Hey Skaiwalkers! I have WiFi here! Buy I only have internet when I'm actually inside the house, so I won't update a lot, but I'm already happy, otherwise I had to go two weeks with maybe only WiFi at McDonalds. I can't live like that. I admit, I'm totally addicted to the internet, I can't live without it.
And I changed the genre from Friendship to Drama. I think it fits the story better, but Friendship is still a big thing, especially now, only the drama gets big here. Also, the chapter is pretty short, sorry for that...
Responses to reviews: (For both chapters 22 and 23)
KarateGirl77: You're awesome too!
Guest (1): I guess it was cute :)
Anialoveskick: I was hoping that too, and I can. Yay.
panda-l0ver728: Yeah, that big bowl of no good. Ssssssstop it!
autumn1999: I cannot promise anything about Jack waking up soon...
rhinosareawesome19: Haha, glad I can update eventually. :)
bd91346: Thanks!
Imjustme (Guest): Yeah, the second time! That man is a maniac!
AllDaydreamsAreDangerous: Doesn't matter, I like that you like my quotes.
curlygirl02: For the second time, my dear fellow cat-lover. He tried to kill Jack for the second time.
ShawnaCrazyGirl: Hahaha.
Indiebay: Yaaay!
bigdreamer1597: Here is the next chapter.
jendallforever: Here is more.
jendallforever: Of course they do!
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kickinfan321: Haha, great review!
Hanneli Steyn (Guest): Haha, wel leuk dat je het probeert in het Nederlands. Anders kan je altijd nog gewoon in het Engels of Afrikaans reviewen hoor, maakt mij niet uit. Hah, it's fun that you try to review in Dutch. Otherwise you can always review in English of African, I don't mind.
emylova: Oh Gosh you're reading my story! I read all yours! Eep, I loved them!
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Previously on 'You spin my World':
"Who is it?" Grace asked again. "Mrs. Brewer, I'm unfortunate to inform you that the person who hit Jack's car, was in fact, your father, Lane Brewer." The doctor said displeased. At the sound of his name, Grace could do nothing but faint, knowing that this wasn't an accident, but the second time of attempted murder on Jack Brewer.
The hospital: Room 742
"Grace, Gracie? Graciebelle?" Jerry said softly, trying to wake his unconscious girlfriend up. Grace' head was throbbing, as if she hit her head against a concrete wall. Her mind was fuzzy, and she had no memory of the last few minutes, until it all came flooding back to her. "I'm... Going to... Fucking kill him." Grace murmured, her headache affecting her voice. "Grace, you're awake." Jerry said happily, hugging Grace tight.
"Jerry, help me up, I need to become a murderer." Grace said harshly, venom dripping from her voice. Jerry took Grace' wrists in his hands, stopping her from getting up. "No Grace, calm down. I know what he has done is bad, but you need to stay under the covers right now." Jerry said worriedly. Grace looked around, her eyes still adjusting to the bright lights of the hospital room. "Jer, where's Kim?" Grace asked softly, not acknowledging the presence of her best friend in the room.
"She's in Jack's room. She hasn't come out in days." Jerry said worried, sadness and worry spreading across his tired, worn-out face. "Days? Jerry, how long have I been out?" Grace asked panicky. "A week. You've been out for a week, and so has Jack." Jerry said, his voice cracking at the mention of Jack.
"Dang it, I missed James' birthday party." Grace joked. "Well," Jerry joked along, "so did I, so you didn't really miss anything." Grace smiled at her boyfriend's goofiness, even in the worst situations, he could make you laugh.
The hospital: Room 394
In Jack's room, things were less pleasant. Kim had never left Jack's side, only to go the bathroom or clean herself up. Food had been brought to her, and she was even offered the bed in the same room as Jack's, even though she never used it.
She sat besides his bed, clutching his hand tightly as she spoke soft, sweet words to him. "Jack, I need you. I-Grace is still unconscious, at least, I haven't heard from Jerry. I guess both Jerry and I didn't leave. I need to know what happened Jack, why did Grace faint when she heard your father's name? I know I asked this many times before, but I need to know. Jack, please wake up, I-I love you." Kim said, strangling the sobs stuck in her throat. Her voice sounded hoarse and groggy.
Kim hadn't eaten in days, she just drank some water from time to time. She knew Jack didn't want her to do this if he were there, but she just couldn't think straight right now. It was as if her whole world was collapsing around her. She just wanted him to wake up, to be with her, hug her. She swore that if he ever woke up, she would hold him and never let go.
But, the promise also saddened her, because of the 'if'. If, he wakes up. If, he survives. If, he comes back. She just couldn't handle all the bad things that could happen, so, she did the only thing she could. She sat besides him, fay and night, holding his hand, hoping for him to wake up.
But he wouldn't. He just wouldn't wake up. He just laid there, nothing happening. No changes. Even though the doctors said his chance of survival is big, Kim couldn't let loose of the thoughts of all that could go wrong.
Jerry and a stumbling Grace softly entered Jack's room, seeing a worn-out blonde sitting next to Jack's bed, clutching his hand tightly, crying. Jerry and Grace just stood still and listened to her cries and pledge's. Jerry had seen it before, but this was the first time for Grace, and it saddened her to see her best friend like this.
She stumbled out of Jerry's arms and slowly paced towards her best friend. "Kim?" She whispered softly, trying to break through the trance she seemed to be stuck in. "Kim, can you hear me?" Grace said, raising her voice a little. Kim slowly looked up, finding Grace staring at her with watery eyes filled with worry and relieve. "Oh Grace." Kim exclaimed, before lunging at her best friend, hugging her tight.
"You woke up." Kim whispered happily. "I had to, I see that you need me my little panda." Grace joked. Kim smiled, knowing that her mascara probably was permanently stuck on her face. "How are you?" Kim asked softly. "My head feels like concrete and my body is limp, but I'm fine. I really am." Grace assured Kim. "How's Jack?" Grace asked. Kim turned back to Jack, looking at his limp body. "The same, he's still breathing by himself, but that's about it."
Kim stepped aside, so Grace could go to Jack. Grace stepped forward hesitantly, before settling herself down on the chair Kim previously sat on. She took his hand in hers and stayed quiet. Kim and Jerry looked confused, until they saw her mouth moving slightly, forming soundless words.
"Jack, it was Lane. He tried to kill you again. Wake up soon, I think he's gonna come for me any moment. I'm scared Jack, for all of us. I love you brother, and I need you." Grace said softly, so only she, and hopefully Jack, could hear. Suddenly, Grace felt something move on her hand. But as soon as the feeling came, it went away.
Grace gasped and looked at her hand, which was held by Jack. She looked closely, but nothing happened. Thinking it was probably a fly, Grace turned her attention away from her hand, until she felt something again. She quickly looked back at her hand, and this time, she saw the cause.
She saw Jack's thumb softly caressing her hand.
Tada! Jack moved! Eeeeeeeeeep! Is he finally going to wake up, or was it an impulse? And what about that Lane we all strongly dislike? And, of course, the release party of 'Burn it down' being in FIVE DAYS?!
"It's that little thing, that small movement, that you need, because that little thing, can give you hope in even the darkest of times." - Skai Luna (Yup, an original one again :D Thoughts? I've done better, I think...)
Xx Skai
