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Chapter 25: Dead But Breathing

Stuck in a limbo. White everywhere. See nothing. Hear nothing. Smell nothing. Feel only pain. Taste blood. Brain in a daze. Filled with cotton wool. Still alive? Don't know. Don't care. It's over. Blood's dried. Time to go. Can't move. Can't do anything. Need to. Bag's up there. I need it. Someone get it for me. But not him. Not him. No, not him. Anyone but him. Someone there? Feel skin. Soft hands. A girl. Voice. Sweet, high. Vulnerable. Like me. She's nice. I like her. Better than him. She's killed him? Hope so. See something. Blonde hair. Whiteness. Not cotton wool daze- skin. The girl. She's helping me. Thank you. Colours brighter. Black, green, brown, blonde, white, red. My red. My blood. It's going now. Blood gone. Girl cleaned it. Thank you. Scream. No blood. Me? No, the girl. What's happening? Injured? Is he here? Can I help? No. Immobile. No one else there. Why pain? Why screams? Stopped. Silence. Don't know. Confused. Poor girl. Should help. Can't. Sorry.