Paradise Eco

Last chapter! See the bottom for the closing remarks, thank yous and a part of the next fanfiction called Don't You Fake It.

Weight Of The World

Chapter 25: When I Caught Myself

Seth turned around and followed the direction Erol pointed, he took one look at what was behind Grante and Lei. He tackled Eli to the ground as Erol fired the bullet, the twins hit the ground hard as a ball of light came from behind them. Eli didn't trun his head as Seth got up, Eli tried to regain his breath as Seth stood up.

"Wow... to have that kind of power."

"What are you talking about?" Eli said rolling over, when he did he was almost blinded by a bright light. An angel looking creature stood infront of Grante and Lei, Grante was passed out and Lei stared dumbly at the angel. In the light breeze there was its wings blew lightly in the wind; Erol on the other had was shocked by what he saw and sat on the ground holding his pistol to his leg.

"Seth," The angel said bending down to the girls. "Go back to Spargus, you have a little treat waiting for you at the Temple."

"Daara!" Seth shouted, he turned to Eli. The blonde nodded as the brunette ran past the angel and towards Eli's car. The angel reached down and touched Grante's skin, Erol expolded with anger. He got up and stomped over to the angel.

"Don't you touch my daughter you Eco Freak!" Erol shouted, he pointed the pistol at the angel's head. "Take your fithly eco hands off of her!" Grante's skin glowed brightly as her wounds diseappered one by one, within seconds she wasn't cut anymore or had the bullet wound in her shoulder. Eli came forward to the angel, the soft smile through the warm light glow made Eli jittery. Soon the glow was gone and the angel turned into Jak, he stood up with the hard look he always had.

"Stay here." Jak ordered, Eli went slack jaw as Lei started blubbering.

"But- What- How- That- He- Jak!" Lei shouted.

"So my old friend," Jak said stepping up to Erol, he cracked his fingers as he walked up to the orange haired man. "Back from the dead I see."

"Thanks to your son," Erol growled.

"Well Seth hasn't always been the bright one." Jak said pacing around Erol. "You take control of my son, you send your creatures to destory my land... if you think you're getting off easy, you're sadly mistaken." Jak shouted running towards Erol, in seconds Jak is thrown back by Red Eco. Montley's blonde hair was sparked with red lightning bolts.

"You will not touch my husband."

"Montley!" Jak growled. "He experiment on you too! How can you protect him!?"

"Because," Montley said lowering her arms. "I freely let him do this to me, sure it's not my favorite power or my favorite thing about myself." Montley said looking down at her hands. "But I did fall in love with him, I'm sure Keira can still love you for all those KGs you killed? And the whole Dark Eco thing right?" Montley smiled back at Erol. "And plus, its more fun to watch him fight for his life agasint my lovely Emerald Graud." Suddenly a mixture of green, red, and blue grauds surrouded the whole area, Torn and Ashelin came around the cornor.

"Don't forget the Krizmon Graud too," Ashelin said as she spun her pistol on her finger.

"And the Freedom Leauge." Torn said looking around, he smirked at Montley.

"Montley don't turn around."

"Why?" Montley said as Ashelin took her arm.

"Believe me, you don't want to see." She looked to her grauds. "Take him into custody."

Eli smiled as the twins came limping over, Kahen had one arm wrapped around her brother's neck as he helped her walk. She gave a weak smile as Lei glared rubbing her arm, she yawned and groaned.

"I'm going to feel this in the morning aren't I?"

"Yup," Kahen laughed. "But don't worry," Kahen said slapping Jahen's back, she made her twin whince as the group laughed. "Jahen will too."

"I hate you." Jahen groaned.

"Thank you." Kahen laughed, the group smiled as the grauds took Erol away for good. Why did they have to live their parents lives again, but this time with such different outcomes? Lei nudged Grante and snickered.

"Come on sweetheart, can't sleep forever."

"I want to be sleeping beauty," Grante groaned, the group laughed and jumped on her. Kahen curled the red head's hair as men pasted by rolling their eyes and whispering among themselves, Grante smiled and leaned her head on Eli's chest. "Is my estate that bad?"

"Um," Eli started but stopped when a scream came from the other side of the lot.

"Sweet merciful crap! What did he do to my house!?"

"I told you not to turn around!"

Seth ran through the temple looking in every room and finding no trace of Daara, outside the storm was finally dying down. When he came to the last room, he stopped dead in his tracks. He remembered Seem telling them about the room, how this room can unleash your deepest and darkest secrets to anyone in the room with you. Seth touched the door knob, fear ran through his whole body as he turned the knob and entered.

Standing in the middle of the room was Daara, her torn nightgown fluttered around her as the ecos from their bowls. In her hands she held Vanity's Mirror; Seth sallowed when he saw the girl inside staring right back at him. Her hair was deep green and her eyes were bright blue, Daara stepped forward stroking the mirror.

"Seth..." Daara mubbled fiddling with the mirror. "Tell me... how did it feel to see that door open?"

"What are you talking about?"

"The door... it's a gateway to the Precusors."

"I can go see them anytime, they live in-"

"Not Daxter and his kin," Daara snapped. "I mean to see into their world?"

"I didn't see." Seth muttered walking towards her, Daara smiled as he came closer to her. "But if I did, I would believe it looks like our world since they creatured us." Daara smiled and came closer to him.

"Do you believe in the Precusors now?" Seth rolled his eyes.

"No."

"You believe that Erol can give you power even though he's caputred?" She stroked the mirror. "Believe that he can grant you anything you want?"

"Yes." Seth said.

"I thought so," Daara said leaning to his face, Seth took her face in his hands and leaned towards her mouth. "Then I guess there's only one thing I have to do..."

"Which is?"

"This..." The mirror slipped from her hands and smashed on the ground, Seth's body tensed as Daara backed up from him. He reached out and grabbed her shirt, he pulled her close and frowned.

"I hate you," He slapped her across the face and watched her fall to the ground, Daara crumbled to pieces and held her face as Seth walked out of the room. She glanced up and clenched her fist as tears slid down her face, in the shadows she heard someone chuckle softly.

"Aww how sad Daara, my love." She didn't turn her head as the person in the shadows creeped out, he pulled back her hair and kissed her neck. "How does it feel to be thrown to the ground by the one you love?" Daara touched her cheek and whinced. "There are does that matter and those that don't, right my love?" Daara let tears start to fall down her face as the temple got queit, she couldn't hear anything from around or outside. All she could hear was his voice. He put an arm around her shoulders and licked her collar bone, Daara didn't shiver or flinch as he did it. "Don't worry love, I'll take care of you."

"You're leaving me breathless," Daara said holding her chest, fresh tears fell down her face ontop her lap. The form reached around her and wipped away the falling tears. "I hate this, I hate this. You're not the one I believe in, with God as my witness!" Daara screamed as she squeezed her hand around the Mar amulet.

End.

Preview to: Don't You Fake It

"Members of the party," Chancellor Ives shouts, he looks to Grante and Charis sitting on either side of him. "Tell me that if we don't take control of our city rebel cities like Spargus and Forgotten can attack at any minute! I say we force men and boys to join the EG unless we say other wise!" Everyone started cheering and clapping for Chancellor Ives. "I say that I, Chancellor Ives, run until the end of my days! Who is with me!?" Everyone started cheering even louder, they stood up and started Chancellor Ives through out the room.

Grante looked among the grown men and shook her head, she rubbed her temples and held back the tears she wanted to release. This can only end badly and everyone knew that, but who would go up with Chancellor Ives?

"Mrs. Kanna-Cure," Chancellor Ives said, she stood slowly as did Charis. "And Mr. Opsits will be my legends, and to be a legend you must make legends... I now prounce these two young teens engaged."

"What?" Grante shouted as the men went into louder shouting and cheering. "This will not stand Chancellor-" Ives pinched Grante's arm and smiled.

"Smile Garnette, that Wastelander boy can do nothing for you. Besides give you the sick." Ives smiled and waved, Grante turned away from him as Charis came over and took her hand.

"I knew one day that you'd give into me," He smiled, Grante slapped him across the face. It echoed through out the whole room as she spit acid.

"So this is how freedom dies?" She growled. "With a booming cheering?" Grante walked away from the stand and out the door, everyone looked shocked as the new lady smiled at the camera.

"And there you have it Paul."

Seth laughed as Jak turned off the TV, Seth punched his brother in the arm and smirked. "And that's how you get dumped, diss your future husband and your city on national television." Seth sighed. "Man I love that chick." Eli growled at his brother and threw a pillow at him.

"I hate my life."

Don't You Fake It

The Kras City Republic has taken the word 'controlled' a little too far, and the group is right in the middle of the whole mess. When Kras declares war on much more powerful emenies they seem to come crashing down, and fast. How far will Chancellor Ives go for power, and who will he kill for it? And in the end who will fall far enough that they won't be able to come back, no matter how much they want to?

Paradise Eco's Closing Remarks

so this took a year, which made me a little angry but a little happy that when I did re-do it people still read it. I like to thank music, and everyone : DarkEcoAngel, AlterEgoSadist, BlackCat2468, Life'sABitchAndThenYouDie, Timexgone, RandomHyperPerson, Haavu and other people that didn't reveiw but read this anyway. Thank you so much, you are what makes fanfictions move and run on! :) See ya next time.