Misleading Titles

by Evilkat23

HUMAN AU! Thanks to a project, Frederick, aka Firedrake, has to befriend and get to know a seventh grader for a month. At first his partner seems to be just a hardheaded kid, but, over time the high schooler starts to notice some questionable things from his partner. WARNINGS: Emotional Abuse as well as some physical abuse in some later chapters. NO PAIRINGS!

25. Chapter 25

Okay, so I'm going to put this out there plain as day. This story needs to stop where its at because there are way too many continuity errors for me to keep going. There are so many that I can't even count them. It's horrible, I know. Also because my writing skills have improved since I first wrote this story all the way in 2014 I feel like I NEED to rewrite it. Let me explain why:

My grammar is atrocious in it.

Firedrake's and Ben's relationship happened way too fast.

The physical abuse happened sooner than it should have.

24 chapters in and Sorrel has yet to properly meet Ben.

THE CONTINUITY ISN'T THERE!

So, this story needs to go on pause. I really don't know for how long, but I know that my other stories are most likely coming first.

I know it's not saying much (and seems kinda sleazy) but, if you guys want you could always read one of my other works, be it "The rewrite series" or "Twin Skeletons" I'm always looking forward to those stories getting read, and it might keep you guys busy until I can properly address this story. Just a thought for now.