DoRA - To Be Revised

by Xen Kenshin

Director Johannes von Schicksal is recruiting New-Types at an alarming rate. The Aragami in the area are becoming not only more powerful, but also more intelligent. There are rumors of an entire sector of the Outter Ghetto vanishing, or being destroyed, over night. There has been an increase of protests on Fenrir. How do these omens connect to the pasts of the New-Types?

25. A Second, More Detailed Notice From Xen

Don't Run Away

Okay, okay, I know I JUST posted that last update thing but this one is imperative.

I'm massive editing DoRA.

Before, I was just fixing grammar and plot holes.

Now I'm remodeling characters.

"But Xen, you're twenty three chapters in! Why would you start the fic over?!"

Now is the PERFECT time to do that; I have the characters much more down-pat than when I first started the fic. Not just the few OCs that were introduced by fans of DoRA, or even the OCs I created to complement X07's story line, but also the canon cast.

Besides… have you SEEN how many run on sentences I have in there? Not to mention, "A Tooth for a Tooth" didn't have to be three parts. "A Moment of The End" being two parts was fine, but like A Jack Frost Guy told me: "Jumping back and forth between characters so many times during one chapter got confusing and hard to keep up with". And, to be totally honest, I never intended the Prithvi Mata mission with Karel, Kiria, Kurai and Akihiko to be two chapters.

So, what am I going to do?

Complete chapter 24 and post it. Well, maybe post it.

Begin from chapter one and overhaul the story thus far.

Post ten chapters in one month – just so you can see the HUGE differences between the two DoRAs.

Try and update on a schedule. It's the one thing that I've always struggled with on fanfiction.

You'll hear from me again when I'm about to post the first chapter of the overhauled DoRA~! And don't worry; there's no need for you to re-submit your OCs! You may be surprised to find a few of them will be showing up sooner or in a different way than their original introduction.