Me: ok well, I'm sick so I'm going to update! And I might not get your characters right the reason why is because I can't remember :/ Ok on with the story! Oh, and I'm also going to try to update more often!

2nd part Max POV

I was walking through the house showing Becca the places things go, when the doorbell rung.

"I'VE GOT IT!" Ella screamed, is there anyway she could possibly scream any louder?, I think not!, but I could be mistaken.

"Whatever!" I shouted back.

"Well, I take it that you guys like to scream?" I looked at becca and started to laugh.

"That's true, we do!"

"Max, somebodys behind you." I looked up at Fang to see him pointing behind me. I jumped around to face another girl, I put my arms down and put on a smile.

"Why, hello there stalker!" I was in an odd happy mood today, note to self: need to get that fixed.

"Hi, my name is Wednesday, and why yes, I can be stalkerish at times." I laughed at her comment, she had blonde hair that went to her back with blue and black tips, her eyes where a violet color, she was about 5'5 foot and had an athletic body, like she did a couple of sports. She also had a camera hanging form her neck, she must like photography.

"Well, then, I was just giving Becca here a tour of this house" I pointed to becca and she waved hi to Wednesday. I clapped my hands together.

"Well, on with the tour!" I began walking showing them the basics when the doorbell rung, again,

"OK THIS TIME I GOT IT!" I shouted up to Ella.

"GO RIGHT AHEAD!" I ran downstairs tripping on the stairs on the way down.

"Ow." I quickly got to my feet and ran to the door. I slammed it open the person looked up at me and smiled. She had dark brown hair with light brown in it that went down to her shoulder blades, she had a dark brown eye color. She looked about Angels age, and was about 5'6.

"Hi, my name is Abigail is Angel here?"

"No, not yet, but she is on her way." She nodded and stepped in. Just then another girl ran straight into the house and plopped down on the couch. I looked over to her still in shock from her running into the house, then Angel ran inside, will at her side. Then another girl came in, she had black hair that was straight with purple streaks in it, with sea green eyes.

"hi, um. My name is Seirui." She then turned back around to angel.

"Hey, is Taylor and Abigail here!"

"What is it with people running into my house?" Angel looked up and shrugged.

"I don't know."

"Whatever, and yes there here." I looked over at Taylor, she had auburn hair with bright blue eyes. She waved at me, I brought my hand up and waved back. Then I felt breath on the back of my neck, then a click. I jumped up and saw Wednesday holding her camera up already on the computer printing out the picture. I looked up at fang and saw him smirking. I smiled back. So, the sleepover went by fast let me put it in short terms, I beat up anybody who went near the cookies, well, Wednesday got one cookie cause she punched me in the stomach. We played would you rather, and watched scary movies.

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I woke up to the smell of chocolate chip pancakes.

"Ugh, to much light.' I held my hands up to my face, when I was knocked over by a lot of force. I saw Will and Angel wrestling over something, then looked over at Seirui, Taylor, Abigail, Wednesday, and Fang. They where all still sleeping. This out to be good.

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