A/N Sorry for being gone for three days. Here's my explanation on why (if you actually care... :P)
You see, I had this flame, right? And every time I tried to write, it'd just pop up in my head and I'd cry. Not tears of sadness, tears of laughter. I swear, dumb people always try to bring other people down on here, and it ends up with them getting reported. I fucking hate flamers... but then again, they're funny as HELL! ;D So to 'krugerfanatic', yo ass just got reported, and your flame is no longer on my review page. It's only fair that you got reported; I mean you fucking FLAMED my story hardbody dude. Flames are funny, but they kind of hurt too; I'm human and I have a thing called FEELINGS! So... stay away from my stories if you don't like them... seriously :l
Now let's get on with the POSITIVE things that are actually WORTH IT ;)
SouthParkFan8: Don't worry, I'm better now. Laughing at that dumb flame I got helped a bit :P I got mostly everybody, so don't feel alone about it. Here's that chapter for ya!
Articuno2011: LOL, excellent xD And yes, she does ;D
Chocolain: No I don't! It's just some silly game... right? 0.0
Me: Sure it is... Yea, I've been doing March, April AND May Fools for the longest, so I just HAD to put it in the story :D
Tinaloveheart: Yeppers :)
Jenna: It's cool to be back :D
Me: I've never had a secret admirer, though Chocolain does~!
Chocolain: STOP TALKING! :l
Me: Here's that update :)
6747: Why yes, yes she is :)
Brian: Mwahaha... ;)
Chocolain: I'll get you Brian... on probably April Fools. Mwahaha that suckah! :D
Brian: ...;(
Chocolain: And I DON'T HAVE A SECRET ADMIRER! Yea, it IS a prank... right? ...right? :'(
Me: Whatever you want to believe Cocoa. Whatever you want to believe.
CrimsonShadow006: Mwahaha! Everybody did I think xD And HOLY SHIT! D:
You Really Smell Like Dog Buns AAHHH: Yay indeed :D A guy in Ohio? My friend lives in Ohio (random :P) Aw, poor you; I'd hate to travel everywhere just to read :( Your Aunt is like a stalker. My mom's a stalker... 0.0
ElissaTucker3: Everybody got tricked I think :P And yea, she-
Chocolain: I GIVE UP! *Walks out of the Authors' room*
Me: Wow, someone's pissed :3 Here's the update
Dawn's Rays: Haha, you got scared~! :P Here's that update Dawny (Yea, your name is Dawny now :3)
Guest: Oh, well thank you :) Keep on reading if you wanna!
Rainy Falls: I don't know girl. I was just off for like three days, and then all the buttons and review things changed and shit. WTF moment, right?
Chocolain: *From outside the room* Yay me! :D And I am VERY shocked about that :l
Me: Here's the update Rain (Yep, you're Rain :P)
Yep, here's the reviews!
Disclaimer: No, I do not own South Park characters OR OC's except Chocolain and her family. The story plot is mine though :D
Chocolain was having a fairly nice day. She actually got an A+ on her Science test ("An A+? At Science? WHOO!"), her team won in Gym at a game of dodgeball ("Horray for Pip and Elissa's throwing skills! And uh Clyde, you can stop crying..."), AND it was Friday ("Two days away from school! Yay~!"). There was nothing that can upset her in the least bit.
The bell ran for dismissal. Like always, the kids ran out of whatever class they had to their lockers. "I'm gettin' out of school~! Away from fags, minorities and Jews~!" Cartman sang loudly. Most people in the hallway glared at him. "What?"
"Shut the hell up fatass." Kyle grumbled.
Chocolain, who wasn't paying attention to Cartman or Kyle (or anybody at the least), happily walked to her locker. "Oh~! What's this?" She picked up and scanned it. It was a folded note. "Well, I know that it's a note, but what does it say~?" Chocolain opened it and out popped a small piece of chocolate. Chocolain popped the piece of chocolate in her mouth automatically. "Hm... white chocolate... coolio!" Chocolain chewed happily before reading.
Dear Chocolain,
I look at you from afar, and you probably wouldn't guess it's me. I'd tell you my feelings, but I'm afraid you wouldn't take them back. So I will admire you from afar while looking at you in secret. Everyday, starting next week, I will tell you why I admire you.
x Anonymous
Chocolain stood there and blinked once. Twice. Three times.
"What. The. Actual. Fucktart." Chocolain said flatly, looking over the note for the fifth time. "No. No, no, no... no. NO~!"
"What's wrong Chocolain?" Kat asked curiously.
"I have..." Chocolain gulped. "...a secret admirer."
"And that's bad why?" Kat looked at her with confusion.
"BECAUSE!" Chocolain yelled back in reply. "I'm Chocolain Faith! I'm not supposed to have secret admirers!"
"Everybody can have a secret admirer Cocoa." Kat smiled. "It's just your time, I guess. Well see ya!" Before Chocolain could yell another word, Kat ran off to find Stan.
"Gurgle flarfle..." Chocolain grumbled, stuffing the note in her pocket and marching away, holding onto her book bag tightly in agony.
"It's cute~!"
"No it's not Starr."
"It's adorabble then~!"
"No Cherri. No." Chocolain sighed deeply. "Why'd I call you guys anyways?"
"Because we're experts at romance/cute things!" Starr and Cherri chirped in reply.
"Ugh..." Chocolain fell on her bed. "What do I do 'bout this?"
"Let 'em come." Cherri shrugged. "It is a secret admirer."
"You're special Chocolain." Starr added with a smile. "Not everyone gets a secret admirer."
"Yea, but why'd I have to get one?" Chocolain whined. "Couldn't it be one of the popular chicks, like Bebe or something?"
"Well, it wasn't." Cherri rolled her eyes. "Just get over it."
"At least you get free chocolate... aha..." Starr said slowly, trying to lighten up the mood. Chocolain looked at her blankly. "Hey, I tried, ok? Jeez..."
"Yea, there's always a good side to things I guess..." Chocolain sighed deeply again.
"You sound fucking depressed again." Cherri noted.
"Chocolain! Tell your little friends to go home! We're going out to get some chocolate chip cake soon!"
"K Ma!" Chocolain replied. She gave her friends a small smile. "Thanks guys I guess. See ya."
"Peace." "Bye~!" Cherri and Starr waved her goodbye and walked out.
"Let's not think 'bout that I guess." Chocolain muttered to herself. "Chocolate cake, here I come!"
"Oh gosh, this dude... or girl is serious!" Chocolain grumbled to herself as she saw another note and piece of chocolate. It was Monday and she had recieved yet another letter.
Dear Chocolain,
Your eyes are a delicate chocolate brown that makes my heart melt whenever I look at them.
x Anonymous
"Hm... short." Krisa commented, looking over Chocolain's shoulder.
"Short indeed." Rainbow agreed.
"Short like short shorts..." Ashly added. That earned her blank stares from Rainbow and Krisa. "What? I was getting in the moment!"
"O...k, but when the heck did you guys just come here?" Chocolain asked.
"My epicness came a couple of seconds ago." Krisa smirked. Rainbow nodded in agreement.
"I was here for like five minutes." Ashly commented. My locker's right across from yours."
"And I must say that the secret admirer you have is both epic and sweet." Krisa grinned. "Maybe even hot. Ah... hotness."
"Well you can have him." Chocolain growled a little.
"Nah... I already gots me one... well at least in my head." Krisa chuckled a little. "See you Choco-Laco!" She walked away.
"Bye Cocoa!" Rainbow and Ashly said in unison, waving as they left.
"Oh, how supportive they are." Chocolain sighed. She spotted Brian by himself walking out. She ran up to him. "Brian~!"
"What?" Brian asked in annoyance.
"Do you, by any chance, know any boy who keeps staring at me?" Chocolain asked curiously.
"Why the hell would I be looking at other boys stare at you?" Brian asked before walking away.
Chocolain sighed. "Oh great..."
Dear Chocolain,
Your smile, even a slight one, can always make my whole entire day. Seeing your frown, even a slight one, ruins it greatly.
x Anonymous
"Oh that's kind of cute." Chocolain giggled a bit. She paused the gasped. "I'm being infected by the ickiness!"
"No, it's just life." Jenna rolled her eyes.
Elissa snickered. "Chocolain is learning the ways of love."
"Chocolain is not!" the brunette sighed and popped the piece of peanut butter chocolate in her mouth. "Chocolain is getting quite annoyed."
"Aw, you should enjoy it." Jenna smiled. "It's cuter than Craig and Elissa~!"
"Yea-wait what?" Elissa glared at Jenna. "Shuddup!"
"No can do." Jenna smirked and walked away. "Bye bye~!"
"Ugh..." Elissa grumbled.
"You said it." Chocolain agreed.
"Now I know how you feel..." Elissa sighed.
"Hey Stephanie~!" Chocolain placed on a fake grin and shuffled her way over to the paranoid girl. At recess, Chocolain knew that Stephanie was always ta the side of the school... alone.
"What do you want chocolate cannibal?" Stephanie growled.
"So I heard you like spying..." Chocolain's grin grew wider.
"Yea... were you spying on me spying on people?" Stephanie gave her a look that burned through her soul.
"N-no Steph; why would I do that?" Chocolain laughed nervously. "It's just that... do you know who's hand writing this is?" She stuffed the note in Stephanie's face.
"Hm..." Stephanie studied it a bit. "It seems very unfimiliar from other hand writing in this school. Sorry, can't help ya." Stephanie closed her eyes and leaned back on the wall, all the while chewing on her unlit cigarette.
"Aw..." Chocolain frowned sadly. "A-are you sure?"
"Stephanie never lies." the brunette replied coolly, stuffing her hands in her black ripped up jeans pockets.
"Ok then." Chocolain replied flatly before trudging herself to the swings. "Blah... This sucks..."
"Whatever is the matter Chhocolain?" Pip asked. "I hate to see you so down."
"Nothin'... girl things Pipster..." Chocolain answered. "Don't ask." Pip nodded in understanding before walking away somewhere. Chocolain sighed. "Secrecy is mean-ery." she grumbled before she began to swing.
A/N Come on Cocoa... Having one is so sweet~! Oh, and did you guys notice that I put every OC in this chapter? If you haven't then I'll tell ya.
I PUT EVERY OC IN THIS CHAPTER!
It's rare... I like 'em rare ;) So anyway...
Sneak Peek on Next Chapter
"Are those scratches on your face?" Starr narrowed her eyes at rainbow. "And a scar. Is that a scar?"
"Yea... why'd ya ask?" Rainbow asked casually.
"Well, it's just that... those are some pretty deep scars." Cherri examined. "Like you got into a cat fight or somethin'..."
Yea, that's all right now. I can't give out too much, alright? :3 Ok... So I'm gone! Adios~!
-W.C.P
P.S. Anybody get the 'So I heard you like spying' thing? No, just me? Alright...
P.P.S. I can't update everyday anymore (aw...), so I'll update as quickly as I possibly can to keep you fans satisfied ;D
P.P.P.S. I just noticed that I only have 38 reviews left to get to 100! Yay me; I feel so successful ^^