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Hello, my readers! Long time no see! You may be wondering WHYYYY I am posting on this story after so long of an absence. Well, if you care to find out, read on!
I am working on a new one shot, and was feeling very down on my writing ability so I decided to reread my comments on this story to boost my confidence. As I did this, I noticed that there were A LOT of comments about me killing off Angel, and how upset people were, and how it wasn't necessary. That is why I am taking time out of my busy schedule to explain myself to you.
POINT 1: As everyone knows, Angel can read minds. If she had been alive, she would only need to read Fang's thoughts and find out why he was so upset. She could then explain it to the flock, and as everyone knows, Fang would never have gone to the school because they would have talked him out of it, etc. Or, he would have gone, but his sacrifice would have been for nothing because the others would have been aware of the testing, which made his agreement with Jeb void. Jeb made Fang promise not to tell because if they knew that it was the drug that was making him so angry/ violent, they would have avoided him until it was done, and the experiment would have been pointless. Long story short, Angel needed to die so that no one in the flock would know about Fang being tested on again.
POINT 2: As most discussed in the story, Jeb said Fang needed to come to the school for testing "or else". Killing/ hurting the flock is the only way to threaten Fang, so that is what happened. If Fang didn't think that Jeb was serious about hurting the flock, he would never have submitted himself for testing. It was only the fear for the rest of the flock that caused him to go back to the school.
POINT 3: By killing a member of the flock so quickly and so gravely injuring the others, we see that Omega has truly been modified and is far superior to the flock.
POINT 4: Max would never have questioned Fang's loyalty for anything less than one of the flock being killed. If she didn't question his loyalty, there would be no, or a much shorter, story.
POINT 5 (skip this point if you are looking for real evidence): I am the writer, and it is what I think should have happened! So there! : )
There you have it! Stay tuned for more information on my coming one shot!
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~Sari