Hello! Here is my very crappy epiloge! I'll say everything else down there *points*
A Few Weeks Later
Caspian stood proudly in front of the single tree outside. His crown shone in the sunlight and made him look even more kingly.
Peter looked at the crowd. The looks on their faces told him Caspian would make a great king. His time was over. And that was alright with him.
Peter then glanced to his right. Susan was looking at Caspian fondly, and Peter just knew that his sister had spent hours figuring out what to wear and how to look her prettiest just for the Telmarine king.
Well, Narnian king at heart.
Lucy was standing in the middle of Susan and Peter. She wasn't really that little anymore. Of course she'd proven she was mature many times, but he meant little on the outside. She was growing up to be quite pretty. His big brother instincts were going crazy, and Lucy knew it, and commented on it quite a bit.
Then, the oldest Pevensie looked to his left. Sitting down (because of his leg) was Edmund. He had his color back and was healing nicely. His broken arm was in a sling and his leg was wrapped in bandages, but other than that he barely had any cuts left and the bruises were completely gone.
Edmund turned and their eyes met briefly. Ed offered a small smile before turning back to Caspian. Peter followed his lead and noticed Caspian was about ready to speak.
"Hello. Today is the day we finally honor the heroes that made this new Narnia possible."
There were many cheers, and only a couple people didn't clap or say anything.
"First, Pattertwig the squirrel." The little squirrel darted back in forth in front of Caspian, making the crowd slightly dizzy. "He showed amazing courage in the face of danger and saved my life." Caspian continued.
Pattertwig stopped running and started jumping up and down. "It was exciting and scary. Oh the guy was just evil and moved fast. But I moved faster. I move fast! His face was slippery. It was scary and-"
Peter ran up and scooped the hyper little squirrel up. "Enough." He whispered. Pattertwig nodded and Peter let him go before stepping back to his previous spot. Pattertwig flicked his tail nervously and tried to keep quiet.
"Second is the brave centaur Glenstorm." Glenstorm nodded respectively. "He bravely fought with everything he had and did not doubt us for a second, along with the red dwarf Trumpkin." Trumpkin suppressed a smile.
"Also, Electrus the satyr who followed orders to the letter." Electrus looked down and tried grinned slightly.
"Next is Bultitude the bear. He faced his fears and fought very well." Bultitude pulled his paw out of his mouth long enough to smile at the crowd.
"And then there's Orieus, a centaur that gave his life for Narnia centuries ago, and did the same again in the recent battle."
The Pevensies all sighed and mourned the loss of their friend and mentor.
"And last but not least, the Pevensies. We couldn't have done this without them, even if there were a few bumps in the road."
Peter looked down and Lucy gave him a half hug and Susan patted his on the back.
"Hey." Peter looked over to Edmund. "It's alright." Ed assured.
Peter couldn't help but hug his brother and after only a slight pause Edmund hugged back.
The crowd cheered again and were glad that they were free of the rule of the evil Miraz.
Suddenly a hush came over the crowd and Peter and his family looked up in confusion. Then they understood.
Standing next to the tree was Aslan, his golden fur shining. The lion nodded to the crowd and then looked at Peter and Edmund, who were still hugging.
"Hello Aslan." Edmund greeted.
The lion walked over to the Pevensies as the crowd dispersed. "Are you feeling better?" He asked Edmund.
Edmund smiled and nodded. "Thank you."
Aslan nodded and then addressed all of them. "When Edmund is fully healed I will be back to take you home."
They all nodded sadly.
"Lucy," Lucy looked up in surprise. "and Edmund will be coming back." Edmund tilted his head.
Susan started to tear up. "But Peter and I?"
"You have learned all you can from this world."
Peter grabbed Susan's hand. "It's ok. It's meant to be this way."
Susan nodded and fought back her tears.
Aslan started to walk away.
"Aslan!" Peter yelled.
Aslan turned and looked at the once and forever High King. "Yes?"
"Thank you."
Aslan nodded and turned away. "You are welcome." He said, walking away.
Lucy looked at her oldest siblings. "You're not going to come back with us?"
"We can't."
"It won't be the same without you."
Susan, who'd spent enough time around Lucy to always look at the positive side, spoke. "But you'll have new adventures, and get to tell us about them. Remember, you always complain about how Peter and I get all of the adventures because we're older."
Lucy bit her lip and nodded. "I guess you're right. It's you're turn to be jealous!"
Peter laughed. "Plus, we're a family again."
And the Pevensies couldn't help but share a group hug, knowing everything was ok now. They still had to fix some things, and adjusting to a new school after this would be very hard, but they could do it. As long as they were a family they could do anything.
I absolutely loved writing this for you guys. You're all so great I just had a blast! I'm very sorry if it was disappointing, or I took too long to update, or things didn't turn out the way you wanted. I tried.
This is the second multi-chapter story I've finished. Eep! For a procrastinator that's great! I hope the rest of my stories can get the response this got, and all my readers will be as great as you!
Anyway, I won't rant anymore.
Please please please review! I really want constructive critism. It'll make me super super happy. You can be cruel, you can be nice, I just really want some tips and feedback on what parts of this story you did and didn't like. What I did good and bad. It's all great!
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Wow.....this went from a 935 word story and turned into a million word one because of this ending. :D lols
