A Night in Heaven

by Cocoaeyes

Goten and Trunks decide to let loose at a popular West City nightclub. Marron plans to join and brings along a friend. But they're in for more than they know. The timeline is parallel to DBGT and ends shortly after.

25. Update!

Hi everyone!

It's been a while since I posted an update! I've been writing the outline for ANIH Part II, but keep coming back to the first part of the story. Truth is, I'm not happy with how I wrote it and the tie ins to GT. Maybe it's because I've been watching Super, maybe it's because my writing wasn't that great and improved.

Either way, I'm thinking about rewriting ANIH with the following edits:

1) Less Paresu focused and instead expand upon all the characters and their lives / struggles

2) Not taking place during GT. Perhaps it will be in the Super universe with Paresu being the only character from GT to join, or just an AU in general.

3) Threesome scene (if it happens) would happen earlier and not be the build up of the story. Alternatively, I could write a one-shot instead of a threesome.

I'd love to hear what you all think and if there are other suggestions. I still have a lot of love for this story and think it could be told in a stronger way.