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By omega() 2009-04-03 . chapter 1
You know, i am glad that you don't own Twilight, if you did the people will bully you instead of Smeyer, **.
I hate your story and I hate your penmane. Naomi Cullen...so hilarious...you think you are a cullen. No wonder why you are a **.
You are in love with the characters, even though they don't exist.
I found this really upsetting, but whatever. Anyway, here's the story.
Disclaimer: I don't own Twilight, OKAY???????????????
What happened last chapter:
"Do you like the ring?" He asked quietly in my ear, biting his lip and looking slightly nervous as he asked me.
"It's beautiful Edward... I love it." I replied sincerely.
"The ring is the same one that my father gave my mother... He chose emerald to match my mothers eyes. It's the same shade of green that my eyes were when I was human." He told me, his eyes full of earnest as he smiled at me joyfully. "I've been wanting to ask you since I met you, ten years ago, but you wouldn't have accepted then, I don't think. Alice told me that much."
I smiled up at him, and wrapped my arms around his neck. "I love you, Edward." I told him, before placing my mouth on his.
Bella's POV
After about half an hour of kissing Edward, I whispered to him regretfully, "Edward. We have to go home. The others will be looking for us soon." My voice was rough and course after half an hour of extreme kissing, but I gently pushed Edward away and stood straighter.
He grinned lazily, and nodded. He glance down at my hand, where his large emerald sparkled as much as my skin, shooting off thousands of rays of light. I noticed that Angie had dissapeared, probably after a few minutes of seeing me and Edward make out.
"It suits you... But maybe you'd prefer something more recent? More in style? Tiffany's perhaps?" He offered, in what would have tricked me as a genuine serious voice, had I not seen the twinkle in his golden eyes.
"Hmm... Tiffany's. Very tempting, I must admit. But I'll keep this, just for you." I pretended to reconsider, jokily. Edward put on a mock offended expression, then grinned.
"I've heard diamonds are very popular right now." Edward laughed. "Maybe a pretty, hmm... sliver ring with encrusted diamonds?" He playfully reached out to grab my ring from my finger. I shied away, and brought my hand out to my arm, covering it, feeling a strong protectiveness about the ring which I had only just aqquired.
"You're not getting it off me that easily!" I exclaimed. I stuck my tounge out, and he leaned forward for another kiss. I rolled my eyes. Vampire or human, the male species were obsessed with kissing! I let him peck my lips, before pushing him away, and sprinting off back to the car, where Carlisle and Angie were waiting. When Angie saw me through the trees, she jumped out of the cars, and sprinted to me.
Hugging me close, she yelled, "Oh My God Bella! I still can't belive you're engaged! And it was soooo romantic!" She let go of me, and picked up my hand, intently studying my ring for the second. When she spoke, it was just at normal volume, but full of wonder and amazement. "This ring... it is just amazing. So elegant. So beautiful. It's so... perfect! I'm so jealous, Bella! I told you you'd find your perfect man soon, didn't I!"
While she was talking, Edward had come out of the forest, and caught my eye. Once he'd caught my attention he winked at me, and smiled broadly. I returned the smile, then continued listening to Angie.
"Although, I do feel slightly sorry for that Dave guy. I mean, he didn't do anything wrong, and he seemed pretty crazy about you, too. Oh well, maybe he'll meet another girl." Angie just kept talking, excitedly saying everything on her mind. "But I always thought that Edward and you were perfect together. It's a shame that vampires can't have kids, any kids that you two would have had would have been so beautiful!"
She took a deep, but unnecessary, breath before continuing, "Oh, I've been babbling haven't I? You want to get back to your gorgeous fiance!" She exclaimed. I squealed, loving the word fiance being used to describe Edward.
Fiance...
I knew of Edward's arrival by a gentle kiss on the back of my neck. "Hello, my wife-to-be." He murmered softly, making all my body, from my face to my toes tingle.
"Hello, my husband-to-be." I responded, in a happy voice. Edward suddenly scooped me up, carrying me bridal style.
Okay, I admit, I screamed. It was a surprise to suddenly lose the ground beneath my feet, but it was very funny to be carried like that. I saw him gesturing something to Carlisle, then Edward started running through the trees. I just let myself feel comfortable in his arms, and watch the trees rush past. After a few minutes, he stopped, and carefully put me down.
"Bella, I have to tell you something." He told me. I was confused by what he could be telling me, but I nodded for him to continue. "I haven't been one hundred percent honest to you, Bella." With those opening words, I felt my heart sink. "The thing is, a few years after I made the mistake of leaving you, Tanya came down for a visit. They had a new coven member called Victoria. I was at a very depressing stage, and she seemed so nice. When she kissed me, I figured I had nothing to lose. We got carried away... When she left to go back to Alaska, she asked me to go with her. I realised that I had made a big mistake, and turned her down. None of the rest of our family knew anything about her. I... I just wanted you to know. And she didn't mean anything."
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