Alternative

by Nellark

What if James and Lily had survived? What if Voldemort had died when he killed Harry? "Alternative" shows what life would be like for everyone in Harry's life if James and Lily had never died... FEATURES EVERYONE.

25. Rebirth?

Please do not kill me.

What happens after this "chapter" entirely depends on you lot.

I'm really not happy with this story.

Lots of continuity issues, some plotlines completely missed out and lots of missed opportunities.

Also I was in a "just discovered fanfic" hysterical rush, and so Harry grew 10 years older in like 2 chapters. I exaggerate, but...

SO

I want you to tell me:

Should I keep going with this?

Or should I start again?

I've already decided that I'm going to write another one alongside this, (don't panic, Alice and the Blacks and Druella and that lot will still be there, Hermione's mum will still be a hoe etc etc)

But this re-boot will be MUCH more detailed, much slower and much better written. Seriously, the beginning chapters of this were just appalling.

If you desperately want me to continue this story, I will. But there will also be a much more detailed version running alongside it with the same plotline, and the updates for this one might be slower.

Sorry to dump this on you, but I just re-read it and holy balls, I am so not feeling it. Seriously, if I'd have been more patient and careful, I'd have written a much better story.

Thoughts?

N x