Hey my wonderful readers! 3 Finally my boyfriend finished the chapter, this is his own writing and to be honest I almost cried when I read it :) I know he put a lot of effort in it, so I reaaaaaally hope you are going to enjoy it. The chapter is also based on a real date, and it really was the one of the best day in my life. Anyway please enjoy, please review ;) Love ya all!

Four POV. (my boyfriends POV)

Class was not very interesting today and my mind was somewhere else entirely. I had been with Tris for 6 months today and I still had a hard time believing it. I knew I was not an easy person to be in a relationship with, but Tris had stuck with me. That is what I loved about her, as annoying, immature and stupid I could be she still seemed to like me for no other reason that it was me and I could be myself around her. I had been planning this day for weeks. I wanted to take her out for dinner and then go to an amusement park.

"Mr. Eaton, would you mind telling me the answer?"

And just like that I was ripped away from my pleasant thoughts about the girl I loved to look at an angry teacher who hated my guts, because I math wasn't my thing anymore. I looked at the blackboard and then I realized that I knew nothing about math anymore. The numbers made no sense to me and the only thing a recognized was the pi sign.

"I am not entirely sure how to do it, I am just gonna sit here and listen if you don't mind." I responded.

"You need to start listening." He snapped at me at turned back to the blackboard.

"Sure thing." I mumbled and starting drawing a stick-man war in my notebook.

After 6 long hours, school finally ended. The first thing I did when I walked out the door was grabbing my phone and texting Tris.

"Are you still up for tonight?" I asked

"You bet I am! Pick me up at 6?" She responded.

I don't get surprised much. I usually have to act surprised when I get presents or I see family members I have not seen in a while. I am not trying to sound cool or anything but that's just how I am. I do get happy on the inside, but I do have to actively show it on the outside. But when I saw Tris that day my jaw hit the floor. She came out to my car wearing tight jeans and I white top, but what really shined through was her smile and almost glowing eyes. I was standing at my car and I was just star struck.

"Hey, you got a little something here." She said and pointed at her chin. I just smiled and gave her a kiss. This day just got a whole lot better.

I drove her to a restaurant close to the amusement park I was going to take her to. I could not stop staring at her, all I could think of was that smile and how I was going to keep her happy. I tried to make her laugh by telling dumb jokes, and it worked to some degree. We both laughed and small-talked for most of the time.

"You know what?" she suddenly said with a more serious tone while she looked straight at me. " I want you to tell me something."

"Sure, what is it?" a said while wondering if I had done something wrong.

"Why is it that you are choosing to be with me? You could have gotten any girl but you chose me." She said with the same town that a police officer would use at an interrogation.

I just sighed. Every gosh darn time we were together she would come up with the same darn question. It is not like she was dumb or blind so how come she consistently down-graded herself?

"I told you this yesterday, I told you this when I picked you up, I am going to tell you this tonight and tomorrow and every day until you get it. You are fucking beautiful! You always have been and you always will be." I said with a firm tone. "And don't you ever think otherwise."

Tris is not the kind of girl who takes compliments very well, or rather; she is not the type of girl who takes any compliment. But this one made her smile a little. She did not let me see it cause she was hiding her mouth with a napkin but I could tell by the looks of her eyes; they had a glow to them when she was happy and she was now.

"Do you mean that?" she asked after a little while. I don't know if she did it on purpose but she asked me right as I took a huge bite of my burger, so the very romantic answer I had in mind turned into me nodding while looking like a chipmunk.

"You are the weirdest person I have ever known." She said chuckling.

"And you love me for it!" I responded as I raised my glass. She raised hers and we bumped them together.

"You know it!" she said.

We finished our food and went to the amusement park and to my discontent, I noticed some black clouds, I prayed that it was not going to start raining.

"What do you want to try first?" Tris asked me. I went to this park all the time when I was younger I went to this park a lot and I remembered something about this ride you could control yourself, you where put into a cart that looked like a yellow airplane attached to an arm that made it go in a loop. You could control the direction and the speed.

"Lets go try Dizplane." That was what it was called.

"No way!" She said immediately after she saw the ride. "There is no fucking way you are going to get me up in that thing! And besides, aren't you afraid of heights?"

"Yeah, but you barely notice it when you are going as fast as you are in that thing." I responded while realizing that I almost pissed myself the last time I tried Dizplane. "And I can control it my self! It is like driving really fast in a car."

After some going back and forward, I finally convinced her to go with me. We stood in line for just 20 minutes and every 30 seconds she asked; "Are you sure that you control the ride?" and I said yes every time. We finally got into the cart and the last thing she said to me before it began was "You better not make it go upside down!" and the first thing that happened was, say it with me, the fucking thing went upside down. Tris started screaming and I grasped the controller to the cart only to realize the thing controlled jack shit. In my confidence I forgot it but you had to ask the guy working at the ride to give the controls to you, if you didn't he would control it and he didn't do it in a very date-friendly way. First it went upside down, then backwards and the upside down backwards, all things that Tris told me she didn't want me to do.

"I am going to fucking murder you when I get out of here!" she screamed while I just sank down in my seat. Then came the good part. See, this ride could go at 100 m/h when it turns on the boosters, and that is so fast that you can't talk or scream. So the last 30 seconds of the ride I was scared that Tris would just leave me and the park and never speak to me again. But when we finally got down on the ground she was laughing. I sighed in relief and followed her to the exit.

"You are an idiot but I love you." She said with a huge grin.

"So you are not mad?" I asked.

"Nope." She responded with a smile.

The next couple of hours went by with us trying some more rides and me trying to win some stuff for my date and failing miserably. But as we was walking around and enjoying ourselves, the dark clouds grew bigger and darker. I felt the first drop on my shoulder and then another and then 10 more. It started pouring like crazy.

"Damn it!" I thought to myself, thinking that this day was ruined. But then something happened I will probably never forget. Tris grasped my hand and looked at me.

"I don't care if it is raining I am having the time of my life! And it is because of you!" she said. That was all I needed to forget all about the rain, my complete lack of hitting-the-plastic-duck-with-a-baseball-skills and just enjoy the rest of the evening with the girl I loved.

Tris POV. (This me again :))

I looked over at Tobias, and noticed that he was nervous. I do not need to be able to read minds to know that he was afraid that the whole day was ruined because of the rain, and I almost laughed at him for thinking like this. So I reached over and took his hand, he looked down at our intertwined fingers and then up at me. I gave his hand a little squeeze in comfort and smiled up at him.

"I don't care if it is raining I am having the time of my life! And it is because of you!" He smiled back at me, looking lost in thought.

And I know that it sounded totally cliché, but I don't give a damn about that. This day was nothing like the once you see in movies, where everything goes after the plan and the whole day goes by smoothly. But for me the day was perfect, he made an effort to make me feel special and no one ever did that before. So even though the weather was crappy and that I almost died in that ride, the day was absolutely amazing because I got to spend it with my favorite boy.
And hopefully there will be plenty of these days, because I can't seem to get enough of them.
Or enough of him.

So what do you think? He is pretty good at writing too right? :D Also I need to ask; Do you want this story to go on for a while more, or do you see it coming to an end soon ? :) Thanks for reading :)