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Chapter 25: The Path of a True Kunoichi

Lynn Loud never though in her lifetime that she have seen enough crazy shit from where she was released from Juvie Hall. There's this crazy group called Taka who are Royal Woods' new criminal organization. But really, from Ms. DiMartino and her family, they called themselves the Uchiha clan, a rival ninja group from Konoha. Her former little brother is roped into this while being called "Rabbit" in a gang of kunoichis. Now here she is, wanting to be part of this crazy plan as a way to try to fix her broken bond with Lincoln.

Now she's tie up in a stump by her partner for failing the exam. Lynn growls in humiliation because A) she's just been single out by everyone who participate in the test to be tied in the stump. B) she had gotten an accidental kiss by Kurenai. It still burns in her memory and she can feel the taste of her slutty kiss. What she should be complaining was the rope binding against her frail body that it might leave marks. Why did they let Karin to tie her up?! C) She's been ponk in the ass by her, which landed the teenage herself to a pond! What kind of a mess up jutsu is that?!

Tsunade and her family were all looking at her; the headmistress is shaking her head with a discomfort glare. Ms. DiMartino held a similar expression like her mother though she cover her mouth to not escape a few giggles. Kurenai's face is still red and looking away from Lynn with a scoff. Anko was grinning and try her best not to laugh, if not for Yugao slapping her at the back of her head (Except she, too, was trying not to smile after hearing from Alyssa). Karin smug victorious as her 'victim' was tied up for punishment, so was Tenten. Lincoln rubs his arm in embarrassment; his face is still red at the memory of Kurenai's attempted kiss under the genjutsu and his former sister taking the bait by accident. Tsume was laughing roarly over the little incident. Shizune blushes and try to shield both Hana and Moegi, who were both innocently asking what was they are laughing. Both Jiraiya and Yamato lay out a few chuckles.

"This is a surprise," Tsunade respond sarcastically. "Your second day of learning to become a kunoichi, and already you have failed the exam."

"Ghaa! Can you let me go?!" Lynn complained, the rope burn is digging to her skin.

"No! You are being punished for your lack of teamwork!" Agreeing with her mother, Ms. DiMartino said "Lynn, the point of this exam was working together with a partner. If you had, then maybe you and Karin would have gotten a bell."

"That's right, baka!" Karin taunted. Lynn gritted her teeth as she blew a raspberry at the crimson teenager.

"But Karin, Lynn here isn't to blame for her own mistakes," Tsunade added, making the girl herself loses her smug attitude. The buxom women glance at her with a disprove look, "You order Lynn-san to run away while staying behind against Alyssa-chan, yet it only took a genjutsu and a Headhunter Jutsu for dropping your guard. Also she was right next to you. Why didn't you help her?" Karin look down, ashamed in herself.

Ms. DiMartino glance at her student, "And you, Lynn, made several mistakes out of Karin-chan, Tenten-chan and Lincoln-kun."

"Like what?" Lynn raises an eyebrow, making a few people roll their eyes in annoyance.

Tsume stated, furrowing her eyebrows "You trashmouth Kurenai-chan at the start of the exam and attack her head on like a idiot."

"You refuse to cooperate with your teammate," Jiraiya started, crossing his arms. Yamato added "And you let Karin-san alone with Alyssa-san."

"Only because she ask me to and you weren't there!" Lynn argue with the butler. "No, but I had a Wood clone hidden in the forest and saw the whole thing," Tenten pointed out. "Not to mention you stupidly walk right into a trap without thinking! A ninja must always see underneath the underneath!"

Lynn replied defensively "Nobody told me this stupid test was going to be filled with traps!"

"If you had just listen to me in the first place, this never would have had happened!" Karin argue, walking up to the other tomboy but was stopped by Yugao.

"Overall, you let your comrade failed of working together because of your ego. Individual mannerism is going to get you or this team kill on a mission," Jiraiya shot down Lynn's pride, whose eyes look down with a frown. "How can you be a kunoichi if you can't follow one simple rule?"

"Which is what, working with a team that I barely even know? A family that despite me for three long years? I don't see this as teamwork if they just give me a chance!"

"Why do you think I ask for this test?" Tsunade asked, making Lynn look at her with eyes slightly wide. "If you have been place into a squad, then you'll understand the point of working together. However, you let your egotistical individual pride get in the way, thinking the great Lynn Loud can take any enemies by herself and not caring about the life of her comrades. You even failed to notice the three lessons during the test."

"Lessons? What lessons?" Lynn asked confusingly. Alyssa answer while moving one finger after another "Lesson number one was Taijutsu. Lesson number two was Genjutsu. Lesson number three was Ninjutsu."

Lynn's mind reflect back to where Tenten and Lincoln fought hand-to-hand combat against Ms. DiMartino (with swords and blades around) and again using mystic powers. From what she learned from her substitute teacher, these were two of three lessons she was referring.

"Wait, what about the second lesson?"

"Genjutsu?"

"Yeah. There's that word again. That guy in the crow's mask said his gang put a trap for me and back at the train station. Just what is it?"

Kurenai answered "Genjutsu is when a ninja control the chakra flow of a target's cerebral nervous system, thereby affecting the five senses. It allows to create false images and or trick the body into believing its has experienced physical pain. What you just witness was Flower Petals Escape. The only method whenever you want to trap yourself and your enemy inside the Genjutsu."

"And Kurenai happens to be a master of it," Yugao added, making the raven haired women smile in pride. Alyssa muttered while deadpan "If you want to trap little boys to get a kiss that is."

"Ok, I screw up," Lynn admitted it. Tsunade pretended to gasp, "Gee, that is a shocker. Not only did you screw up but that kind of selfless attitude is not tolerable with you're with a comrade in the battlefield!"

"We're going against your rival! It's not a war; it's us taking back our town!" Lynn froze when Tsunade's glare increases.

"This rivalry have been going on since we were gifted Ninjutsu! It's always a war! My grandfather and grand uncle both fought against the Uchiha! Many of my family were killed! Don't you dare say that this is never going to happen because it will! As shinobi, we must put our interests aside to make a difficult choice! For instead, Karin!"

Karin reacted and grab Lincoln with a neck hold, shocking Lynn. "Kill Lincoln or Lynn dies!"

"What?!" Lynn shouted.

"You see what happened?" Alyssa said, standing next to her shaken student. "If your comrades hadn't put their interests aside, your enemies would have hesitate to kill you and your comrades as well." Karin release Lincoln, making Lynn sigh in relief. The boy went to Kurenai, who hug him for protection.

Kurenai then glance at her "How would you react if you were to face in a situation?" Lynn's eyes lower and her head turn left with a frown. "I said, how would you react if you were to face in a situation? Give us an answer or you don't have one."

"I…" Lynn begin with an unease look, "I would have…"

"What? Run to the first enemy you see? What if he holds one of us as hostages? What if it was Lincoln-kun? Who would you choice? Yourself or Lincoln-kun?" Lynn try to argue or even yell at the women but the look of her face, combine with several other stares, furrow, disprove, and fear, it made her feel something she would never experience in her lifetime, not even if there was a battlefield.

Weak.

The stares were giving Lynn a hard time. Memories of the town's prejudiced views against her came back to hunt the tomboy.

"Please stop looking at me," She pleaded. Alyssa notices the reaction Lynn was bringing up. "Kurenai, she gets it."

"No she's not," All eyes goes to Tsunade, "In a battlefield, her carelessness and inferior manner will the death of the last Senju clan. If she keeps bringing pushing her denial then she would not survive. She is not worthy of being a kunoichi. She's just a punk."

Lynn's eyes grew wide and glare at the buxom women. "Oh yeah?! How would you know?! Name one person in your family who acted like a punk! Name one!" She yelled, shocking everyone.

Tsunade grit her teeths and her right fist close to make her palm bleed. Knowing that look, Jiraiya put his hand on her left shoulder but is slap away. She and the tomboy glare at each other; Tsunade's expression is toppling her. Shizune shield the two girls, fearing that her mother will punch Lynn to death. Anko and Karin both grin in wanting to see it happen. Tenten and Yugao are ready with their sword out. Kurenai stay back behind Tsume, Jiraiya and Yamato in not helping. Lincoln's face grew worry and look at his former sister of taking back her words. Alyssa grabs Tsunade's left fist and whisper to her ear "Kaa-chan, don't! Think of Lincoln-kun!"

Tsunade's brown eyes look at her little boy and his expression. Lincoln turn to her, shaking his head not to do anything rash. She turn back to Lynn, who is begging to try to answer her question or let the women herself beat her to death. As much as she wanted to beat the foul-mouthed tomboy so horribly, she can't do it in front of Lincoln.

With a loud sigh, she rub her forehead to calm her temper "Whatever. Alyssa-chan, deal with it." Alyssa nod her with a smile. Lincoln closes his eyes in relief.

The Hispanic women turn to Lincoln, Tenten, Karin and Lynn with a serious face "Since everyone failed to get a bell, I decided to get you all four one more chance. But don't expect it would be simple as before. I'm going to throw you all a lot of curveball; don't hold back," She then put on a smile, "For now, it's time for lunch!"

Yamato have provided three bento boxes on the ground. Tenten, Karin and Lincoln all sat and open their lunches; a small bowl of ramen, orange chicken, teriyaki sauce right next to it, three sticks of dangos and slice apples.

Alyssa explained "Here's how it goes; Tenten, Karin and Lincoln will all be eating while Lynn gets nothing."

"Huh?!" Lynn shouted in outrage, her legs were kicking. "This isn't fair!"

"Not to me," Karin smirked.

"Don't share any of your food with Lynn. Otherwise, she will never become a kunoichi, her chakra sealed and memories of who we are gone!" Alyssa finished.

"That's bullshit! Is anyone agreeing with this?!"

"I approve. It'll give you some time to think about your carelessness and attitude," Tsunade mockingly smile at her.

"It's so torture. I love it!" Anko smile evilly. "You're the best, Alyssa-chan!" Kurenai only smirk in addition.

"You have thirty minutes to eat. And remember, don't give any food to Lynn or she'll never be one of us. Bye!" Alyssa walk away to join her family.

Jiraiya declared "I'm hungry as well. Let's head back and have some ramen." Moegi and Hana cheered in union.

Lynn grew pale, "No one is going to help me untied?"

"Itadakimasu!" All three of them started eating their lunches. Tenten chow on a orange chicken in glee. Karin slurp from her bowl of ramen and Lincoln ate one piece of apple. Lynn look at the scene in dismay, her mouth hung for hunger and her stomach growling non stop.

"They're really doing this, even Lincoln!" Lynn didn't want to believe that no one was really going to share their food to her. She would have at least suspect Lincoln might talk some sense between the two girls or give her some of his food.

"Lincoln," Lynn call out. "Lincoln! Share some of your food with me!"

Lincoln had his back turn and his face spell worry as he swallow a chicken that was dipped in teriyaki sauce. Tenten advised "Ignore her, ototo-kun. She must be punished for failing the test."

"Hey, you don't try to butt in! This is between me and my little brother!"

"Former brother," Karin corrected, her eyes close in a superior manner as she ate her dango after dipping into the sauce. "And let me remind you because you already forget, if we give you some food, you won't be one of us."

"Ah, shut up, Ms. Know-It-All!" Lynn growl but her hungry pains defeated her temper. Karin mockingly reply "Careful, your hunger pains might try to eat your brain. Though it'll be a small meal."

Tenten giggle while Lincoln lay out a couple of laughs. Lynn was fuming through her nose and her right eyebrow twitches. She was about to yell but remembers what Ms. DiMartino said. If either of them gives Lynn a single food, she won't be a part of them. With a smirk, she declare "You know what? Go ahead and eat, pigs! I can handle it for one hour! I survive eating ten meatball sub before a game! This is nothing! As soon as the hour pass, I'm going to do whatever it takes to become a stronger kunoichi! And when that happens, you all will acknowledge me! So let's get it on!"

"She is so pathetic," Tenten rolls her eyes, closing her mouth on a dango. Lynn chuckle in glee and though "This is so easy! I'm definitely going to win!"

Twenty five minutes have pass, and Lynn was starting to loss it. Her stomach keeps growling to the point where it feels it ate from the inside. Her mouth is open, and a long drool leaks out.

"Ugh!" Karin sneered in disgust. "She still won't give up!" Tenten complimented "She must really have some guts, if she still have some left."

Lincoln look at his former sister in such a state. There was five minutes left before their lunches are over. So far, their bento boxes barely have anything left. Tenten have bits of ramen left, Karin have one dango and two small pieces of orange chicken and the white haired teenager only have little of teriyaki sauce.

"It won't matter though. Our lunches are almost done," Tenten added, making her two siblings look at her leftover. "As much as I want to eat the ramen, I'm full."

"Me too," Karin pat her chest and burp in response. Lincoln added "Same here. Should we throw them away? Seem like it's a waste though."

"But we have plenty of energy for our next round," Karin pointed out. Lincoln look at the leftover sauce before seeing the other boxes his sisters had. "We could give it to that pest who's been drooling like a baka."

Tenten giggle while Lincoln kept staring at his lunch without a response of his own.

Lynn's eyes was half closed and her stomach keep going on and on to get a single food into her. She spoke with only half sentences "I'm….gonna win….Lynn Loud….number one...show them all...worth it…"

"Here."

Lynn look up and saw Karin holding a box in front of her with a frown and her left hand on her hip. "You're gonna stand there, blubbering like an baka or you gonna eat?"

"Huh?" She look to see Tenten and Lincoln, both holding their leftover lunches. Lynn recompose herself and shook her head "Guys, you can't. I'll never be a ninja if you all-!"

"As much as I want you to leave, Lincoln-kun say that we have to work together. If you still want to get that bell, you have to listen to me," Karin addresses to the brunette tomboy.

"And," Tenten added. "Even if you're dismissed of ever to become a kunoichi, we can try to figure out someway to let you back in. Like Karin said, we have to be like a team."

Lynn looked at Lincoln, who flee behind Tenten's back in alarm. Despite their faces were either frowning, scowling or fearing, all three of them are giving their leftovers to the person they hated. She feels, in someway, touched of their generosity.

Karin feeds Lynn with a stick of dango. The brunette feels her stomach slowly stopping to growl and moan in delight. Tenten holds the ramen from her chopstick as Lynn slurp through her mouth. For Lincoln, he look away as he holds the sauce and Karin dumping the orange chicken in it before Lynn ate it.

Suddenly, a loud smoke cloud exploded behind them. "You guys," A voice spoke through inside the mist as the shape of a curvaceous figure appears and the cowling of a mad Latina women. All three of them stood in battle poses. Lynn saw her dream of fixing the relationship with her brother gone in a flash. "Broke one rule! You know what this means for Lynn!" The brunette tomboy face the worst kind of rejection since being banned from playing in any sports. Her one eye opens and saw Ms. DiMartino's...smiling face?

"She passed!"

"Wha?" Lynn was confused. Tenten, Karin and Lincoln turn their attention to Lynn after standing next to Alyssa, all with smile in their faces. "I don't understand."

"Perhaps I can explain," Lynn saw Tsunade and her entire family returning back after their lunch. "You see, the test here was a demonstration of how teamwork works as Alyssa-chan pointed out. But in the act of teamwork, you have to risk choices that will come to you in the future. Just like how enemies can gather your teammates as hostages, you have to be willing to break the rules."

"Break the rules?" Lynn repeated.

Jiraiya took over, "Alyssa-chan told Lincoln, Tenten and Karin not to give you food or force to drop out in becoming a ninja. That's only because they obey the rules. If this was a real mission and you were the hostage, your team will just do what they tell them to do. If they want to risk saving you, then they have to break the rules."

Kurenai reveal "In Konoha, there's a saying: Those who break the rules in the shinobi world are scum. But those who abandon their comrades are worse than scum."

"And…?" Lynn look at the expression of the three teammates, "They knew all about it?"

"We took the test a few times. This was even Lincoln-kun's second attempt," Tenten added with a grin.

"But why didn't anyone tell me if they knew what was gonna happened?"

"Because this was also a test of your flaws, pup." Tsume answered. "Your short tempered and carelessness were recorded during the exam. You have to learn now how important your teammates are when it comes on the battlefield and risking to break a few rules. Plus we made a little bit on the side to see if those brats didn't give you any food."

Lynn asked unease "And what happen if they didn't?"

"You would have fail, only it's for real." Yamato said. Tsunade cried "And it's too bad! I bet a lot of money to see you gone!"

Alyssa teases "Pay up, kaa-chan," The buxom women took out a huge stacks of money and give it to her daughter. Anko laugh loudly while both Shizune and Yugao shook their heads over their mother's gamble.

Jiraiya leans his head over to his wife with a laugh, "I told you this would happen," Tsunade growl while forcing to smile "Wanna sleep on the couch tonight?" The man put his head back and turn his attention back to Lynn.

"That concludes today's training!" Tsunade yell. "Once again you four passed!" Lynn hear the words "four" and "passed" into her ear canal and knew what this meant for her.

"Yes! Yes, yes, yes! I'm finally a ninja!" Lynn shout joyfully and laugh hysterically like a madwoman. The adults deadpanned while Moegi and Hana clap their hands.

"Should I tell her the pup has a long way to fight like one?" Tsume asked Alyssa, and she responded "Let her enjoy the moment. Shizune, can you untied her and take her to the Nurse's office to heal her marks?"

Shizune walk up to the gloating Lynn who was moving her body to express her victory dance. She takes out a scalpel and with one quick slash, the ropes were broken. Lynn drop down on the ground.

"Damn! Those ropes hurt!" Lynn complain, rubbing her wrist that is light colored red. Shizune gets her up and walk her "Come, Lynn-san."

Tenten yawn as she stretching her arms, "After a three hour training, I think a nice hot bath is calling my name." Karin nods her head, "I hear you, Tenten. I need to get all that dirt off from that Headhunter Jutsu."

"And after that you can spent the next hour how to double check your plans, Karin-chan," Tsunade insisted.

"Yes, kaa-chan!" She moan loudly as the teenager rolls her eyes. Lincoln pops his left arm and is about to head over to take a shower.

"Lincoln-kun, can I escort you to your bathroom?" Kurenai suddenly appears behind him. Lincoln's blush return, seeing the same seductive look in her face. Before he can answer, the teenager felt an aura to his right. Alyssa said with a sweet but deadly smile "I think Lincoln-kun can walk by himself. Or I can walk him."

"Oh, that's ok, nee-chan. I wouldn't mind if I help," Kurenai return back with a deadly smile as well. In emphasis, she put her hand at Lincoln's right shoulder. Alyssa chuckle darkly, making both Jiraiya and Yamato take a few steps back in fear. The Hispanic woman herself put her own hand on the boy's other shoulder as well. Lincoln felt both horrible auras fighting for dominance; more sweat came from his forehead and his blush increases.

"Um, Alyssa-neechan, Kurenai-neechan, can you, um…" Lincoln stuttered and his fingers touch together. "I, um, can, walk by myself…"

These made the two auras disappear with both of them reply grumble "Fine."

Both Tsume and Anko laugh while Yugao shock her head before saying "Lincoln-kun, after shower, we practice more on your Kenjutsu."

"H-Hai, Yugao-neechan!" He squeal and run away quickly while Akamaru follows him. Anko and Tsume collapse on the ground as they continue to laugh. Both Tenten and Karin shock their heads over the immaturity.

"That pup is so adorable!" Tsume cackled, wiping a tear from her right eye. Tsunade felt her forehead coming back, "Honestly, can you two behave like women?" She said to her two daughters, who were still glaring at each other and a spark of lighting came from their eyes.

"Apparently not," Anko added in remark.

Unaware from the rest of the family, a lone figure in a crow mask stand behind next to a tree. The man was staring from the start of the exam.

"Father will hear about this," The man then exploded into a dozen of crows, leaving the family no taking a second behind the meaning of them.

Omake: Lincoln Addressing The Fans of The No Such Luck Controversy.

"And now a word from Lincoln Loud."

The eleven year old boy step on stage and faces the audience, "Hi, I'm Lincoln Loud from The Loud House. You know there's been a lot of talk from the recent episodes me and my family were a part off. But there's one episode I like to address that many fans have been writing stories based on it, No Such Luck. I know everyone hated that episode and it's been used so many times as inspiration for your stories. I like to point out is this, for the love of God, get over it!" His face went to a serious tone. "I look over stories and I admit while I like the style and how it plays out, I am just about had it up to here with that episode! Yes, it was horrible and the ending was really horrible! But move on! I tired of seeing every new stories where I'm getting the abuse, my family getting the abuse and its Lynn who have to suffer from it! It's getting annoying!"

"You damn right!" Lynn Loud, Jr join in with a furious look and looking at the camera. "Hey yo! I'm getting tired of reading stories where I'm label as a 'bitch sister', 'monster' or 'sociopath!' It was a mistake! It was these geniuses fault! So please if you want fans to keep their sanity and me and my brother's sake as well, go do a story from another bad episode you think it's the worst, beside the whole bad luck crap!"

"Thank you, Lynn. And that was-"

"I mean, really? Will it kill you all just to lay off the torture shit I have to go through or the rest of the family?!"

"Ok, Lynn. That's enough," Lincoln move her along but is push aside.

"I didn't ask to be a villain but apparently that's how everyone sees me and the family what they are when they see this episode! Do I have to come over to your houses and beat some senses into your thick skulls?!"

"Thank you, Lynn!" Lincoln moves her away from the stage and look back with a force chuckle. "And that was just it. Remember, no more of stories based on No Such Luck."

"This have been Lincoln Loud with an important message."

"And a message from me: Let's fucking move on and look at our other bad deeds! I'm tired of this shit!"

After giving some thought to it, I decided to put in Omakes at the end of a chapter, if I have some ideas. The first Omake may give me some backlash from my fans but somebody has to say and I know I'm not the only one who need to say it. Every time there's a new story based on NSL and it always reads Lincoln unfairly punish, runs away or takes it while the family feels bad until the end of the story. It affects my emotions, making me a bit angry and a little of my sanity gone. Hopefully it will spread the word out.

P.S. If any of you all feels offended by the Omake, I'm sorry.

So Lynn learns the truth meaning of being a kunoichi, just like in the Manga. Now I have been getting some reviews when does Naruto arrives. That's a secret for now, but I will say that Lynn is like Naruto and Lincoln is like Hinata in this story. Also, there's going to be three characters from the show that will worked with the Uchiha clan.

If you can guess the three famous duo, then I'll post the next chapter sooner. Probably on June 1st, the first day of Summer.

Until then, keep giving me some ideas for what will happen in the next chapter and Omakes. See you later, NiteOwl18 out!