Last chance… I'm going to go with Luke or I might leave a blank in place of his name. My readers can use their own name but for my story its Luke. But don't hesitate to make up your own name.

YOU ROCK SOCKS!

(it's a very high compliment!)


The man sat there staring out over his followers. It was small but they were all strong. All capable of over exceeding the tasks that were given to them. He was bored, soo bored. His eyes kept flickering to the shy bronze haired girl. She was too young for him, he knew. But it would be amusing. He held back, he had some patience with boredom left. He would wait until his patience was gone.

The door opened, his scouts were dragging something behind them. One of the scouts withdrew a hand.

"Why you little..." The other scout shouted.

"Shut up! Im tired of your complaining!"

"Well she just bit me! Look I think she left marks on my hand..."

"Stop fighting us wench!" The man lost interest in the scouts and peered interested at the girl they were trying to get into the room. Her long golden hair hid her face.

"Why would I do that?" the voice was clear, teasing. Mmm, a fighter. Perfect, if only he could see her face. The doors finally closed. The scouts started the process of taking her to the front. They pushed the girl onto the floor.

"Stay still, wench!" The girl shot off the ground, smirking evilly.

"No! You stupid lugs! You jerks can't tell me what to do! Jerks!" She folded her arms and turned around to face him. He saw her face, so it was that girl. The one that had gave him a bruise and got away. Yes a perfect challenge. He thought evilly to himself.

Ara looked up at Luke- whos it. Surprisingly he was handsome. His skin was bronze and the muscles stood out on his arms, his hair was light and his eyes a brilliant blue. His face was clean shaven. He seemed boyish.

"Explain yourselfs." Ara remembered the voice. It had belonged to the man that had called her a wench. The scouts exchanged a look.

"We came across this one, in the forest alone. Beginning to wish we had left her alone. Vicious this one is." the other one winced agreeing. She snorted,

"You deserved it!" The scouts glared at her, Luke stared down at her.

"I for one am glad." It wasn't that his voice was cold, it was actually quite pleasant. It was that she had just remembered that she would regret it. She was scared of what his plans would be. She shuddered hearing all the minds in the room, such bad men. She glared at him and in response he smirked back at her. He snapped his fingers, and two men ceased her from behind.

"Hey! Let me go! Stupid lugs!" His smirk widened,

"Take her to the serving quarters." The two men started dragging her backwards. She glared at Luke. The men dragged her down the hall, she didn't fight. She may have insulted the men that dragged her to her doom but she didn't fight. She was too upset. A door opened and she was pushed in. She looked around at her surroundings.

Not too bad. These people wanted their servers comfortable. Probably because they wouldn't cooperate if they were treated badly. Suddenly she felt tired so tired. She pulled her boots off. She climbed onto the bed. Her clothes felt terribly uncomfortable. She looked around and spotted a wardrobe. She smiled and opened the wardrobe. She smiled at the satin and silk gowns. She hadn't worn anything so nice for a while. Well at least it felt like it.

His followers looked up at their leader. Luke had watched the girl leave. The look in his eyes they knew what it meant "Hands off, or die! She's mine!" He sat around for a little bit, he picked up the day is over bell and rung it. The servers left immediately.

Ara looked up when the door opened. The bronze haired girl looked up in surprise.

"So they got you too?" Ara looked down,

"Yeah, but I made those two regret it." The girl smiled,

"I'm Enna."(I know, I'm using a name from Enna Burning, but Enna is short for Arienna) Ara looked up at the girls face. Those eyes, they were his eyes. They were Jakes eyes. She lay back on the bed. Sighing. She whispered to the air.

"Oh how I wish you were here...Jake." Enna turned hearing her brothers name.

"Did you know Jake?" Ara rolled over staring at Enna.

"Your eyes, their just like his." Enna sat on the edge of the bed.

"I think we have a lot to talk about."...


How jazzy is that? Hey I was looking at stats. Very few people are reading the good chapters. Stop reading the introduction chapters and read the chapters at the end! So what do you think? I'm still open for suggestions. Would anyone be upset if I brought back Gwena? I'm seriously considering it.

Luke. He made her so mad! He leaned in the door way. She glared at him as she passed. He stuck out his leg. She fell breaking the glass. She growled. Starting to pick up the pieces of glass.

"Never mind that." His tone was soft. Luring patient. It confused her. He helped her to stand. Her expression was dazed. She didn't understand. It wasn't until somehow he trapped her against the wall, that she understood. She looked at him thoughtfully.

"So thats your game." She ducked and escaped him.