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Summary- Lust on Royai
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He killed me; I can't believe he actually managed to kill me. A mere human, a man, was able to bring me to my knees and kill me. I just don't understand it. Was that woman really so important that he was able to find the power to be able to kill me, just because I was about to kill her? Impossible, humans, and especially men, are far too selfish. But still he killed me.
I wonder what is it like to love someone so much that you would die for them. That woman of his, she was willing to die just because she thought he was dead. Is that love? If that is love then I'm glad I never had to deal with it. It's such a useless emotion. What is the point in loving someone else, all it ever leads to is pain? Just look at what happened to Hughes, he got killed because Envy took on the face of the woman he loved. All love ever got him was dead. And love almost killed Mustang's woman, love almost killed Mustang himself. And Jean almost got himself killed in his pursuit of love. Yes, all love ever brings is pain and suffering. Why would anyone ever want to feel something so debilitating as love?
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A/N: I know I got a little off track here, but it's just what came out. Sorry if it's not what you were expecting, but it's what I got. I do hope that you did manage to find some enjoyment of it though. I don't have a whole lot else to say today, other than reviews need to seriously pick up if you want to make 200 by the end of this group. If you've never reviewed before, I am counting total reviews, so you can go back and review for older chapters and they will still count towards the challenge. I hope to hear from a lot more of you soon.
Review Responses:
Akamaruwolf323- Yes, is was short, I really did try to make it longer but nothing seemed to work unfortunately. I'm starting to work on Pride right now, though Wrath was last chapter so I'm not sure where that part came from. I do plan to continue, and I do hope you will continue to review.
SaturnXK- I never said that the sentence was bad, but it was amusing. I'm am happy that, despite the length, you found the chapter enjoyable. I think all things considered I am very proud of how this chapter came out, and it's always nice to hear other people saw that it's good too. Thank you for reviewing and I look forward to your thought on this chapter.
InsertDecentNameHere- I do try. I'm glad you think I did so well. I probably could have mentioned something like that, but I really don't see where it would have fit, except maybe in some of the earlier chapters. Oh, well I look forward to hearing from you again.
EyeglassesMun- I'm glad you liked it. This chapter, despite the length issues, was probably one of the easiest to write, because I feel that Envy is so easy to see through. It's like you said, he talks a lot, but doesn't really say anything. I hope you enjoy the rest as much as you seem to have enjoyed this one. I look forward to hearing from you in the future.
Okay, so that's all the reviews, again I'm slightly disappointed in the number. We are currently at 143 and we're looking for 200 and there is only 4, maybe 5 chapters left in this group. I hope to hear from a lot more on you next time. Also I'm posting a new poll so go and vote. Later all.