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Otterstream- Okay, I'll surely add Otterkit :).
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Shadowstar blinked open her eyes, twitching uncontrollably. "I lost a life..." Her breath hitched as she staggered to her paws. "I'm sorry, Shadowstar." Heatherfoot murmured. "But luckily your safe." The medicine cat stood and padded away.
Shadowstar stood and headed towards the center of Camp, just when the screeching of cats was heard.
"There here! FireClan has entered our territory!" Dragonfeather yowled as he dashed through Camp with his patrol.
FireClan cats poured into the territory, including some unknown cats along with them. Rouges... Rouges with them too... Shadowstar thought to herself with wide eyes, she leaped over to Dragonfeather, her body still twitching. "I've lost a life... And now this?" She murmured. Dragonfeather's claws unsheathed when he saw the FireClan cats getting closer to them. "Go, hide! Your on your last life, I cant allow anything happening to you." Dragonfeather nudged her away. "I have one life just like the rest of the Clan." Shadowstar retorted, bounding off to fight.
Cougarpaw was slashing at other cats, claws tearing at fur. Three FireClan warriors crowded him into a corner, the sounds of bloodcurdling shrieks were heard. And in the corner of Shadowstar's eyes she could see Finchpaw scrambling over, ducking under the warriors to help her brother. She let out a enraged yowl and lashed her claws at their faces, just as they dropped to the ground before her. Cougarpaw's body lay behind her, blood leaking from his gashes and wounds. He was dead.
"Take him, Gorsepaw! Cure him!" Finchpaw cried, calling for her brother.
Shadowstar turned away and leaped into a fight with one of the FireClan cats, Frozenwillow. She clamped her paw over the she-cats eye and tore at it. Finally, she dropped, and was instantly dead.
Shadowstar dashed off, frantically fighting with nearby cats. A rouge was attacking Aspenpaw, the small weak apprentice. But all at once, he yowled and rammed his head into the cats body, and sent him dropping in pain. The cats body quivered and went still. It was as if by Aspenpaw's touch, this cat was killed. His sister, Cloudpaw bounced over, and continued attacking some rouges. She seemed to know what would happen before it happened, and would fight and attack at the correct spot of a cats body.
Soon the Clan was filled with ragged bodies, some NightClan, some FireClan. She growled as the FireClan warriors fled, along with the rouges. But one stayed in the clearing, fur bristling and claws unsheathed. This was Oakstar.
"Get out Oakstar!" Shadowstar spat, leaping into battle with the FireClan leader. NightClan circled the two, watching with wide eyes. Oakstar cackled. "I wont leave till your dead!" He retorted, slashing at her face. Shadowstar dodged, and swerved to his back, kicking at his spine with her hind legs. "If I'm going down, your coming with me!" Shadowstar hissed. Oakstar whipped around, tearing at her stomach with claws outstretched. Shadowstar yelped and dropped to the ground, pulling herself away from Oakstar. She watched as her Clan tried to come forward and attack Oakstar, but she signaled for them to stop. This was her battle.
But out of the blue, Blackpaw pounced over. "Stop, Oakstar!" She snapped. "This is against the warrior code!"
"Don't you speak of the warrior code to me," Oakstar snarled, whipping around and slamming her against a dens wall. His shoulder clamped her throat, and she tried to breathe, but her breathing caught in her throat and made her cough and heave for air.
"You release her!" Shadowstar yowled madly, bunching up her muscles before she sprang into Oakstar, ramming the FireClan leader into a tree. She tore at his head and body, blood leaking out from his neck. Shadowstar felt his claws jab into her stomach and hit a bone, she felt herself losing breath but she continued striking the cat who so madly hated her. She finally felt her claws rip at his throat, and saw his eyes dull and within seconds his body dropped limp to the ground and lay as a carcass. A dead body.
"You did it, Shadowstar! You killed him!" Dragonfeather grinned and leaped over, but within that moment, the world spun. Shadowstar couldn't feel her legs, and she couldn't feel her heart pumping. The blood running through her veins had frozen, and so had the breathing in her lungs. Her body quivered once more before she dropped. The sound of her heart pumping made her recoil with freight, she knew what was happening. She was dying. All she could hear now was her heart, not the noises of her distressed clan mates as they tried to move her.
Thump... Thump... Thu-...
Her heart stopped, and her eyes glazed over before she lay limp on the ground; dead in seconds.