Well some of you seemed to like the new format, some of you didn't

The only reason I type like this is so that it's easy to read, something AlexanderTheGeist noticed, thank you by the way~

Anyway, I'll try it again for a chapter or two and see how people like it, this means you can't be too shy to review

I will not have people that have read these chapters complaining that I should keep it in the new format if they said nothing, now, onto the story

Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto or anything related to the anime or manga

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Haku started walking into the Nakamura Estate to relax for a little bit, and Ryuko would've followed if she hadn't heard the sound of the air being disturbed by a person. Her eyes narrow and she jumps away just in time to avoid a chakra enhanced punch that shattered the ground where she previously stood. Haku turned around and both girls looked to Ryuko's would be attacker, only for their eyes to widen when they see just who it was. A pair of blazing red Sharingan stared into Ryuko's soul, black hair flowed in the wind under a straw hat along with a black robe with red clouds decorating it. The robes hid a toned yet voluptuous body, E cup breasts that held no sag, thick and firm thighs, and a beautiful booty that her pants almost couldn't contain. Ryuko forces herself to quickly get over her shock and activates her own Sharingan, not willing to back down despite being outclassed.

"Itachi Uchiha of all people.. Me and my mother hold no ill feelings towards you, we know what happened, so why are you here?" Itachi smiles and takes off her hat, allowing it to be taken by the wind. "You really are an interesting one Ryuko Nakamura. Me and my partner are part of an organization known as the Akatsuki, we're here to gather the nine Tailed Beasts and combine them into their original form in order to secure peace in the Elemental Nations."

Ryuko's eyes widen in horror as she hears this, and she thinks back to Kaguya, enslaved to the Ten Tails's power and trapped within her own mind. "No! You can't hope to control it, it's a wild beast that will take the chakra of everyone in this world and kill them all! Itachi I know you're not a fool, you must know this!"

Itachi stares at Ryuko curiously and crosses her arms. "You seem well informed of the Ten Tails, but that won't matter. Me and my partner will take either you or Naruko and extract the Tailed Beast from your body to aid us in our goal." Ryuko growls and summons her sword in it's enlarged form, charging Itachi with her Sharingan blazing a murderous bright red. "You will do no such thing!"

She took a heavy swing at Itachi, only for someone to jump in between them a block her strike with.. A sword wrapped in bandages? "Grrr, what the hell?!" She pushed harder and the person with the sword was moved back a bit, before they pushed back and forced Ryuko to pull back lest she stumble. Now it was Haku's turn to gasp and go wide eyes, this person with blue skin and a shark like face was familiar to her in the worst way. "N-no... Itachi Uchiha, and Kisame Hoshigake?!"

Once Ryuko hears the name she jumps a few feet back in caution, making Kisame smirk. Despite having such baggy robes they still couldn't hide the curve of her breasts, only a few cup sizes smaller than Tsunade, and her lower body went well with her large chest. "Careful kid, come quietly and I won't have to break something." Ryuko sighs and closes her eyes, inhaling deeply and exhaling to calm herself down. The pair of missing nin observe curiously as Ryuko seems to change somehow, but they immediately notice why. Where her Sharingan once was, was a fox pupils with three tomoe circling it.

Ryuko smirks and pops her neck loudly. "Well, let's try that again shall we?" Suddenly she's gone from sight, reappearing on Kisame's right and giving her nearly no time to block the heavy strike aimed for her head, and giving her a hard time blocking once their blades connected. "S-shit, where the hell was she hiding this on that first swing?!"

Itachi jumps over them and gets on the other side of Ryuko. "She has gone into Sage Mode, be very careful Kisame, this will be a bit difficult." Poor Haku could do nothing but stand and watch as Ryuko was forced to fight the two S rank shinobi. 'I-I wouldn't be any help at all, I have to do something... Y-yes, that's it!' She suddenly blurs through hand signs with an angry gaze in her eyes, slamming her hands together and blowing icy mist into the sky in the shape of a wolf. "Ice Style: Ice Wolf Mist Jutsu!"

Itachi and Kisame glance at her briefly with curiosity before resuming their assault on Ryuko, who was having a hard time fighting them by herself. She suddenly manages to break away and runs down the path to the training fields. "You want the fox? Come and get her!"

Kisame growls in irritation and leads the chase with Itachi following close behind. Ryuko knew she wouldn't be able to run away for very long, so she ran into the closest training field that she saw and faced the Akatsuki members, dropping into her fighting stance. She keeps close eyes on the pair as they circle her, gritting her teeth and trying to anticipate when they would attack. She tenses up and brings her sword behind her in time to block Itachi's punch with the flat of her blade, then spinning to bring it outward while hitting Itachi with the hilt to block Kisame, who nearly knocked her sword out of her hands.

"Come on kid, just give it up. We can take you, or your girlfriend, that's your choice." Ryuko stays silent, her eyes hidden to Kisame by her hair. "Fine, if that's how you wanna play we'll knock you out and bring you to the Gedo Statue that way." She smirks in triumph and swings her sword at Ryuko's head, only for Ryuko to suddenly duck and send her skidding away with a powerful punch to the stomach.

Kisame coughs up a few drops of blood and glares daggers at the young Nakamura, who's hair was now moved to reveal a six bladed design in her Sharingan. (check my DeviantArt: SuperRyuko if you wanna know) Itachi looks at it with slight shock, but quickly schools her features. "I see you have the Mangekyo Sharingan as well, though knowing who your mother is I'm willing to guess you didn't get it by normal means."

Ryuko couldn't help but smirk a bit and nod. "Mhm, gotta love seals right? And since I don't think I should hold back, I'll just take this a step further." She's suddenly bathed in a gentle light that obscures her body from view, but once the light dies down she was revealed to be in True Sage Mode just like she was when she fought Kizami. Her mask was black and red like her armor, her Etrnal Mangekyo Sharingan eyes paired with those of a fox glared at them. Itachi was unable to hide her shock this time, but like before she managed to steel herself and charge Ryuko with Kisame.

Kisame growls in irritation when nine black fox tails stop her sword while Ryuko stops Itachi's fist, knowing Samehada couldn't absorb this chakra. "I'll give you this brat, you've become a significant pain in the ass." She then nods to Itachi, who activates her own Mangekyo Sharingan. "Amaterasu!"

Ryuko grits her teeth as her tails are lit on fire by the inextinguishable black flames. "Itachi's flames can't be extinguished, even my strongest water jutsu can't do anything to them!" Ryuko pops her neck as her EMS spins wildly. "Fine then, if I can't extinguish them.." She suddenly jumps back about fifteen feet and hunches down on all fours, swinging her tails down to the ground in front of her. "Then I'll just give them back!"

Itachi and Kisame both jump back as her tails come down, sending Itachi's black flames back at them in the form if a forward moving column of fire. "W-what the? Itachi, is that supposed to happen?" Itachi retreats into her thoughts for a second, before sighing in slight irritation. "I forgot, during the Chunin Exams she said that her Mangekyo's ability is the ability to copy other Mangekyo abilities." Kisame's eye twitches in anger as she slowly turns to Itachi. "Ok, one: that's a very important thing to forget. Two: THAT IS SUCH BULLSHIT!"

Ryuko couldn't help but laugh as she hefts her sword on her shoulder. "Well even if I can't win, I can be happy knowing I managed to give you two a run for your money by yourself." Itachi couldn't help but let a smile grace her features. "Yes, I suppose there's that. Let's get on with it, I'm not sure how long Kisame will be trying to capture you rather than kill you."

The young Chunin sighs softly and drops into her stance with her sword once again, Sharingan spinning quickly as her opponents charge her. It was mainly thanks to her Sharingan that she was even able to dodge or block all of the attacks, but the power behind them was beginning to wear her down bit by bit. She would grit her teeth as she would keep them back, trying to buy time to see if anyone would come, she was sure that's what Haku was trying to do.

But she couldn't do it forever. After a few more minutes of fighting Kisame uses Samehada to smack her away into a tree, dropping her sword a few feet away. She quickly moves to grab her sword, only for Itachi to kick it away and kick her in the face, sending her rolling in the opposite direction. Kisame smirks viciously and raises her sword up high. "End of the line kiddo, don't worry, the ritual will be painless~" She then brings her sword down, determined to knock Ryuko out with this last blow. That is, until Kisame is kicked away by someone.

Ryuko looks up when she feels a lack of a sword smashing her skull, her eyes wide when she sees none other than Kizami in her own version of True Sage Mode. She grabs Ryuko's arm and pulls her up with a chuckle. "Oh come on Ryuko, letting these two push you around like that? I thought you were tougher than that." The fox sage glares halfheartedly at Kizami, before huffing and turning to their opponents. "I'll handle Itachi, go get my sword and go after Kisame, and for Kami's sake be careful, they're both S-rank missing nin for a reason."

They all stand there staring at one another on opposite sides of the field, observing a leaf that had been blown off a tree. They watch as it coasts softly along through the air until it hits the ground, and once it does Ryuko and Itachi charge each other while Kisame runs after Kizami, who grabs Ryuko's sword off of the ground. While Kizami is forcibly introduced to the way of the sword, Ryuko is knocked into the air by Itachi, who watches cautiously as Ryuko starts blazing through hand signs. "Fire Style: Great Fire Annihilation!"

Ryuko cups her hands over her mouth like she was going to yell, only for a massive wave of fire to leave her mouth and fly towards Itachi, who narrowly dodges with small embers burning her jacket a little. Meanwhile with Kizami and Kisame, the former member of the Seven Swordsman of the Mist was trying to overpower Kizami, who was making up for her lack of skill in swordplay with her brute strength, making Kisame stagger as much as she would.

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Meanwhile: at the Nakamura Estate

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Takeda was running out of the house with her armor half on, stumbling over her sandals as she puts them on while running. "Haku! What the fuck is happening?!" The ice user looks at the Nakamura matriarch in panic, running over to her. "T-takeda! Kisame Hoshigake and Itachi Uchiha have come for Ryuko to extract her half of the Nine Tails!" Takeda's eyes widen when she hears this, and she kneel down to put a hand on Haku's shoulder. "Where did they go Haku? Don't hold out on me, I need to know exactly what's going on."

The distraught girl nods softly and sniffles a bit. "S-she ran away with them so she wouldn't damage the estate and I wouldn't be in the line of fire.. They're most likely in the closest training grounds Ryuko could get to." Takeda nods and gives Haku a gentle hug before standing back up. "Don't worry Haku, I'll get her back, she's giving them a hard time along with someone else." Haku smiles softly and blushes a bit. "I-I called in some help with a jutsu I made up on the fly."

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Back with Ryuko and Kizami

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Ryuko and Itachi were currently locking hands, trying to push the other back while Kizami swung at Kisame, starting to get better with Ryuko's sword. "What's wrong Itachi? Having a bit of a hard time dealing with a Chunin?" Itachi grits her teeth as she pushes Ryuko a bit harder. "Elite Chunin, and your lineage makes you a pain in the ass!" The Nakamura smirks and pushes back. "Oh don't I know it? Even if they're not here my family watches out for me and keeps me safe!"

Meanwhile Kisame was growing extremely irritated by Kizami as she continued to hold her off. "Why won't you just give up already?!" Kizami growls and gives Kisame a particularly hard swing that sends her skidding back a bit. "Sorry, I guess I just don't know how to!" They lock swords and glare at each other as they push back on one another. "Never in my life have I met someone able to actually match me in strength to an extent, I'll give you credit for that."

Kizami smirks and pushes a bit harder. "I've still got more to give, don't count me out yet." Kisame couldn't help but give a shark like grin when she hears this. 'This girl pisses me off to no end but it's so much fun fighting her!' Kisame then decides to kick her away and chuckle a bit. "I must admit between you and that Nakamura girl I've never fought anything like you. You and that girl both cling to your strengths while working on your weaknesses in the middle of a battle, even hiding special abilities in order to get the drop on us. I'm very impressed."

A very loud crash was heard behind them, turning around to see a dust cloud behind Ryuko and Itachi, who were just as surprised. Once the dust settles a woman is revealed, down on one knee and fist in the ground, it was clear she had made the crater via hard impact with the ground. Long spiky black hair flowed past her shoulders, wearing a simple tank top under armor similar to Ryuko's that covered the entirety of her arms and legs as well as her chest. She slowly stood up with clenched fists, blood red Sharingan spinning quickly as she gazes at a now terrified Itachi and Kisame with nothing but rage.

She takes a step and the ground cracks underneath her foot, her hair starting to float due to some unknown force, perhaps by subconsciously channeling chakra into it. She holds out her hand and summons a jet black staff similar in fashion to the Third Hokage's staff, but not as thick. "If you do not tell me everything you know about these 'Akatsuki' and why they wish to take my daughter away from me, I will show you what Hell truly looks like."