CABRALFAN27 : A few things wrong with this fic. Rythian should've been the one to take the wheel and be captain and ridge should've been where Notch was in this story. Also Rythian would stay above deck and help keep the ship afloat if it meant that if the ship sunk, Zoey died. Or maybe Rythian should've been Xephos instead.
Now this review has interested me ever since I checked up on my account a handful of hours ago. I decided that this needed more than an Author's Note, so I am taking the liberty of addressing this properly. Hope that you're happy, CABRALFAN27!
Anyway, my personal opinion on this review is as follows:
1. There is nothing WRONG with this fanfic. This is my one-shot bag, and therefore I can do whatever the bloody shizz-mongers I want. If you don't like this, don't read, or you can make your own one-shot bag.
2. Ridgedog is the most powerful member out of the Yogscast IN MY HEADCANON. Repeat: in my headcanon. Not yours, and that's okay, but honestly! This is MY one-shot bag, as I have said before. Notch is the creator of Minecraft, anyway, so obviously he'd take the place of "God". As for Rythian taking the wheel, I see no reason why he should. Sure, he's powerful as a mage, but he's said himself he's not exactly a seafarer, and if anyone WAS to take the wheel apart from Ridge, it would probably be Nilesy or Xephos (again, my opinion).
3. No-one has died. I am not a fan of needlessly killing off characters. Besides, this is a one-shot, not a fully-fledged fanfic. And anyway, Rythian's power alone wouldn't be enough to keep the ship afloat, not even his and the other magic-users' powers combined. Magic has its limits, and even Ridgedog couldn't keep a giant ship filled with people and a dinosaur and a half-human panda (more headcanons) afloat, regardless of magical aiding.
4. Rythian will never, NEVER, be Xephos. Lewis is the founder of the Yogscast, and therefore is the main character.
Of course, I can always make a Rythian-centred one-shot if you want. And as most of you know, I'm toying with the idea of a RiTZ fanfic: Enderborn.
If you'd like to post your opinion on the matter in a review - don't see why you would - go ahead! I'd be glad to see more perspectives on the matter.
