Writers Comments
Well not much to say anymore…these chapters leave me speechless LOL Enjoy!!!
Discliamer: I do not own Naruto
Naruto shot awake, and looked around and saw Hinata lying next to him fast asleep. Naruto looked outside and saw that it was still about 2:00 in the morning. Naruto looked down at his legs and then his hands.
"What was that…it felt like a wave of…pain, suffering, and anger…I need to go check this out" Naruto got up slowly and got on his cloths and went outside and followed the strange feeling he was getting in the direction of the lake. "What is this…as I get closer it gets stronger and stronger" Naruto jumped from tree to tree until he reached the waters edge. "It was right here" Was all he had time to say as a borage of kunai and shuriken came flying toward him. He jumped out of the way and began running in the direction he saw the weapons come from. "Who did that and why did you do it" Naruto shouted into the forest until he got a response.
"My name is Sanjuro Hayashida…and I have been sent by my master to kill you…demon child" the voice said "And I will be leaving here with your head" the voice said again until a figure popped down from the forest and glared at Naruto with killer intent. "I am a Slayer Ninja and I will claim the bounty on your head, boy" The strange man in a black jump suit then flashed forward and punched Naruto right in the face and almost instantly performed a certain number of seals and shouted 'Water Style Water Dragon Jutsu' Naruto was hit by the Jutsu head on and sent Naruto tumbling straight through a tree and embedded into a large boulder. Naruto slowly tried to get up but then found himself being picked up by the man and then Naruto found himself staring into eyes that resembled Gaara's before Naruto changed him. "Hmm…I would of have thought that Kyuubi and his host would be more of a challenge but I guess weakness is all around us…isn't it" He then threw Naruto over the lake until Naruto caught himself on the water with his chakra. Naruto then started to tap into the red chakra and he charged the man with a Rasengan and slammed it straight into his chest and sent him through 6 trees before he finally stopped.
"How was that you freak" Naruto said with a proud look. The man jumped up and looked at Naruto with a smile.
"Not bad…I guess this may end up being a challenge after all" He then performed more seals and then he shouted 'Water Style Water Explosion Jutsu' a huge ball of water came from the lake and hit Naruto with it's full fury and Naruto used a Rasengan to cut through it like paper but he still took damage from the Jutsu. "Well I am impressed…there are not many people who can survive that Jutsu or destroy it for that matter…I will be sure to put that on your grave that is if I decide to get you one" He then did a small amount of hand signs and shouted 'Chakra Charge' and then the man disappeared and reappeared behind Naruto and gave him a kick to the head and Naruto turned into a log and kicked him in the legs and on his way down gave him another kick to the face and sent the man into the air Naruto followed and beat the man all the way until he hit the water and disappeared again.
"Where did you go…you bastard" Naruto shouted as a very thick fog rolled in and Naruto was suddenly hit by a borage of kicks and punches. Naruto flew left and was met by more kicks. He flew right and was met again by punches. After ten minutes of Naruto getting the shit kicked out of him the fog finally passed away and Naruto was bloody and bruised on the lake's bank.
"Well, well, well…so this is all the great container for Kyuubi has to offer…pitiful…you know…seeing as you should have no family I wont make you a grave…but on the off chance you do have friends and family…well…I guess I will just have to kill them and burn there bodies so they can join ya huh…now then to finish you off" He went through some long hand seals and then he began forming a black ball in his hand then in the other. He then took one last look at Naruto and shouted 'Double Soul Removal Jutsu' and threw the two balls of energy at Naruto, but before they made contact a blue light of chakra hit the man and sent him flying a good twenty feet into the lake.
"Naruto…are you ok" Kakashi said while checking his pulse "He is fine Hinata, he is just unconscious…come on we have a Slayer ninja to kill" Hinata and Kakashi both stood on the edge of the lake and watched as the water began to reseed back into itself. "What in gods name is he doing out there" Kakashi went wide eyed as the fog cleared some more and in the middle of the lake a ball of water and chakra the size of three house's was floating above the man.
"Now for your interruptions…I am going to kill all of you and then I will kill the demon…NOW DIE" he then threw the giant ball of water and chakra at Kakashi and Hinata.
"I can't stop this…Hinata move now" They jumped out of the way and on there way out the retrieved Naruto. "Come on we have to get back to the village…this ninja is using Jutsu that are almost Kage level…if we stay he will kill us…even I know when I am bested…but the sheer amount of chakra and power…it was unbelievable…WHAT"!!! They were being followed by about 20 water dragons; they all smashed into Hinata and Kakashi and knocked them to the ground. And then a huge barrier rose over them and it extended for about a mile or so in a large sphere shaped dome.
"You two are not going anywhere…and especially not with my prey…NOW WHEN I SAY DIE THAT MEANS DIE" He then threw a large chunk of earth at them, it was even bigger then the water ball. Kakashi just closed his eyes and as did Hinata and waited for the bone breaking force of the boulder to crush them, but it never came and when they looked up all they could see was Naruto with blood red chakra oozing from his body and three tails holding the rock in place. Naruto then threw the rock back at the man at supersonic speed and hit the man head on but the man just melted into a puddle of water and then in an instant they were both staring at each other, Killer intent matched with even more killer intent. The man smiled because Naruto was even with his power now and now the match would be fair.
"Nobody hurt my precious people…NOBODY" And as soon as that was said two more tails burst from his body and Naruto's eyes became blood red and even the white around his eyes was glowing blood red. Naruto then charged forward at the scared man and smashed a chakra fist into his stomach and kept pounding him in the stomach until the man was at least 10 feet in the ground. Naruto just smiled as the man made two black balls again and rammed them into Naruto, but they had no effect for Naruto's Chakra was already powerful enough to make small earthquakes with every step he took.
"HINATA STOP HIM…NOW…he is using way more chakra then needed…his max is three…he has five…if he grows anymore he will kill himself…"
"But how"!!!!
"Just touch him and I will do the rest now do it before the sixth tail emerges…GO NOW"!!!!
The man just smiled and began to chuckle and laugh at Naruto. Naruto was confused and angered and was about to kill him if it was not for the tails of chakra erupting from the man. "You're not the only one with demons inside you"!!!! The man then slammed four immense tails into Naruto and knocked him back a few feet, Naruto just jumped into the air and so did the man. The two Jinchuuriki's began an enormous battle of chakra tails. But because Naruto had one more then the man Naruto was winning. The man finally fell to the ground when Naruto hit him with a sharpened tail witch gashed the mans chest open almost spilling his organs, if it wasn't for his chakra healing him. The man just stared at Naruto and smiled. "I see that you have good control over your demon…good maybe next time we meet…we can really see who's is better…see ya kid" and with a flash the barrier was gone and the man along with it. Naruto just screamed and fell to the ground. Hinata ran over to him and with all her strength she pushed her hand through the chakra until her hand was on his back and as soon as her finger touched him the chakra tails began to reseed back into him until all that was left was Naruto and a large crater were he laid with Hinata on top of him. Naruto then fell unconscious and then it began to rain.
"KAKASHI…NARUTO NEEDS A DOCTOR…PLEASE HURRY" Hinata shouted as Kakashi ran over and sat next to them
"I know…we need to get him to Tsunade…before he gets any worse…I will…WHO IS THAT" Kakashi said looking over in the forest seeing two green figures.
"Hey Kakashi…need some help"!!! The figure said with a very confident voice
"Who is…that…wait…Gui…is that you" Kakashi shout toward the two figures. And in a flash the two figures were next to Kakashi
"Yes Kakashi…and we are here to help you…I will take Naruto to the hospital…while Lee takes care of you two" Gui then threw Naruto on his back and gave Kakashi a smile. "Lee…I want you to escort Kakashi and Hinata home…while I take Naruto to the hospital…" Gui was cut off by a voice
"I can make it on my own…I don't need a hospital…let me down" Naruto said to Gui
"But Naruto…I admire your strength and youth but you are badly injured"! Gui said with a surprised tone
"I don't care just let me go…I can walk fine" Naruto said as he coughed up some blood
"See…your worse then I thought…if I don't get moving…Lee might lose his sparing partner…now stop" Gui was cut off by Naruto jumping off his back.
"I can walk fine…just leave me alone…I will leave by myself" Naruto said as he started walking toward the forest
"Naruto wait…that Slayer ninja might still be out there…NARUTO" Kakashi shouted at Naruto but Naruto did not stop
"NARUTO-KUN" Hinata shouted to Naruto. And her voice did the trick of freezing Naruto in his tracks. "Why are you leaving…where are you going…" She was cut off by Naruto
"I don't know…something inside me is telling me to go…I don't know when I will be back…please this is hard enough as it is" Naruto said with a sad voice.
"B-but Naruto-kun…you can't leave me like this…please…PLEASE DON'T GO…" She shouted again
"I have to…it is killing me to do this but I have to…Hinata…I love you so much…but this is one thing I must do alone" Naruto said with his head down.
"TAKE ME WITH YOU…please I can't stand to be anywhere but by your side" She shouted as tears began to pour down her face and then Naruto turned around and flashed in front of her.
"I can't…you don't understand…you almost got killed…and if you ever got hurt because of me I would never be able to live with myself…so please I am asking you not as a friend or family, but as your boyfriend and love…please stay at the village and do not follow me" Naruto then leaned forward and kissed Hinata on the lips as her tears ran down her face, she then grabbed his head and brought him into a deeper more passionate kiss, she licked his lips begging him for entrance and he complied and opened his mouth and there tongues began rubbing on each other. Naruto finally pulled away and looked Hinata right I the eye. "I promise I will come back…all you need to do is wait for me…goodbye for now Hinata…my love" And with that she broke into tears again and Naruto gave her one last kiss goodbye and in a flash he was gone. Kakashi lifted Hinata up and put her arm over Lee's shoulder and let them walk in front of them while Gui and Kakashi looked at the poor Kunoichi.
"This is just like what happened in my book…in fact it is almost an exact copy of what happened…the sorrow and heart break she must be going through…Naruto better have a good reason for leaving her like this…other wise I will have to kill him" Kakashi then stopped Lee and took Hinata off his shoulder and looked her in the eyes and knew what she needed right now. "GO ahead and let it out" She then jumped forward and began crying her heart out as Kakashi hugged her. They sat there for ten minutes, until Hinata finally pulled herself off of Kakashi and said she would be fine. They walked the rest of the way back to the village not even stopping for camp. That night Hinata cried herself to sleep knowing that in the room next to hers, Naruto was not inside sleeping.
Naruto just kept running through the forest as tears left his eyes and stopped at a small clearing and made camp for the night. Naruto just stared up at the ceiling of his tent thinking about Hinata the whole night until he fell asleep himself.
Writers Comments
Hey every story has to have a sad moment…a moment like this one…now if you are wondering why I stopped the chapter previews…it was because I wanted these chapters to be a surprise after the next chapter I will start doing previews again. Man that chapter was sad I almost started crying and I wrote the thing.
