"So, are you ready for this, Victini?" Keldeo asked.
Victini nodded excitedly, "You bet I am! This New Year's Eve Fire Works gig is the best thing since. . ."
"Oh boy. . ." Keldeo said.
Victini made victory signs with his hands and posed as an orange and yellow stripped background appeared behind him.
"THE V-WHEEEEEEEEEL!" Victini declared.
Keldeo sighed and said, "Yeah, sure Victini."
"You bet. Oh, yeah, you know what I heard?" Victini said excitedly.
"What?" Keldeo asked.
"Word is that there's a totally awesome New Year's Eve celebration in Nimbasa City!" Victini said excitedly.
Keldeo raised an eyebrow. "Really?"
"Yea, really! I'll bet Ash, Iris, and Cilan and there, having a good ol time!"
"Hmm, you're probably right. How'd you find out about it?" Keldeo asked.
"Toadettegirl2012," Victini replied.
"Son of a biscuit!" Keldeo shouted in disgust.
The conversation was suddenly forgotten as Meloetta and the other Swords of Justice came over to them.
"It's almost time!" Meloetta said excitedly.
Genesect suddenly flew down and landed among the group excitedly. "T-minus 1 minute to midnight, and counting!" he shouted excitedly.
"Then I better get moving! I got all the Pokemon in the Moor of the Icirrus to wow!" Victini said with a smile, and he shot up into the air at top speed.
All throughout the Moor of Icirrus, Pokemon looked up in excitement as a streak of red fire soared higher and higher into the sky. As the seconds ticked away, Pokemon began to count down excitedly. Before long, the minute had whittled down to 30 seconds, then 10 seconds, then 5 seconds.
Pokemon all over the Moor began to count down to the final seconds.
"Five! Four! Three! Two! One!"
Victini burst in mid air like a huge orang fire work as sparks scattered across the sky. Pokemon cheered and danced around excitedly to celebrate the New Year.
Genesect jumped and spun round and round in mid air, Meloetta hugged Keldeo as he nuzzled her lovingly, and Coballion, Virizion, and Terrakion admired the fireworks display with smiles.
"HAPPY NEW YEAR!"
SLASH-BOOOOOOOOOOM!
The wall was blown apart by Keldeo's Focus Blast.
The review must go on!
Keldeo activated his Secret Sword and swung it.
Keldeo sprayed water from his hooves, putting out the forest fire around him.
Keldeo slid across the icy ground and gave Kyurem a kick in the face.
The review must go on!
Keldeo growled angrily at Ash, but then ran and put his head under a water fountain to cool off.
That's the theme of this song!
Although the waits may be long,
Keldeo cried out as Honchkrow hit him with Perish Song.
Keldeo and Ryan the Reviewer fought on a cliff top, Secret Sword and Bone Rush clashing over and over.
Keldeo and Ash gobbled down food, but then started to choke and began moving their head in an attempt to swallow.
I am a Swords of Justice. . .
Keldeo ran through memories of him with Terrakion, Virizion, and Coballion, and jumped, turning into his Resolute Form in mid air with a flash of light.
The review must go on!
Keldeo reared up on his hind legs, his expression serious and his Secret Sword raised and glowing brightly.
Keldeo the Critic
New Year Bash by Toadettegirl2012
It's me! Keldeo the Critic! And I wish you all a Happy New Year!
You know. . . . . .
I've given Toadettegirl2012 such a hard time. Yes, she wrote a story about Ash peeing in his pants. Yes, she wrote a story where Misty was grossly out of character just so she could bash her. But really, she's still written some good stories. In fact, my very first review was Purple Flowers and Chocolate Cake, one of her best Negaishipping stories. So, to start of the new year, here's another really good Toadettegirl2012 story: New Year Bash.
Summary: It's New Years Eve and Nimbasa City is having a big celebration to welcome the New Year! A perfect time to tell someone you love them right? Negaishipping! First story in Holiday Fun Collection! (This Summary sucked :/)
This is actually one of her very first stories, adding support to the hypothesis that her writing has gotten worse as she went along. But does this sotry smell as good as flowers and cake? . . .Or does it smell like urine? Let's find out!
So our story begins at the Nimbasa City New Years Eve celebration. Cilan is back in Straiton City to celebrate with his brothers, so it's just Ash, Iris, and their talking Pokemon.
I look over at Pikachu, "Hey buddy, today's New Year's eve!"
Pikachu nods, (Yeah, so?)
My smile widens, "Well you know, with Cilan celebrating back home in Straiton, this is the first time in forever me and Iris had some time…uh alone."
(Hey, me and Axew are here too!) Pikachu added.
I rolled my eyes, "Well, yeah, but…do you think I…I should um," I feel my face heat up. Out of the corner of my eye I can see Pikachu smirking.
(You should do what?) the electric mouse asked.
"You know…" the blush on my face increased, "tell her about-."
(Loving her) Pikachu finished.
I bit my lower lip, "Well, why not? It is New year's eve and all-."
Yeah, that's right, Toadettegirl gives our heroes the ability to understand their Pokemon. How did they get this ability and why? Who cares? It makes the story more fun!
So after Ash and Iris play Capture the Hat for a bit. . .
(Keldeo clenched his teeth and spoke in an angry tone)
Gym Leader and Supermodel Elesa makes an announcement.
A large TV screen nearby turns on and the image of Elesa comes up.
"Hello everyone," the gym leader says as the video starts to play, "As you all know, today is Nimbasa city's New Year Bash celebration! Today, I've added a little surprise for everyone! During the celebration today, I'll be hiding somewhere in the city. Whoever finds me will be in for a treat," Elesa giggles, "So keep your eyes peeled and look for me today, and don't forget, have fun!"
The screen goes black, and the crowd starts to murmur.
I really don't like this superficial, materialistic, thing. She looks so stupid! What's with the wires coming out of her head? She looks like a mutated Electivire. And why is she wearing so little clotheing! For goodness sake, this is a children's cartoon!
"Alright. Keep a look out for Elesa, and don't forget to watch the fireworks show and the dropping of the Crystal Pokeball at midnight!" Nurse Joy says, "Now enjoy yourselves!"
The crowd cheers as the gates of the city open and everyone rushes in.
"Come on Ash," Iris said as she grabs my wrist, "Let's go!" She runs pulling me behind her, that lovely laugh ringing in my ears.
"Whoa, they really decked out this place," I say taking my surroundings.
So, the place is basically like the Times Square set up only with a ton of games and food stands and stuff, kinda like a carnival. Trust me, I'd rather go here than to that packed Times Square in New York City.
So our heroes decide to go to a place where you can win a cuddly Pokedall by winning in a Pokemon battle.
As we walk over to the battle area, she starts swinging our hands back and forth. As Iris does this, I feel my face redden, and my heart starts to pound wildly in my chest. My other hand is balled up in a fist by my side, and I can feel it start to sweat. Iris is only holding my hand for only a few seconds before I can't take it anymore,
"Uh Iris you c-can let go now," I quickly untangle my fingers from her grip; Iris gives me a sheepish smile but says nothing as she turns away. After registration, the battles start up.
Yeah! Totally not in love with you, Iris! Come on, who's the dense one here? Ash or Iris.
Well, Iris wants a Deino doll, so she enters the battle with-
Okay Emolga, let's go! It's battle time!" Iris calls, throwing the red and white sphere. Emolga appears and shout her name.
(Keldeo roared out in rage)
EMOLGA!
Okay, okay, despite the fact that Emolga is a heartless seductress, the following battle against a Meinfoo is really good. Toadettegirl really put a lot of effort in this battle. It feels like an actual battle from the show. The only problem I have is when they use Volt Switch, which would cause Emolga to switch out. Okay, it misses, so that effect doesn't activate, but what would've happened if it did hit? The battle is one on one. Would she switch out and forfeit the match?
Well, anyway, it's still an awesome battle. Emolga even learns Acrobatics. However, the female Meinfoo is immune to Attract and takes Emolga down with Ice Beam and focus Blast.
"You did awesome Emolga, now return," I zap the flying squirrel Pokémon back into her Pokeball, "Oh man" I sigh as I walk back over to where everyone else is.
"Are you okay, Iris?" I look up. Ash is smiling at me.
I nod, "I'm okay, I mean I can't win every battle, right," I glance over to the prizes, to see Emily cuddling an oversized Wigglytuff doll.
"You really wanted that Deino Pokedoll didn't you?" Ash asked. He's looking at me with his amber eyes. . .
(The introduction to the song "The Eye of the Tiger" starts to play.)
So now it's Ash's turn to battle, and he's going up against a Tranquill, a Flying-type. Hmm, let's see, Grass-types have a disadvantage against Flying-types, so that means Ash is going to use a Grass-type.
"Snivy, I choose you!" he throws a pokeball and the Grass Snake Pokémon is released onto the field.
"Snivy?!" I shout, jumping up, "Ash? what are you doing?! Snivy's a grass type and Tranquill's a flying type! You have a type disadvantage!"
Ash hears and turns, "Don't worry Iris, I know what I'm doing!" From where I am I can see that determined look in his eyes again.
"Oh," I sit back down, 'what's he up too this time?' I wonder. The battle starts.
So in another incredibly written battle, complete with an incredible strategy from the mind of Ash Ketchum.
"And that's it! Tranquill is unable to battle, Ash and Snivy win!" Koki says loudly. Pikachu, Axew, I, and a few others that had been watching cheer loudly.
"Ash, that was amazing!" I say as he comes over after receiving his prize.
"Thanks, Iris," Ash says. His hands are behind his back and he has a huge grin on his face.
"What Pokedoll did you choose?" I ask, eagerly wanting to see a cute, cuddly Pokedoll.
Oh my! I wonder what it could be? I have no idea!
Portal 2 Announcer: "Sarcasm Sphere Self-Test Complete"
Ash looks at me for a second before his amber eyes dart down to his shoes. His face is kinda pink, "Uh, actually Iris," he says, "I-I got this for you"
At first I'm confused, but then Ash pulls something out from behind his back, something blue and black-
"It's the Deino doll!" I squeal, "for me?!" Ash nods and holds it out to me. I go all starry eyed, "OH THANK YOU ASH!" I squeezed the giant Deino doll.
Ash's looking at me with that cute, goofy smile on his face, "Do you like it?" he asks.
"Like it? I love it!" I exclaim doing a little jump
(Hey, I thought I was your Pokedoll?) Axew protested, jumping onto my shoulder.
(No use Axew, girls are suckers for those things!) I hear Pikachu mumble from Ash's shoulder.
I put the Deino doll down, and then throw my arms around Ash. "Thanks Ash, you're the best!" I say…I wait for a response but Ash says nothing, he's so stiff in my arms and he doesn't even hug me back…oh man. I let go and let my arms fall limply to my sides.
"Um…er y-your welcome," Ash stammers, his face has gone red, but he manages a smile
Oh for goodness sake, hug the girl, Ash! You can't even hug a person? Just wrap your arms around her. I can hug, and I don't even have arms!
I turn back to my doll, "I think I'm gonna call him…Mr. Choppers!" I scoop up the Pokedoll and cuddle it.
Remember that doll. It will be important later on in the story.
So after all that excitement, it's time for lunch.
(Ash's POV)
After ordering some food, I sit down at a picnic table that Iris had placed Mr. Choppers on.
"I'm starved," I say, placing Pikachu's bowl of specialty electric type Pokemon food on the table, along with my burger and fries.
Pikachu hops onto the table and instantly grabs the bottle of ketchup nearby, and tries to open it with his tiny paws.
After a few times he hands the bottle over to me in defeat (Ash, can you open it? I have no thumbs.)
You know, I wish Pikachu's love of ketchup would be mentioned in the Anime at least one more time.
I roll my eyes, "Pikachu you really need to cut down on this stuff" I get a grip on the lid, "It's not really good for Pokémon to ea-" I stop in mid-sentence realizing that the lid of the ketchup bottle won't come off. I get a better grip and twist, nothing; I try a few more times with no avail. I remove my hand and give it a few shakes, that's when I notice a wet stain on the palm part my glove. I look at my other glove to find the same thing. I rip my gloves off and wipe my hands on my jeans. I try the bottle again and it opens. Pikachu grabs it and starts to dump the ketchup onto his food.
(Why, are your hands all sweaty?) Pikachu asked, his mouth full of food and ketchup.
"I don't know," I say giving my hands a few more wipes before starting to eat, I notice Pikachu's staring at me with a little grin on his face, "What?"
(You know what?) he says. I give him a confused look, Pikachu rolls his eyes, (Your hands, they're all sweaty cause you're nervous, right?)
I swallow the food in my mouth, "Nervous about what?"
Pikachu sighs (Do I have to spell it out for you?) he asks, waving his ketchup covered paw in the air (You're nervous about Iris right?)
My heart jumps slightly, "What? No, I'm not-."
(You're blushing.)
See, isn't it awesome to have Ash understand Pokemon so they can exchange witty dialogue.
I frowned. Pikachu was right. I was nervous with all the hugging and hand holding. My nervousness around the purple haired girl was off the charts. "Okay, so what's your point," I ask, taking a bite of my burger.
(Why are you so nervous? I mean, she's just a girl) Pikachu says, licking ketchup from his paw.
"Yeah, but Iris is a pretty girl," I say poking him, "Besides Pikachu you're a Pokémon, you wouldn't understand about love"
What kind of crack was that? How do you think Pokemon Eggs are made? You know what? Knowing Ash he probably thinks Pelippers deliver them.
So after lunch, Iris leads Ash to a rollercoaster. . .this will not end well.
"You're not afraid of roller-coasters, right Ash?" Iris asks, nudging me as we get closer to the front of the line.
"What? Roller-coasters don't scare me one bit," I say. Okay that was only half true, roller-coasters did scare me…but not a lot. . . only a little. Sure, roller-coasters shot an intense amount of adrenaline though my veins, and yeah I do scream…a bit...but roller-coasters didn't scare me…I guess. Another kart passes by full of screaming people, my stomach tightens a bit.
"Even after eating all that food for lunch?" she wonders
I smirk, "Iris, I'll be fine. Besides, I've got a stomach of steel!"
(Suddenly Munna popped up out of nowhere)
"Foreshadowing!"
(Keldeo jumped in shock)
Ahhh! Munna, you jerk, what are you doing here?
"Popped out of a Magnagate! Figured I'd parody a Nostalgia Critic Meme for you."
(Keldeo frowned)
Casper always said "timing", you Bittercold butt kisser!
"Well I figured I'd change it up a bit, and don't call me names, Princess Twilight!"
GET OUT!
(Munna scowled and disappeared)
Darned Well Intentioned Extremist. Heh, well I've got something special planned for her. Just you wait.
So Ash and Iris get on the roller coaster, and we get what's expected.
"Here we go!" I cry. The kart goes plummeting down the first hill and I let out a whoop of happiness as adrenaline rushes though my veins. The wind is pelting my face and whipping my hair in every direction there's a sharp turn, I go sliding into Ash, who's screaming loudly
"WHOOHOOO!" I shout, throwing my arms in the air, there are a few more turns before we slow a bit to go up the next hill. I turn to Ash he's gripping the metal bar so tight his knuckles are practically white!
"Ash let go of that thing!" I say prying his fingers from the bar.
"B-but, I," he stammers. Ash cuts himself off as we reach the top of the second hill, "IRIS!" Ash yells, wrapping his arms around my waist and pulls me close.
I have no time to react, "Ash wh-AHHHH!" the coaster kart goes speeding down the hill, my heart pounding from being so close to Ash…or it could just be an adrenaline rush. Ash and I are screaming loudly as the kart goes around two loops and a couple sharp turns. The whole time Ash is clinging to me.
I laugh, "Ash, you're such a little kid!" I say, putting my arms around his shoulders, the wind beating at us crazily.
"Am not!" I hear Ash say over the wind and screaming.
We're going up the 3rd and final hill on the roller-coaster, and it's the tallest one! As the kart inches to the top, I can see Ash's face pale a bit.
Now, I have to give a lot of credit right now:
"Ash, if you're scared, don't look at how high we are. Look at…look at me," I say, and I'm actually surprised when my raven haired crush looks at me with those amber eyes of his. For a few seconds I'm lost in them, well, until gravity kicks in and we go flying down the hill. Ash pulls me even closer to him, so close that I can smell that lovely boy smell of his, fresh laundry and chocolate chip cookies. Mmmm…he smells so nice,
This scene was touching and funny. . .wait a minute, Ash smells like fresh laundry and chocolate chip cookies? If Ash is a journeying kid, then how do his clothes smell fresh? And why does he smell like cookies?
(Keldeo smiled and waved a hoof dismissively)
Aw, what the heck, it's still a nice scene.
but I don't get to enjoy it much as we go spinning down a downward spiral!
"AHHHHH!" I scream. I feel my pounding heart jump into my throat as we go around another loop and a few more sharp turns. I glance over to see Ash's eyes squeezed shut…I wish I could see those shiny amber eyes again.
"Is it over?" Ash asks, slowly opening his eyes as the kart slowly comes to a stop.
"Yup," my heart pounds faster, and I smile. Ash is still hugging me! "Wasn't that fun?"
Ash blinks, his face seems pink as he squirms out of the hug we were still in. I don't want to let go, but I have no choice. I let my arms sit in my lap.
Ash looks down at his hands "Er…um. . . sorry…for acting all. . . um-"
"Scream-ish?"
"Yeah," Ash says as his face goes all red.
I giggle, "It's okay," my nerves tingle, "…it was kinda cute"
You know how in theme parks where rollercoasters have cameras that catch the riders screaming.
As Ash and I approach the exit, I spot Axew and Pikachu, with Mr. Choppers between them. They're both laughing at the pictures of people screaming while riding the Shining Light. They where being shown on a screen nearby.
I go over to them and pick up Mr. Choppers, "Guys, they're not that funny!"
(Yeah they are!) Axew says, pointing at a picture of a lady with her mouth wide open, and it looked like she had just swallowed a bug. Just then, a new image comes up on the screen. My eyes widen. It's a picture of Ash and I! Pikachu and Axew bust out laughing again. I don't blame them, the picture looks hilarious! My purple hair was flying around wildly, my mouth is open, and I have a goofy smile on my face, and I'm hugging my crush. Ash's hat is practically flying off his head, his mouth is open, his eyes were closed, and his arms are wrapped around me.
Crowning Moment of Funny! This is the Toadettegirl2012 I know and love!
Speaking of funny, Ash's lunch is about to launch in three. . .two. . .one. . .
"…I'm…gonna-," Ash stops short as he throws his hands over his mouth and dashes over to a trash can nearby.
"Ash wha-," I stop when I hear the sound of Ash vomiting loudly. I cringe, "Um…never mind."
WAH-WAH-WAH-WAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!
(Keldeo gave a goofy smile and shrugged)
Besides, I need Nurse Joy to fix up Emolga."
(Keldeo frowned)
Oh yeah. There's that.
"But…I don't want to ruin the fun we're having," he says, giving a weak smile.
'Oh, he doesn't want to ruin today…?' My heart melts, 'that's so sweet…'
"Ash, t-that's sweet of you, but I really think we should go to the Pokemon Center," I slip my hand into his. "Come on," I say, leading the way, at the same time trying to ignore my pounding heart.
So Ash is taken to a Pokemon Center to get some medicine and bed rest.
Nurse Joy raises an eyebrow, "Did you happen to eat anything before you rode this roller-coaster?"
I sweat-drop realizing what the problem was, "Er, does lunch count?"
Nurse Joy giggles, "I'm afraid so," she turns to her Audio, who goes over and pulls out a medicine bottle and pours some pink liquid on a spoon. The Audio holds it out to me, "Drink this please,"
I make a face, but take it anyway. I make a face. Ugh, it tastes like super sour cherries mixed with day old bubble gum! Blech!
Nausea! Heartburn! Indigestion! Upset stomach! Diarrhea!
Aw come on, Ash! It could be worse! It could taste like. . .
(Keldeo shudders in horror)
Cold medicine!
So Ash is sitting in a bed in the Pokemon Center moping about throwing up in front of his girlfriend.
I hear the door open; I peek to see Audio holding the door open. There's the sound of scampering feet before I feel a weight on my stomach.
"OW!" I look to see Pikachu sitting on my already-queasy-stomach.
"Pikachu-Punch!"
(Hey Ash, how are you feeling?) Pikachu asks as Audio leaves.
"Besides the fact that I completely embarrassed myself by puking my guts out in front of Iris, I'm okay I guess," I say.
Pikachu snickers (Yeah, I can't believe you puked like that, even after you said you had a 'stomach of steel!')
I frown, "It wasn't that funny!" I sigh, "Now what am I going to do?"
Pikachu looks at me confused, (What are you going to do about what, Ash?)
"Iris! I mean, I want her to like me, not completely gross her out! I must have lost a good amount of points with her after the puking thing."
Points? Since when is love a video game?
(Oh come on, Iris wouldn't hate you just cause you couldn't hold down your lunch.) I make a face (Um. . . besides, that Deino doll you gave her made her so happy! Why would that little slip up change anything between you two?)
Oh, I guess the Deino doll was bonus points.
Hmm, Pikachu did have a point. "Okay, then what do you think I should do then? Since you apparently know so much about love?"
Pikachu smiles (I'm so glad you asked). He clears his throat (Ahem! Ash, you are not very good with communicating with Iris, are you?)
"Uh, no."
(And whenever you're around your crush, you get all tongued tied, correct?)
I roll my eyes, "Where are you going with this?"
Pikachu smirked (I think the best thing you should do is tell Iris how you feel about her. There! Simple and easy.)
"What! Are you crazy?! That's stupid!" I say, sitting up quickly and causing Pikachu to topple to the floor.
Pikachu jumps to his feet and said, (Why is that stupid? It seems like a perfectly good idea to me!)
I feel my face heat up, "I mean…it's just that…what i-if she doesn't like me back?" I ask, removing my gloves as my palms began to sweat. Just the thought of telling Iris how I feel about her is making me nervous.
(Then if that happens...well. . . you're just going to have to wing it from there) Pikachu says, hopping back on the bed
I sigh, "Great, I have a lot to think about..."
(Human love is so complicated) I here Pikachu mumble under his breath
(Suddenly a voice with a German accent spoke)
"It is hear, not here! Und the period is missing! HEIL GRAMMAR!"
(Keldeo fired a Focus Blast off screen, and it exploded with the sound of a pained scream)
I could've sworn the Swords and I had gotten rid of those Grammar Nazis.
Well, while Ash is using Rest, Iris and Axew are off to get something to eat.
"We'll grab something to eat, Axew. Then we'll come check on Ash, okay."
(Sure thing...so Nurse Joy said that Ash had roller-coaster illness. Will he be okay?) my dragon type asks.
"Yeah, Ash will be fine." I giggle softly to myself, that cute little kid, what am I going to do with him? As I continue to walk I look down at my Deino Pokedoll, Mr. Choppers, and smile.
'My first gift, from my first crush. Ash. Oh I love Mr. Choppers so much. . . I love Ash so much,' this thought brought a blush to my cheeks and a fuzzy feeling in my stomach, 'I wish I could tell Ash how I feel about him...it's just that...I don't think it'll work,'
I mean for starters, I can't work up the nerve to tell him...it's like each time I try those amber eyes of his stop me. Plus, he must think I'm the super clingy type of girl, with all the hugging and hand holding I do...ugh, that makes me sound so desperate! Oh...and to think I was just trying to make Ash like me, all the hugging is probably turning him away. I mean he doesn't even hug me back. Ash just goes all stiff! Or maybe...Ash is just too dense for love...
Ash is too dense for-? Have you seen how nervous he gets whenever your breath lands on him? If you ask me, both of you are kinda dense. I mean, seriously, I've never seen tow people more obviously in love. Romeo and Juliet were more subtle than you two!
"Excuse me, Miss?"
I look up, "Eeek!" I jump back startled by the old lady standing before me. I sweat-drop, "Er...sorry um can I-I help you?"
The old lady was tall, well taller the me. She had pale wrinkly skin, a blond and gray bun on her head, she wore a weird purple outfit and a ugly brown cloak over it. The old woman also had ice blue eyes that seemed like they were twinkling...they seemed familiar for some reason.
"Could you be a dear and carry this box for me?" the old women pointed to a box beside her, the top was covered with a blue blanket.
"Um, sure." I handed Mr. Choppers to Axew and reached down and picked up the box. It was kinda heavy, "Um, where do you want me to put this, ma'am?"
"Just follow me," the woman starts to walk, I follow weaving my way through the people,
(Keldeo frowned and spoke in deadpanned monotone)
It's Elesa. It's Elesa. It's Elesa. Her eyes are blue. She's in disguise. It's Elesa.
The old women smiles, then she grabs the edge of the cloak she's wearing and yanks it off like a cape.
"Hey!" I cry as it comes right at me, "What are you-."
I stop in mid-sentence as the old woman is no longer before me. In the old lady's place is the tall, beautiful gym leader/model:
"Elesa?!" I cry.
Oh, hey, it's Elesa.
"That's right, it's me! Congratulations! You found me Iris!"
I'm speechless.
"And it's a good thing too! That costume was getting stuffy."
"Hey, there's Elesa!" someone calls.
"That girl found her!" says another person.
I sweat-drop as a large crowd of people forms around me and the gym leader.
Oh boy, her. And she's got an army of fangirls. Great. Let's take a quick break. I have a few favors to call upon. Muna's in for a rude awakening! Heh-heh. . .
We'll be right back!
The comments expressed in this review are written in such a way so that negative aspects are used to create jokes. There will NOT be any bashing or ranting. Also, good things in a FanFic will be praised. Particularly bad FanFictions WON'T be totally thrashed, but expect to see major grievances addressed.