out of sight looking for an opportune moment. His hand gripping his pistol. He needed a place where he could get a clean shot with no one around. He saw his opportunity. The duke was walking down another corridor that was rather empty. Erik had been in this area already. He raced ahead and waited by the corner listening for footsteps. The duke would walk casually down this hall not expecting anyone to come around this corner. Erik drew his pistol and waited. When he got close enough he would kill the duke and then see what would need to be done about his men. Hopefully he could get away without involving them. If not he was confident he could handle them. Even if he couldn't his main target would be eliminated.
As he waited his conscience began to eat at him a little. Was this the right thing? Of course it was. The duke was a threat to Elsa. He practically admitted it just minutes before. Between to eliminate him now then let him plan something dubious.
Erik knew he would be unlikely to get away with this. But he had always been prepared to sacrifice himself for Elsa.
Elsa. How would she react to this? She had witnessed him kill before. But always in defense. She knew nothing about the duke's men or Samuels. It would break her heart. There would be no hiding this. He could actually see her disappointed face when she found out about what he was about to do. What would she be forced to do with him?
Then of course this was different then the duke's men or Samuels. They had represented a clear and current threat. The duke was not currently a threat. He could become one sure, but not at this moment. He was also a noble of a sovereign nation. If Erik killed him here and now who knows what the repercussions would be for Arendelle and for Elsa.
He shook his head to clear it. None of that mattered his main duty was to protect the queen. Sometimes you had to get your hands dirty. He tried to focus on his objective, but all he could see was Elsa's piercing blue eyes staring right through him.
No. He put his pistol back in it holster. He was no assassin. He had done some damn distasteful things to protect Elsa in the past. Probably would again in the future. But some lines he could not cross. Even if killing the duke might protect Elsa in the short or long term the fall out could be worse. He quickly disappeared and proceeded back to the Arendelle delegation.
When he arrived back he found Elsa just wrapping up the meeting with the delegation. He entered the room and bowed. "Forgive the intrusion your majesty but I have just found out some information that could affect the negotiations."
Elsa looked at him a little confused. Erik had never inserted himself into official business before. Yet she trusted him and motioned for him to proceed.
Erik looked at her and said. "The duke of Wesselton is here representing trade interests in the negotiations."
Everyone at the table looked shocked. Fredrick spoke first. "Captain are you sure about this?"
"I am my lord. I just saw the Duke of Wesselton myself a matter of minutes ago." Erik said calmly.
A groan filled the room. "Did you, um, remain diplomatic?" Fredrick asked slightly concerned.
Erik thought for a moment how to phrase of the near scuffle went. "He was less than happy to see me my lord."
Fredrick wanted to know more. "And by that you mean…"
Erik sighed. Might as well come out with it. "He tried to have me arrested on the spot."
This time Elsa spoke. "Why on earth would he do that?!" She asked her voice getting slightly shrill.
"He blames me for the death of his men in Arendelle. He is of course right. You all probably know that. But they were attempting to kill you your majesty. He of course denies that." Erik answered
The ambassador spoke next. "It's alright. They have no polital stake in the treaty. They are just here to make profit. We will just have to make sure we are prepared for any trickery they try to throw our way."
Elsa stood and addressed her delegation. "We will be prepared. Now we all have a ball to get ready for. Lets go in with our heads held high. Let's show Weaseltown…I mean Wesselton..." She smirked a little and so did many of her staff. "…That they are not going to intimidate us. We are prepared for whatever they want to throw our way."
"Here Here!" Said Fredrick.
The staff gathered their things an went to get ready for the ball. Elsa stayed behind and looked out the window. Erik stayed as well and stood behind her. "Your majesty, are you alright."
Elsa just sighed. "I thought everything was going fine. Now this happens. The duke is going to do everything he can to discredit me during these negotiations. All I wanted was for things to go simply and well like they were supposed to." She confessed.
Erik took a step closer. "And everything will be fine. It may not be simple anymore, but it rarely is. Remember the duke is afraid of you. Don't let it be the other way around. Think of this as a chance to show the other nations present what you can do in the face of adversity. You may have not planned on the duke being here. But maybe he is giving you an opportunity you would not have had without him."
Elsa stared out over the landscape. Maybe Erik was right. Maybe after all this was over she would be thanking the duke for helping her build her credibility as a ruler. However there were two sides to every coin. If she failed to stand up to him she would look weak and Arendelle could suffer the consequences. Either way these negotiations had far more riding on them then she first expected. It was time to see if she was up to the task.
End Chapter 25
Hope you enjoyed chapter 25. You all have been begging for romance so I tossed some in there for you. What's that? oh you wanted something to do with Elsa. picky picky picky. I'm going to make you wait at least one more chapter for that. Keep reading to see if anything develops. But hey I threw you a bone with Anna and Kristoff. Hope you enjoyed that part.
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