Llamas Eviscerate 'jO Bekke at HUgwRts'

by Angelus Nox

Here is our first fan fiction commentary! Join us as we read through a story riddled with plot holes, total character personality derailment, and a Mary Sue main character who can't seem to remember her own name. Will we, along with our editing llama, be able to tear the story apart?

25. Chapter 25

AN: so k, lusers/ Dis is MI story,

And for that, we are glad. I do not want the rights to this terrible work.

I dint compee any1

What? I honestly don't know what she's trying to say here.

, u northurnurs obvusly dnot get dis. Il hav 2 tell u agin. Alrtie STOP FLAMAIING!1111111h111

Who's Alrtie? Keep flaming!

Chapter 25: Donled nd I

What happened to Donald? You ditched him for Donled? Ouch.

I kissed him bak, but im a bedder kissr anyway,

Dude, you're eleven. ELEVEN!

I was gthinkin about skoolwork and that I waz goin 2 hamlets after schull 2day. Im glad we get 2 go 2 Hamlets.

I don't know about you, but I keep getting this feeling like Hamlets is this restaurant that she keeps mentioning over and over. Too much SSB: MFG. * shudder of extreme horror*

Hopfully data idiot boy trever dosent try to come gwith us!11 he is sooooooo noying.

So I was kissin donald and den all of a suden!... … ….. ….. ….. …. …. …. ….. ….. ….. …. . … ..

Stop with the terrible suspense! Really!

Hamlet caam up!111111111111

"Wat iz it?" I esked suspiculy.

Dude, you were waiting to go to his house? Why are you suspicious now?

"Kwirrel haz ben Found brakeing into da CHAmber oF secrets!111111111111111111111111

Oh no. Kwirrel.

Such horror. Much scream. Very gasp.

Wow.