Hey everyone. So I was bored and decided to reread the story and found that it was horrible. With overusage of words, horrible grammar, mistakes in my sentences, and the characters behaving like they wouldn't I believe I will rewrite the story. I will leave this on up until I have the other completely posted. I just think I did a horrible job of writing this story so far. Anyway the new title will be The Chaos of Life. Anyway thanks for understanding!