A/N: Yo! Geta here from the battle field of odst! Woah! Oi! Warn me next time! Sigh Damn... I'll explain as I go, come on!
I hope you're not had to wait too long... (Crouches behind wall) I've made sure to get this chapter off with a bang I hope. Time to finish where the fight left off... Take this! (Sssss Plosh! Tatatatatata....) Sigh man that's done...
Basically I've had some energy built up by this war. And now I hope to give you what you want! Damn phantom... (Crouches out of sight.)
I want to point out that some people don't think it's good with dropping back and taking note on other people in this story... Well tell me my readers... Would you like for me to skip some of the more better scenes...?
Naruto is too strong for any of the ninja. So by backing off on someone that would speed the stories process and make it less interesting. By stepping into other ninja's shoes we get more insight and gives more depth to my story. I personally!!! Think this is good as I can come up with more idea's to get myself ready for the next scene... And it helps with giving me more unique types of skills. Each ninja gives me them... And I love! (Duck's. Boom!)
Improving on the stuff I still lack... Which is a lot, Shit! (Boom!) Take this you teme! Woah!
Sorry about the chat while I fight but I'm still at war and have had a hard time getting this transmitted from the battle field. Shit, running low...
Anyway... to give you some ideas of how imagine Kikan's weapon. Think god of war chin style with Toshiro's shikai add on. With the movement style of Renji's bankai.... Yeah, they come up with a lot in the department. Well that's all, enjoy!!
(Click click.) Fuck... Ugh! (Gripped by neck.)
Hehehehehe. (Brute)
(Thump, thump, thump, thump, thump, drop!) Gasp, gasp... Oh yeah... Who has who... (Picks up carbine.) Now. (Psht!)
Chapter 25
Sai watched silently as the pair faced each other down. 'Kikan had this up his sleeve? Must be a last resort if he's using it in his exhausted state. What can it do?'
Kikan gripped the chain tight as the chain link glowed with seals. 'Time to put what Ten-ten taught me to use... Here goes!' The chain retracted as the weapon fell limp and withdrew. The chain fading into one link. It stopped and Kikan swung the chain out and in fast rotations.
'That's deadly...' Sai held his blade tight as Kikan began to walk forward. The main chain was held right his right arm and it was glowing half way between the right and the left hand. As it swung to Kikan's left hand, ready to attack. Strangely enough he had his eyes close?
Kikan stopped and both stood only meters apart. Kikan opened his eyes and looked directly into Sai's.
"Run..." Kikan spoke as he released with his left and swung with his right. Sai jumped back and his eyes widened as the chain stretched. The teen flipped back, letting the chain swing across his chest and his flipped to his feet. As Sai did he threw his blade at Kikan.
Kikan jumped and pulled the chain up and lashed out in waves. Each one causing explosions with each strike. Sai evaded each with precise movement. His eyes looking at the static in the craters.
'Electrical bursts... That's pretty hard to pull off...' Sai flipped back and threw three shuriken. Kikan swung the chain round and it formed a circle and a wall of electricity, which stopped the weapons in its tracks.
'So he can form barrier's...' Sai watched as Kikan held up his left and as the static stopped on the chain, the shuriken tapped against his gloves.
'Like a magnet... I've got no chance against him like this... But...' Sai glanced to his blade. 'Why did he not grab my blade?' Sai looked back up as the chain's rattled and he jumped aside. As the smoke cleared the blade had dug underground. Kikan pulled and he crouched on the spot the blade dug in.
'He's not moving... Why... Shit!' Sai jumped back as the ground exploded. Sai looked as his forehead protector was knocked clean off and he skidded to a stop.
The area was silent as the dust settled. The chain drew back and Kikan pulled his arm from the ground. The chain landing into his grasp.
Blood dripped to the floor as the cut on Sai's forehead appeared. Sai flinched as his forehead protector hit him on the head.
"Ugh..." Kikan said blinking. "My bad..." 'Man... That was close...' Kikan scratched the back of his head as Sai picked up the headband. A small cut into the base at halfway. Sai rubbed his forehead and tied his headband on.
Kikan watched as blood began to drip from the headband. He had been so focused on winning... He almost killed a fellow leaf by accident.
Kikan had looked down as he realized how careless he was.
"Kikan..." Kikan looked up to Sai. Sai had a smile. "Don't falter... If this was any other ninja fight... I would..."
"Have killed you..." Sai spoke as he rested his blade at Kikan's neck.
There was a stunnded silence... Kikan didn't move as he tried to register what had just happened.
"Clueless?" Sai spoke. "I'll simply tell you this... Don't get distracted... You should have continued your attack when you caught me off guard by that move. Yet you let me get my bearings... Second, don't look down. And three..." Kikan moved his head up a bit. "Never relax your guard when a foe is talking to you..."
Kikan looked down at the scroll that rested were Sai had stood. Kikan glanced across the ground to see the stab mark of where Sai's blade had landed. It was closer than he thought, how?
Kikan blinked. When he jumped... Kikan looked up as he remembered that small piece that missed his memory. The blade had knocked against the sword and it dug down.
"Damn..." Kikan muttered.
"Drop the shuriken... And forfeit..." Sai spoke as Kikan sighed and released Sai's shuriken,
'So much for this cool stuff being mine... Oh well...' Kikan mussed with a sigh. He raised his arm with a sigh.
"I give..." Genma grinned as he nods.
"Winner, Sai!"
As the crowd applauded Kikan faced Sai.
"I guess I've still got a long way to go..."
"You're a year below... You'll improve... Maybe we'll get to fight again someday..." Sai said holding his hand out. Kikan smiled.
"You bet!" Kikan said shaking. Sai grinned back.
'I would ask you but I doubt you'd say...' Sai mussed as he walked off with a small smile. He glanced up to the corridor. 'Where did your energy come from? You looked tired a bit before that chain... So where...' Sai glanced back with a thumb up. 'Did it come from?' Kikan returned the thumbs up and made his way up to the stands... He may as well watch with his fellow genin in the stands.
Genma turned to the waiting box. "Hinata, Mina. Please make your way down for the next round."
"Hai!" Both called and turned to leave. Naruto sighed as he leaned back against the wall.
"One down..."
"Two to go..." Lee finished as he leaned against the wall as well. "Nervous?"
"At becoming chunin... Not really... but fighting you. I'm excited. For this time we can finally let the gloves off and show what we can do."
"Yosh! That is exactly how I feel Naruto-kun! We shall prove that ninja in taijutsu can prevail over ninja with ninjutsu!" Naruto nods with a smile and glances out to the arena as the crowd cheers on the next pair.
"Let's see how much Hinata has improved..." Lee nods.
"I ugh... Heard her father wasn't impressed..."
"Pft... He sounds like the biggest dickhead in the village... To not be impressed with his daughters work to get the finals... Stupid clans..." Naruto muttered.
Hinata smiled to Mina as she got into stance. Mina got into a tense stance.
"Don't be nervous Mina-san..." Hinata spoke up. "We are here to prove we are worthy of chunin rank. So relax and do your best."
Mina sighed and smiled. "You're right Hinata-san... Let's do our best."
Genma smiled with a nod. "Begin!" He called jumping back. Hinata took off into a forward sprint at Mina and drew her right palm back. "Jyuuken!" Mina jumped back, dodging the palm. As Mina skidded back she jumped back as Hinata was already in front of her.
'Hinata's fast... Did she remove her weights?' Mina jumped out the way again. 'N-no... I saw how fast she was against Sasuke... She's not removed it... She's only got faster with it on...' Mina evaded and Hinata skidded to a stop.
'Mina is good reflexes... To be able to evaded my attacks... And the chakra from it...' Hinata shifted her stance and turned on her limit. 'I shall give you my best style.' Her bloodline came to life.
Slowly she scanned the audience... Neji was with the genin, and she found her father.
Time for her to prove her style she made with Naruto's help and the skills she's made. Will prove her more than capable than any hyuuga level could do.
"Mina." Hinata spoke. "Get ready... You'll be the first to face the technique... One I made during my month of training!" Hinata spoke as her hands began to glow.
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"Ha!" Hinata called as she went forward in her combo strikes. Naruto was off to the side practicing his sheath and draw training.
With her fail to get her father's help. Naruto was a welcoming help for her. And with his knowledge... He was better for her to improve. Unlike her father, though she doesn't like to feel like that a lot. Naruto knew more than Hyuuga could. And he was the only one who could make her stronger.
Naruto sheathed his blade and glance to Hinata. Her strikes, her form. It was... In the better words to describe it... A blurr. Her form blurred from one strike to the next. This was when her weight was removed.
She couldn't slide well on her feet when that weight band was on. But with it off... She could very well put even Lee's fists to shame, then to add with her chakra... If she had some kind of attack to go along side...
"Hinata!" Naruto just had a brain wave... He had an idea for Hinata.
Hinata skidded to a stop and glanced over as Naruto walked up. "Hai Naruto-kun?"
Naruto glanced to the destroyed ground. Her feet movement was incredibly quick. "I have an idea for you."
"Wh-what is it?"
"Well, with your gift with chakra control. I thought that you could use something to make you attacks more deadly than just the palm strikes. Something... With a bit of edge."
"Like what?" Hinata asked nervously. Naruto seemed to really like his idea, which it gave off this whole other look. And only when it came to special abilities. Just something in his aura changes when this happens.
"Well... It's sort of like..." Naruto scratched his head. Now came the hard part. He'd seen it in an instant. It was there in his mind. He snapped his fingers. "I'll show you." Naruto walked over to the lake and crouched down. His hand skimming the surface.
"It's sort of like a blade... But put of complete chakra..." Naruto said as he picked up a orb of water. Hinata watched as he flattened the water orb into a disk. Like a shuriken?
"See... I use this form for water shuriken. But you will have to use chakra... Now, you need to sharpen this with your chakra... You have that skill with basic while I could do it with wind. Hmm... That's not a bad idea for later... Anyway." Naruto spoke as he held his left arm back to his side and face the wooden pillar.
"Focus it like a disk and!" Naruto rushed forward and thrust his left arm out. It missed to the side his hand. But the water...
"Focus it so it can cut... Then..." Naruto said glancing back to the small chip in the side. "You may be able to cut without then releasing it..." Naruto said standing straight.
Hinata for the better word of it... Was stunned... Naruto had come up with this on a whim... And though it could do with some tuning... It was... Amazing to put it simply.
"Course this was just a simple idea based of a shuriken but hand held... You may need to spin it and sharpen its edge. But the idea seems pretty set forward." Hinata nods.
"It's a really good idea... But... a disk is hard to form... It's most likely because of your wind chakra. That you can do this so well... Even my chakra control will take time."
"What about trying with a spinning orb? It could shave and we can work on the cutting disk?"
"Yeah... That's a good idea actually."
Naruto grinned. "Cool, let's continue shall we."
"Hai!"
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'Here goes...' Hinata's palms pulsed and slowly rings of chakra began to pulse out into a disk
Naruto smile as Lee asked what Hinata was doing. "Something she got down to a level I couldn't... A move we called..."
"Reza-shou!" Hinata spoke as the three fine circles of chakra were connected by a fine line of chakra.
Mina stepped back slowly. 'Reza-shou? I've never heard of that? Is that really a Hyuuga technique? If so... What?'
Hinata rushed forward with a sudden increase in her speed.
'Chakra burst...' Naruto mussed with a smile. Another handy skill thanks to his training when his sensei.
Hinata got up close to the stunned Mina and swung her right arm out. Mina pulled to the right as Hinata's arm moved to the left of her. She jumped back as she dodged.
Hinata skidded to a stop as Mina skidded back. She glanced up and blinks as she felt liquid on her cheek. Mina blinked.
In the moments as she dodged. The chakra had cleanly cut her cheek. She had not fully judged her dodge and now had a good fine cut on her cheek.
'It may only be close range...' Hinata mussed to herself as she focus on Mina. 'But Naruto-kun and I put time into this technique... I won't to save the other for Kikan or Naruto-kun... Sorry Mina-san...'
Mina whipped the blood away. 'Oh man... I can't get close now with that technique... I'm not good at long range and I think Hinata's going to not let me make such an easy escape this time... She clearly wanted to show me what she's capable of... C-can I really compete with her? I-I don't want to use that jutsu on her... And I know she wouldn't hurt me if she saw what it did...' Mina sighed to herself. Being the daughter of a clan of berserkers... It was something she wished she didn't have to be forced to follow.
She could try again in 6 months from then... But the competition... Plus her father...
"Mina-san." Hinata spoke up. Mina looked up and Hinata smiled to her.
"No matter what you're facing... Always do your best. Don't leave this fight feeling you haven't learned something new about yourself from this."
"O-okay..." Mina spoke as she took a breath with a smile. She felt more relaxed. Hinata was right; she wasn't going to improve if she just avoided her fight... What chunin would she be if she did? But what that jutsu active... Mina blinked.
'Her hands... They have stayed completely flat... If she bent them... Could that stop her jutsu? It's worth a shot.' Mina reached for a kunai with her left and shuriken on her right.
"Let's go!" Hinata called as she moved forward.
"Naruto-kun..." Lee spoke up. "I've never said this... But I think you're rubbing off on Hinata-san. She's been far more confident in the past weeks."
"Yeah... I think your right."
It was true... She had begun to get more confident... But was it just Naruto alone? More than likely Lee's energetic energy rubbed off on Hinata also.
Mina jumped back as Hinata moved forward. Hinata's side stepped as a shuriken passed and quickly flipped to the side. Her right palm flexed out and the disk vanished.
'Yes...' Mina knew what to do.
As Hinata landed. She rushed forward and Mina threw her last shuriken. Hinata swung with her left and sliced the shuriken in two before throwing a kunai with her right as she jumped with spin to her left to flick the kunai her way.
Mina side jumped and threw her kunai at the hyuuga. Hinata caught the kunai and glanced back. She smiled as Mina landed.
'She didn't even go all out? Why would she have taken that second chance...? Could it be that she wasn't sure of her own jutsu?' Mina mussed as Hinata tossed the kunai aside. 'If so... Why use it in the first place?'
'Now.' Hinata removed her jacket as she rushed forward. Mina knew what would happen next, but didn't waste time throwing a kunai.
The second the weight's left Hinata's waist was when the kunai got in close. Her hand grasped it and Hinata vanished. Mina froze.
"It's over Mina." Hinata spoke in a serious tone.
She knew what her chances the second Hinata was ready to release the weights on her. She just never expected Hinata to be this fast!
Was this an increase since the second round? Or was this, what she really had but never showed it?
Either way, she was stuck. The kunai was pressed against her in a reverse grip. Nothing she could do now, Hinata had won.
As Hinata and Mina made their way to their areas. Shikamaru was knocked down as Temari flew down.
Knocked you wonder? Well simply because Naruto wasn't about to let his lazy friend back away from a fight. And simply pushed him over.
The next events that followed are as such... Shikamaru out thought Temari and gave up at the end.
Just how Naruto knew how Shikamaru would act. But at least he showed what he could do to become chunin. Even if he gave up.
Kankuro gave up when he was called. "Wuss... Come on Lee!" Naruto called as he jumped down. Lee followed.
Naruto and Lee stood apart from each other with. The crowd calmed down as Naruto and Lee got into stance. Genma stepped forward. "One second." Naruto spoke up. "Lee... This fight will get out of hand I know it... So this is what I propose..." Naruto stated.
"A ten hit count... First one to land ten clean hits wins... You break a guard, the points you have drop by one. And we stay under the weight we have. You got that? This is pure taijutsu at our best."
Lee smiled and nods. "I agree to the terms... But don't think I haven't wasted this month, I've improved a lot."
"Then let's see..." Naruto said as they went quiet. Genma nods as they got ready.
"The 5th round. Naruto vs. Lee... Begin!!" Genma called as he jumped back. Lee rushed forward to start the match off. He jumped and drew his left leg back.
"Konoha senpuu!!" Naruto's right arm blurred up and he blocked the kick. A loud boom echoed out as Lee jumped back. Naruto waved off the kick and as Lee landed on his right Naruto kicked with his right and Lee blocked with his left arm at head height. As Naruto stepped down both drew their fists back. Lee's right to Naruto's right. The pair shock waved and then they took off.
Fist's, kick's and body movement blurred. They looked like to have three heads at one second before they had six arms flying.
People stared in awe as the pair continued to attack.
With a roar, both kneed forward, Lee's left to Naruto's right. The energy between them shock waved out and a large impact crater formed. The pair jumped back and skidded to a stop. No one said a word.
'Naruto-kun... Are you holding back? Or are you so weighed down that this as fast as you can go?'
'Lee's incredible... I never thought it would be this hard to hit him. We're equal... Heh.' Naruto smirked and Lee returned it.
And before everyone's eyes. They vanished.
"What the?" Ino spoke up as she asked the question everyone was thinking. "We're they go?"
To answer her question, the ground to the right of the pair's start point exploded. Naruto appeared on a large shard of rock and jumped to the side as Lee punched. Naruto smirked and flipped, he hit Lee full force with a heel kick to the head and Lee flew down. He landed and looked up.
'One...' He jumped back as Naruto rocketed at the lad with a double kick. Lee jumped back and skidded. He leaned to his right as Naruto kicked at where his chest was. Lee spun on his left and kicked with a broad right kick. Naruto glanced and jumped. Flipping over onto his feet. Right left flew and Lee blocked with his left palm before elbowing Naruto in the chest.
The blond skidded back and flipped out of Lee's sweep kick and put some distance. The pair remained quiet as they took a breath. They smiled and took at each other. The covered the ground between each other and punched forward. They met fist to fist and the ground shattered into a large spider web crater before exploded. The area cloud by dust and sand.
The only sound they could here was the clashes of body to body. As both attacked in the smoke. Lee flew backwards out of the smoke and Naruto appeared behind Lee as they flew. Naruto drew his arms and legs back and sent Lee flying into the air. The blond flipped and jumped with his fist back.
'4 hit's... Now for five!' Naruto threw his right fist.
Lee twisted before Naruto's eyes and caught the blonds fist. He then drew his body forward and kneed Naruto in the face. Naruto's head leaned back in a stunned moment and Lee released Naruto's fist and flipped. A double kick to Naruto's chest sent him flying into the ground with a bang!
Lee landed and waited as the smoke began to clear. He wiped the blood from his chin.
'4 to Naruto's 4... I won't be easy to win against.'
'Lee's good... Time to raise this fight a level!'
Lee stood back into stance and waited. Slowly the smoke began to withdraw. It began to spiral. The ground sparked and with an earth shattering roar. Naruto appeared. The smoke blown away as Naruto was covered in a white aura.
If anyone had icecream or food... It just hit the floor.
"Lee... Forget what I said... The ten points rule applies... Show me what you've got!"
Lee remained quiet as Naruto stood into his white flaming glory. 'Very well...' Lee jumped. As he did he removed his ankle weights.'
Elsewhere Goku stood looking to the sky. "Don't overdo it you two... You still have a village to save. Don't go destroying it..."
Everyone yelled as they covered their ears. Lee and Naruto were tearing the place apart as they attacked.
Naruto never knew Lee was this good. He was incredibly strong. Gai never show him the gates in their fight. Naruto was fighting someone he would only get once... He wasn't about to miss his chance like this!
"Argh!" Both yelled as they kicked in the air. Both jumped back and pushed forward on their left leg. Lee punched with his right and Naruto leaned to Lee's right. He brought his right knee up and Lee forced his body to rotate out of the knee. He flipped and skidded on his feet. Naruto did so to. Both had their backs to each other. But as they both turned they had that look that both knew each other's next move. The met full force, a fist to each other's face. Both flew back and bounced along the ground. Naruto flipped and skidded on all fours. Lee landed on his back.
Dust and smoke covered the area. It looked like a battle field in the great shinobi war. And this was just hand to hand combat.
If this was back in Goku's time. The battle would have most defiantly been less fierce at the tenkaichi budokai.
The fight the pair was doing. Were on terms with Cell's battle field. They had no ground to out of bound. They had an open area to fight in. And that allowed them to go all out on each other.
Lee panted as Naruto smiled.
'The stamina you hold Naruto-kun... I will never meet it with what you've done for training... But I have a will to fight... And I will fight and give my all... We're at 6 for 7. I hold the lead right now... Time to move a step higher. Gai-sensei... I know I'm breaking your rules... But Naruto is the one I wish to test out all I have... I will take all the punishment you can give me for this...'
"Naruto..." Lee spoke out seriously. "The only chance now of you winning will be Kaio-ken... You won't win otherwise..."
Naruto smirked at Lee. "Don't get cocky..." Naruto stated as a fine line of sweat dripped down the side. 'Show me what this gate technique can do... Lee... You and Gai are my only equal...' Naruto watched as Lee's body tensed as a great amount of chakra began to pour off Lee.
"Here it is Naruto... Prepare yourself... This is what my training as given me!! Seimon! Kai!" Lee roared as his skin turned red. Naruto crouched and waited.
'Shoumon...' Lee appeared under Naruto's guard. 'Kai!' Naruto flew back as Lee's right fist connected.
Naruto glanced back and up to the wall. He stopped in midair and Lee was in front of him. Lee spun and kicked with his right like Naruto was a foot ball. Naruto's arm took the impact.
He never knew there was a taijutsu this powerful. He underestimated the gates.
It was time to let the weight go...' Naruto flipped in his high speed flight and slowed it with chi. He landed on the wall side with a crouch and looked up to Lee. Lee hit the wall as Naruto vanished. Lee blinked and watched as Naruto's haori flowed by. He looked up.
Naruto rested in a crouch. Only his black vest remained. But now anyone could see with good eyes. That Naruto was no normal genin now. His body was clearly something you had to really work hard for.
He looked like Gohan in body shape. Least that's what Goku had thought. Naruto had no one to match up with in his build but Goku. But he didn't look like that yet. The wall cracked as Lee jumped back.
Naruto jumped down. Lee stood in his red glory. Naruto stood in his tattered state.
But unlike Lee. Naruto was not breathing lightly. He didn't like moving when his body was this free... He stayed under that gravity, knowing he could move not worrying of moving too fast.
Goku had said he would get used to it... But Naruto didn't get used to it so well... Saiyan's could deal with gravity change quickly. Human's had a harder time.
His body was under 20G. That was his max. He couldn't go any higher at his current age. Unless he wanted to crumple under the weight. 21G, and his body would give way. There was only so much a body could take.
The match had stayed quiet. And it remained quiet. Naruto stood and spoke out to Lee.
"You are gonna be one of the few to fight this Lee... Feel honoured... Your speed in amazing... And I know you have more waiting... So here it is Lee... This... is..." Naruto said as he tucked his body in.
Naruto didn't care... He was going to show his power... But he would never let a soul know how to use it.
His body pulsed as it began to glow red. Like flames were beginning to appear along his body. The ground round him began to pulse with red chi as it sparked the ground with small jolt of electricity.
Naruto was the strongest human in the world... Just a bit more so than Goku's friend Kuririn. Lee and Gai were Naruto's second.
Naruto's body glowed fully red and as he stretched out his arm to his side. He let loose the word that would stick in people's minds for some time. Whenever they hear the name Naruto Uzumaki.
"Kaio...Ken!!!"
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This bit was being written as I wrote my story. So the info is fresh for me to type.
Kikan's fight... Was a difficult one. But I'm sure you've all been a bit confused by it... Even I am to some extent...
To try explain some of the points, I've gone to look over the fight and explain it to you.
The chained weapon is unique for its chain seal as I call it. One link is coated with a seal and at the users will can extend it to any length one wishes. But we most also remember. The long the swing, the weaker the attack.
Also, Kikan is still a green genin. His only experience in fighting was Kiba. He was a fast close range foe and he just got through that.
Sai is long range and in a sense. Kikan's equal. Kikan was far more focused in this fight as he wanted to see what he could do against someone like himself. And the fact he could gain the chance of chunin. Kind of made him so focused that he nearly took a leaf ninja's life. Or done serious damage.
I'm sure many in his blade would have stopped and got careless at the moment if you just knew you were close to killing a comrade. That was Kikan's mistake.
Now Sai's blade... In stories... Unless the character has registered it... No one really knows till the last moment in a flash back. Kikan jumping had caused the chains to rattle. And the sound of a blade knocking against the chain would make little difference.
I'm sorry if this fight didn't come out as hoped... I don't know if I could have done better... But I guess Kikan also knew that he couldn't do the same tricks on a foe like Sai as he did to Kiba?
Next is Mina and Hinata's fight.
Mina was hard to do... Seeing as she's a character that Matt knows best... But after showing him the fight. He liked it, which I feel so glad about.
Hinata was... easier... I really think I got a bit more improvement. She has improved under Naruto's watchful eye and suggestions.
And yes... I've noticed connections to rasengan. The ideas have come together by accident. But this leads to new ideas. Also, the chakra thrust. For those who forgot... It was one of the first idea's Naruto ever came up with in the winter under Goku's training.
And I do believe Hinata was indeed a lot faster than she showed Sasuke. Even Sasuke went from zero to speed freak in a month. Hinata is better trained. She'd do better.
Shikamaru and Temari was pretty much the same... Just a different hole. Lol. Kankuro was obvious... He just wants to be ready for when he attacks... Now I finally get to do the fight I've been aiming for!
End of chapter... Jaw dropping... I loved how much of that went!!! And I loved it with the fact I used the music from ssj goku vs freeze on burst limit. Ah, it really felt good and I was so syched!
I can't say more but this.
The hidden gates are the only thing that put Lee and Gai on Naruto's level. Gai never used it on Naruto last time. The hidden gate is the only thing that would force Naruto to use kaio-ken. But it will be 5 times for Lee to match Naruto. (Spoiler!)
And the reason Naruto has gone so far for this fight... We all already know.
Lee and Naruto are the only two to meet each other better in taijutsu combat. They would go full out on one another. As a show of friend ship. To make the over improve.
The finally will come and the war will begin soon enough. I've got some minor plans... And things are taking a turn...
And Lee's outcome is what I'm wondering... What will happen to him?
I can only say I'm looking forward to the fight to come. I'm so going to milk it. So forgive me if I drag it out a tad.
Also Jade... No, I have yet to look at d and d. I've read what you've sent me... and my only result from that was a headache. It may come up in the sequel... Most likely. But not in the beginning.
Also, so thoughts who thought this would be faster.
This first part. Is the back story... Like Goku in db. The second is Naruto's to dbz in away. My final part... Is going to not be like gt... But I have something interesting planned.
Next, I will say that I noticed this is doing so much better than saiyan reborn... I feel really good. I means I'm doing so much better with my work.
If this was in the same chapter line as saiyan reborn. Goku would be looking for tsunade. So you can see how far I'm behind. There is no way this story will finish at 34 like goku's did.
I will also like to ask, that if this chapter didn't agree with your opinion on Lee and Naruto's fight. Please say.
Also, after Lee and Naruto's fight. This will be the last time Naruto goes this far. So I guess it's sort of a final attempt at a really big fight scene.
We won't be seeing kaio-ken again now till Naruto's path to a warrior. (Still working on the fine details of the name.)
Also, I will give my final clue to Gato's connection. Someone guessed pilaf. And I was stunned to see how close they matched.
But anyway. Remember the city I designed over Wave... Connect that and the pieces. If anyone get's this. I'll do something to return for your answer. And it's the first one who get's it.
Good luck and enjoy!
Geta!
Ps: I will take anyone who wishes to challenge me at raging blast. And to check my dv account. As I have raging blast pictures of characters out so far. Bye!