Echo of Spiraling Heart
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Kenshin: Look at this Haou. Only a few reviews for last chapter, about how I lost so easily against Itachi and the others.
Haou: Heh. You got your ass kicked.
Kenshin: Shut up! I have no idea what was up with that either. I had no way of beating him.
Haou: That's because at the moment you were a mere human. Without Reid, chakra, or training like Rock Lee I was surprised you lasted even that long against such a prized member of Akatsuki.
Yugito: That does make sense. But these reviews also talk about how unfair and super powered the villains are.
Haou: Since when aren't villains extremely strong? Every Dark Ring made by Madara is based on a couple of dark orbs from another manga, and have a downfall. Besides that Jiraiya and Kakashi were outnumbered one to two. Had it been one on one even I wouldn't know who would win.
Yugito: So you're saying they were just ganged up on? With such unfair powers you would think there could be no way they could be beaten.
Kenshin: Exactly. Now that that's cleared up let's start the story. Yugito, jump in so you can get to your fight.
Chapter 25: The Calm Before The Storm: Chunin Exam Finals
"Naruto, how did you get this black eye again?" Sakura asks Naruto, rubbing ointment on his eye. He looks up at her, as his eye begins to heal of its own accord.
'Is this the power of his Reiton, or that blue thing I was told about?' She thinks, referring to the blue lines pulsating from under his eye.
"Tenten got mad when I said I...I mean, she got mad when I wanted to get to know Yugito more." He lies, not wanting a powerful chunin like Sakura to know that he steals girls underwear.
"Well, you know how much Tenten is protective of you. That promise you made her is what keeps her together everyday." Sakura then kisses his eye. "There. All better. You'll be fine."
Naruto then smirks deviously, and points to his lips with his claw index finger. "This spot hurts too."
"Really?" Sakura then presses her lips onto his own, kissing with as much love and feeling as she could muster in that single one.
After releasing his lips, and taking a gander at his nosebleed, she then smiles. "It looks like I need to kiss you some more times..." And with that the two lovers make out with eachother, with Naruto's right hand reaching the back of her shirt to pull down the zipper.
"FREAKIN' SHAMELESS!!" And they would have continued had Yugito's voice disturbed them.
"YOU'RE THE FREAK, BUG GIRL!!" That was Tenten's voice.
"I'M A GODDAMN CAT!!" Losing the mood, Naruto turns towards the window, then walks over to the door with a long sigh. Sakura blinks within her own confusion, not knowing what was going on.
"Did Naruto just pass up sex?"
Outside The Hokage Manor...
"You're an incredibly despicable woman. You might as well go join those girls on Crack Whore Ninja-zine!" Yugito says to the brunette. And who says blondes are stupid?
"You shouldn't talk shit about my love life when you don't even have one!" Tenten yells back. Yugito tenses up in rage.
"What?"
"You know exactly what I'm talking about; you always talk about people doing shameless acts, and following rules and such, but have you ever fallen in love with anyone?" Tenten asks Yugito. The jinchuuriki becomes even more enraged.
"You better stop talking." Her chakra flares up.
"I bet no one approaches you because they see you as a boring shut in. You probably don't even have a vagina!" Tenten shouts proudly.
That was the last straw; being reminded of boys staying far away from her, because of her condition and position, was something she hated so much. Yugito swings her left leg and slams it into Tenten's skull, knocking her into the house.
Just as Naruto was about to head for the door, Tenten comes crashing through them. She slides past Naruto and all the way into the living room fountain. Her clothes dampen and soak entirely. She looks up and sees Naruto, who notices that her curves were showing especially nicely.
"Oh Naruto! That girl attacked me!" She blushes when she notices that he is watching her. Looking away Naruto prevents himself from looking at Tenten in such a way; it would only be fair if she was in the mood.
"Who, Yugito?" Naruto asks her, just before the woman herself runs in through the doorway after Tenten.
The cat woman passes by Naruto and mounts a punch for her face. Tenten slips to the side and flips her into the fountain. Like Tenten, Yugito's clothes soak with water so damn much they were literally hanging off her body.
Tenten pins Yugito down with her arms on her shoulder, while Yugito grabs onto a part of Tenten's loose clothing. She then pulls on her to try and move her off, but only is able to rip off her clothing.
Tenten's white lace bra could be seen from what was removed by Yugito. Growling, Tenten rips at the cat girl's clothing, revealing her black wonderbra and the giant melons hidden within nicely. The two angry kunoichi start pulling on each other's clothes, as their half exposed breasts rub against the others.
Naruto watches the entire event, his pants tightening and his nose bleeding by an incredible amount. "Holy damn, this is hot."
"I'm just as pleasing to a man's eyes as any of you sluts in Naruto-kun's harem!" Yugito yells, slapping across Tenten's cheek twice.
"Then why hasn't he kissed you yet!? If Naruto finds you even half attracted he would spend no less time asking for your hand in marriage!!" Tenten yells back, smacking her forehead into Nii's.
"What?" Yugito begins to blush upon thinking of Naruto kissing her. With such arousalness, she begins to notice that her skirt had been torn to pieces. How it happened while they were wet she didn't know, but believed it could be related to chakra manipulation.
'My clothes are gone...' She looks back and sees Naruto watching them, then turns completely red as she pushes away the Higurashi.
"Naruto!" She quickly runs to behind the dragon figurine in the fountain, slipping on the wet floor as well. She finally hides from him, and pokes her head out from where she hid. "What are you doing, looking at me in such a condition!?"
"I'm sorry. You two were just so attractive that I couldn't help but look." Naruto says out of honesty, as both Tenten and Yugito blush from the comment. Yugito was surprised mostly, as she could not understand why her heart stopped by those words.
'Is this what attracts those other women to him? Am I falling in love with him in such a short time?' She shakes her head to try and reassure herself.
Some boy she has hardly known for less than a day has touched her heart in such a way no man has ever been able to before, even her father. No! She would not let her guard down against this guy, who probably doesn't even realize the pain she goes through.
Yugito turns around to talk to Naruto again, when as soon as she turns she spots his face looking at hers. Blushing even deeper she shrieks and jumps back, hiding beside the statue once again. "What the hell are you doing?!"
"You wouldn't say anything for a while, so I came to see what was wrong." Naruto states. Tenten blinks to Naruto's sudden actions.
'He's trying to get her to open up? She'll never do something like that, that bug hussy!' Tenten believes in her mind, showing her hatred for the cat woman so much.
"I'm fine. Just go away." She says, blushing while turning away from him.
"Sure. I'll leave you to have fun." Naruto says, walking away from her. Yugito, still unable to release the redness around her face, looks at him as he leaves the house.
'Is this really what true love feels like?' Yugito places a hand onto her heart, feeling it beat slowly with every thought of him that enters his mind.
"Stealing Naruto's affection from me..." Tenten grumbles under her breath.
Elsewhere...
"Thank you once again." Jiraiya says to a pale looking woman.
Him and Kakashi were saved just recently by the woman they were planning to meet with days later. Ester looks to her left at both of them, and smiles. "It's nothing. I heard from you that Kenshin was with you. Where is he?"
As she looks around them in gladness, both the male shinobi look at one another, then at the ground with a deep depression. Kakashi then says, "We aren't sure of his fate. An explosion happened with him in it."
Ester then gasps in fear of what he could mean. Her eyes become teary. "You mean he's-"
"Dead." A voice states from behind her. She quickly turns around and sees Reid standing behind them. "His body has been burned beyond repair by a man named Itachi. His power must rely on the use of flames and explosives."
"Kenshin..." Ester soon begins to cry, but wipes them away in a hurry. Reid tenses upon seeing her face, remembering this girl from the boy's past. Knowing of his death really will be hard for her to handle.
"And just who are you?" Kakashi asks Reid, now noticing he had no knowledge of who this person is. The dragon god turns his head away from him.
"I'm nothing more than an assailant who came to stop Madara. I also have reason to believe that he's heading for Konoha for two main reasons." Reid explains, as the clouds above the forest trees darken. A storm is about to appear.
Back In Konoha...
Sasuke looks up at the skies, rubbing his hands up and down where his wound was. Placing his hand onto one of his swords he masters a tight grip onto it. "Naruto's having fun, and I'm still single. I sometimes wish I hadn't come up with that plan."
"Well it did cause alot of problems." A female voice says behind him. Freaking out and almost falling from the roof Sasuke sees an Inuzuka woman sitting behind him.
Climbing back up Sasuke asks, "What the hell prompted you to scare me like that?!"
She chuckles. "You aren't afraid of women are you?" She asks him, resting her head on her left hand.
Sasuke frowns and blushes. "What kinda stupid ass type of fear is that? No woman can can send chills up my spine."
"Oh really? Then go out with me." She says, staring down at him with a smile.
"Why would I go out with you? You're not even pretty!" Sasuke states, finally finding his footing. The Inuzuka grows an anger mark, and punches his face with her right hand.
"Bonkotsu, I'm giving you a free date and you insult me?!" - Inuzuka
"WHO ARE YOU CALLING BONKOTSU!?" Sasuke draws his swords and holds them to her neck.
She grabs them by the blades and pulls him closer. She then grabs him into a headlock. "Don't look down at me, Bonkotsu!"
"Could a Bonkotsu do this!?" Sasuke then breaks out of the headlock and places his lips on hers. The kiss warms the Inuzuka's insides, even causes her to blush even harder than before.
Sasuke then pulls back, but she pushes him even harder onto her lips. The two shinobi then continue their wet, hot makeout session. A minute passes and the two of them are seen lying on the rooftops side by side.
"That was fun. Guess I can call you the Kissing Bonkotsu." She says, her chunin vest lying beside her. Sasuke was on her right, with his swords laying on his own.
"Stop calling me Bonkotsu. I'm not a freakin' ordinary man." Sasuke states, anger marks appearing all over his head.
"You look plenty ordinary to me; the only thing different about you from normal people is the fact that you have three swords. So you're a Santoryu Bonkotsu, Sasuke." She mentions to him. Sasuke tries his best to ignore her words, and becomes grateful that he has atleast one woman by his side.
'Can love really be this random?'
Two Days Later...
Today was the day; the day of the Chunin Exams. This was the day many of the genins around the world have been waiting and training for. Kages from across the nations have come here to witness the newest talent making it to Chunin.
Naruto is totally depressed at the moment; standing behind the doors that would lead him outside the Twilight ninja, in an orange jumpsuit with wraps around his black arm and hand, he sighes with depression. "I can't believe he's gone."
"Naruto, calm down. People die everyday." Kurenai says, standing before him and fixing his clothes up.
"But, he was my sensei, my strongest one. Hearing that he just suddenly died just makes me feel depressed." He confesses, as Kurenai straightens his jumpsuit.
"It'll be okay, Naruto. You can't focus on him at the moment; you have to do your best here if you plan on passing to Chunin." Kurenai says to him. The young clan member sighes with still depression.
Kurenai then groans depressed. He then places a hand into his pants and brings him out of deep thinking. "Kurenai-chan, what are you doing?!"
"Motivating you to focus." Kurenai then pulls his pants down, exposing the giant log she was fondling. It erects to a longer length, allowing her to orally make love to it. She kisses the tip of it with a wet suction.
"Oh man, this feels so good." Naruto says, feeling a tingling sensation to explode within him. He moaned through closed lips, trying to hold himself back from crying out to the other people outside. The minute people hear a passionate moan coming from them will make it one minute more until some pervert watches them.
Kurenai has her mouth around the erection, sucking and bobbing on the cock with as much speed and intensity as she could muster. Her hands remove themselves from his penis and went onto his ass, squeezing his butt cheeks and pushing her head closer to the cock.
"Kurenai, I'm coming!!" Naruto spoke, trying his best not to yell out. Kurenai on the other hand deep-throats him, until something wet and sticky touched her insides. Naruto stands limp for a minute, allowing the incredible sensation to sweep across him, then notices Kurenai was swallowing semen.
The busty brunette releases her mouth from his penis, and looks up at him. "That was so tasty. I may want more later."
"Really?!" The currently horny ninja wonders. Kurenai then smiles, after heading to his ear.
"Sure, if you so happen to pass Chunin. I might even have the girls join me...for a cock-meat sandwich." She whispers in his ear seductively. This only serves to making his penis grow. Grabbing it and putting it back into his pants he nods vigorously. "Make me proud, my little husband."
"Y-Y-Yes, Kurenai-chan!!" He says, then runs out to where the other Chunin Exam Finalists were.
Kurenai then snickers while licking her mouth again. "He's so cute when he's horny. It just turns me on..."
Outside...
Naruto, Sasuke, Konohamaru, Hanabi and five other ninjas were standing in a row between a circular stadium of people. Above in the stands are the Kage of the Five Elemental Nations: The Hokage Tsunade, the Mizukage, the Kazekage Gaara and the Tsuchikage. The only one missing was the Raikage for some reason.
'There's one missing.' Naruto soon notices the missing leader of the Cloud Village.
Konohamaru looks to his side and notices Naruto is okay. Unknown to him Hanabi is staring at him with a blush. Sasuke on the other hand has his eyes closed and his hands on his katana handles.
'One of my swords is still broken. I'll have to rely on Ao Kiji and Aka Inu. Good thing Hana helped me practive that technique.' Sasuke thinks, looking back at Naruto and opening his eyes.
"Naruto, don't let your guard down. If we have to fight then I won't hold back, even if you're still hung over by your sensei's death." Sasuke says to him. Naruto looks at him and smiles.
"Don't worry. I'll become Chunin no matter what; then I'll beat the shit out of whoever murdered Kenshin." Naruto vows, tightening his right hand.
After introductions and a speech made by Tsunade, the first fight was made; Uchiha Sasuke vs Koyuki Yuga.
Sasuke turns to face his opponent; a lovely woman with a white blue yukata. Her light blue hair glistens in the light of the sun and her pupiless white eyes pierce into Sasuke's. Her silky smooth right hand touches onto the hilt of the zanbato hanging on her back.
As ordered and like in Naruto's first Chunin Exams, everyone else walks up to the podium under the stands where the people watching were. Naruto looks back at Sasuke, then nods knowingly at him. The Uchiha nods back, and looks at his opponent.
"You're to be my next victim. Would you like to die quickly, or slowly?" The beautifully, but scary woman asks Sasuke. The Uchiha doesn't asnwer her, and instead draws his blue sword.
Pointing it to her he says, "Don't bullshit with me. You'll be on your knees begging in seconds."
Her eyes glow brightly in response to her anger flaring up. "Guess you want it slowly."
Genma, watching the two banter verbally, then shouts, "Begin the match!"
Yuga does a number of handseals. "Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Yukizou Jizo!"
After she bites her fingers she presses onto the ground, before the ground around them begins to shake. Soon ice rises from the earth, freezing the ground around them and creating an ice statue of a giant Mahayan Buddhist Bodhisattva. The statue rises up from the ground, with a staff ready to battle with, and towers over Sasuke.
"Ittoryu Ougi." The Uchiha activates his Sharingan, allowing the wheels to spin, as energy collects around his right hand and katana. The energy takes the form of a sligthly bigger japanese sword, with the energy at the end of the hilt spiraling to his other hand. It then wraps around his hand as if it was some sort of chain. "Ichigentou!"
"Don't bother trying to fight it." Yuga warns him. Sasuke then jumps into the air at the statue, grabbing his sword's hilt with both hands. "Even though it's made of ice, it's harder than steel. This ice of mine is extremely-"
She pauses when Sasuke slices clean through the statue, reducing it into a pile of icy rubble. Sasuke then slides across the ice, stopping at an obstacle he heads to. Looking at her face Sasuke sees that the normally scary looking woman was actually quite surprised. "-strong?!"
"You were saying?" The Uchiha gloats, smiling confidently in his ability to defeat this woman.
"Damn. This is what he was training to do?" Naruto says, looking down at the proud swordsman. The Tsuchikage watches Sasuke's triumph over the ice statue, his slitted yellow eyes hidden under his veil.
In the stands, another cloaked figure watches the fight as well, but pays close attention to the blond boy with the other ninjas competing. He looks at him closely, with a Sharingan eye spinning hidden under his mask.
Kenshin: I hope that makes you guys happy.
Haou: Hey guys, guess what?!
Yugito: We don't want to.
Haou: I've got some grass.
Kenshin and Yugito turn to see that Haou has a giant bag of weed. Yugito even gasps.
Kenshin: Where the hell did you get that?
Haou: I stole it and a car from some stoners. They were too damn high to tell the difference.
Yugito: Never smoked weed before.
Kenshin: I don't think this is such a good idea.
Elsewhere a couple of guys exit a house. Looking at the empty curve in front of their house, then to the sides of the street, the first one asks, "Dude, where's my car?"
Ittoryu Ougi: Single Sword Style Secret Technique
Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Yukizou Jizo; Summoning Technique, Ice Statue Jizo
Ichigentou: Single Illusion Sword
Bonkotsu: Normal Person