I typed the last chaper on my Nook, and I really suck at typing on it, so there are some errors, like when Dipper asked, "Mabel... I'm starting to think this is more than 's going on?" It was supposed to say, "Mabel... I'm starting to think this is more than Pacifica. What's going on?" I'm sure there's more but that's all I've noticed. Sorry! :3
Chapter 25
"Mabel! Mabel wake up! Mabel- come on... please!" a voice shouted. "Just give me a sign you're okay... anything!" Mabel knew it was her brother that was pleading. She tried to do something. She tried something as simple as opening her eyes. But they seemed plastered shut. She then tried to wiggle her fingers. She tried really hard. But she couldn't. It was so hard, so dizzying. A horrifying thought crossed her mind. Was she paralyzed? A vegetable forever... At the thought she started to cry. Or at least she tried. Evey tear that slipped from the corners of her eyes made her cheeks sting and burn. "Oh, Mabel- you're okay!" Dipper laughed, tears spilling from his own eyes. He hugged his sister close. "Just wait, okay? I'll get you to a hospital..." he whispered. Mabel heard him call an ambulance and five minutes later she heard it crashing down the slope. She heard paramedics talking urgently, but couldn't make out what they were saying. "Yeah, but the only movement I got were tears..." she heard Dipper explain. More muffled speaking and she was lifted onto a stretcher and into what she guessed was an ambulance. Dipper was there, too, luckily; she knew. She just knew. Before she fell into another stage of unconsciousness, she felt a huge gas mask set on her face...
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Mabel groggily opened her eyes. A sense of peace and tranquility overwhelmed her as she looked dreamily on the white hospital room; looked lovingly on her brother and Grunkle Stan as they cried out in despair as some sort of monitor stopped. But Mabel knew they'd be okay, after all, she was. And lastly she beamed on her own body, for if you looked past the deranged look about it, it really looked quite innocent. But she was relieved to leave that old body behind and all the troubles it held with it. She rose further and soon she could see her very own house in California. Mabel gave a shout of glee as she saw her parents. They were bent over in pain, but why on earth should they!? Mabel was so happy, so at ease. She was delighted to leave this old place, full of lying, pain, and cheating. Breathing was really hard. In fact, it was easier not breathing. And then there was the tunnel... oh the tunnel was so beautiful. She eagerly ran to the light at the end of it... it tugged at her heart more and more and more- until she was there. Light exploded at the end, and a shadow covered the light, a beautiful white shadow with wings and Mabel cried out in joy. There were her cousins below the winged beauty that had died in a fire. Her aunt who had died from a heart attack, and her great-grandparents other ancestors. With a squeal of delight she ran towards her most beloved grandmother, who had passed away a year ago. She called for her, and in a second her grandmother was by her side, holding her close. "I'm in paradise." Mabel whispered. When her grandmother spoke her voice was young and sweet and pure, and Mabel just wanted to stay in her arms forever.
"Mabel, my Mabel,"she said lovingly. It didn't really feel like she was actually speaking; it felt like a most wonderful feeling that she'd never felt before. "You have a beloved family who loves you, and needs you. It may feel like it, but it is not your time, my Mabel. Dipper has suicide thoughts from losing you. Your parents' world is ripped in half. Life isn't life to those whom you are loved without you. " Mabel did not want to go back to the place with war, and hate. She did not want to go back to Mel and the dark haired girl. Sorcha was her name. She remembered now. All of a sudden, she was standing in a cemetery. She'd been there before. Dark thunderclouds covered the sky and a procession was grieving under a tent with flowers surrounding a dug out hole. A coffin was placed inside, and before they covered it, she saw Dipper, grief-stricken scream as he lunged over it, sobbing and not letting go. Mel was there too, and Mabel knew that Mel had never wanted this to happen. She was crying, and looked absolutely crushed. The scene was gone, and Mabel knew she had to go back. Her grandmother smiled lovingly, and she let go of her grasp. And then... her eyes shot open.