Wow! I loved reading your guys' comments on the last chapter. If you guys can reach 209 reviews by tomorrow I'll post another chapter tomorrow. If you get 202 I'll post another chapter on Sunday. I hate to say it but this story is coming to a conclusion. I have about five more chapters left and then its over so if you want it to be longer let me know what you want to happen. This one is a little shorter than most of my chapters.

KIM'S P.O.V

We left karate practice and Jack drove me home. I ate dinner with my dad and Morgan.

"Hey dad, I'm gonna drop by Jack's, can you watch Kyle for like an hour max?" I asked.

"Sure sweetie." My dad replied

"Thanks dad. I'll be back soon." I stated. I grabbed my purse and a sweater.

"Oh Kimmy, you might need some keys." My dad stated, walking into the kitchen.

"You hung your keys up when you walked in the house." I reminded him.

"I'm not talking about my keys." He said, walking out of the kitchen. "I'm talking about yours." He showed me a set of keys and I almost died.

"Oh my God. You got me a car?!" I nearly screamed.

"Well, Morgan pitched in. We were gonna give it to you for your birthday but now works too." My dad stated.

"Thank you sooo much dad." I pulled him into a tight hug before turning to Morgan who had slowly began her approach a few minutes ago. "And thank you Morgan." I gave her a tight hug also.

"Your welcome." Morgan replied. I kissed her cheek and the smile on her face grew.

"Don't you want to see the car?" My dad asked.

"Yes!"

"Lets go." He led me into the garage that was hardly ever used. Inside was a Camaro Z28, my dream car. My car is now nicer than my dads.

"Oh My God dad!" I screamed as I stared at the car. "Thank you so so much."

"Go on, you can show Jack now." My dad stated.

"Kyle do you like Mommy's new car." I asked the stunned three year old. He simply nodded his head. "I'll be back in a few minutes, then I'll let you ride in it." I told him. He smiled at me. I hopped in the car and put the key in the ignition. The engine roared as I stepped on the gas. The ride to Jack's house was smooth in my new ride. I knocked on the door and he opened it almost instantly.

"Hey Kimmy, what's up." He didn't open the door all the way so I could tell that he was hiding something.

"Not much, what about you." I played it off as if I didn't suspect a thing.

"What are you doing here?" He asked.

"I wanted to talk to you." I stated.

"Why didn't you just call or text me?" He asked. My blood boiled as he continued to try to rush me out of the building

"Some things are better said in person." I replied.

"What is it?" He asked.

"Can we sit?" I asked.

"Umm, my dads here and he doesn't want anyone over right now." He replied.

"Jack, its your apartment." I stated. "What are you hiding?" I asked.

"Nothing, my dads here." He replied. His voice didn't get high or anything but I still know that he's not telling the truth. I threw the door open to see Donna Tobin and Jack's dad sitting on the sofa. The thing that threw me off was the fact that they were kissing. They pulled away as soon as they saw my face.

"It's not what it looks like." Donna immediately stated.

"I don't even want to know." I stated, holding my hands up in surrender. "Can we talk out here Jack?" I pulled him out of the room and shut the door.

"About that I-"

"I don't want to know."I repeated. "I wanted to talk to you about two things." I stated.

"Your not breaking up with me are you?" He asked quickly.

"No, why would I break up with you?" I asked.

"I don't know." He sated.

"Anyways, umm-" I cut myself off. "You know what, can we find some place to sit down?" I asked.

"Coffee shop?" Jack suggested.

"Sure." I smiled. "Your gonna love what I have to show you." I stated. Jack smirked at me, looking me up and down. "I don't mean that you pervert." I slapped his arm lightly.

"Hey you said I would love what you have to show me." He smiled.

"I got an early birthday present." I stated.

"Really, what is it?" He asked.

"Your about to see." We stepped out of the building and I handed him my car keys.

"You got a car?" He asked, I nodded.

"Not just any car though." I told him. "Press the unlock button." I told him. He did as I said and the headlights flashed.

"That's yours?" Jack asked astonished.

"Yup." I gave him a proud smile. "My dad and Morgan got it for me." I stated.

"Wow! That's a sweet ride." He said, handing me the keys. I gave them back to him.

"I know you want to drive." I stated. We got in the car and he took off. We got to the coffee shop and got hot chocolate. We then found a booth in a corner.

"So what do you want to talk about?" Jack asked as I sipped my hot chocolate.

"Umm, first I wanted to talk about what happened today." I began.

"What are you referring to?" Jack asked.

"The fight you got into when you came to pick me up." I replied.

"What about it?" Jack asked.

"What happened, why did the fight even occur?"

"He disrespected you." Jack stated simply.

"I know what he did to me, why did you guys start fighting?"

"We started fighting because he was being a jerk to you." Jack stated.

"Jack you do realize that you can get taken straight to jail if anyone wants to press charges right?" I asked.

"What if I didn't start the fight?" He asked.

"It doesn't matter, your a black belt in karate so your considered a deadly weapon." I replied. "You'll get arrested on the spot so stay out of that stuff." I told him.

"But Kim I'm supposed to stick up for you and take care of you." He said.

"Okay first of all I can take care of myself and second of all, how are you gonna take care of when your behind bars?" I asked.

"Whatever, fine" Jack gave up.

"Thank you, now I wanted to take to you about me moving into your apartment." I stated. A smile slowly creped its way onto his face.

"What about it?" He asked.

"Well, my dad told me that I could choose if I wanted to move in or not when I turn eighteen and my eighteenth birthday is tomorrow and I think I'm ready to start living without my dad." I stated. Jack smiled and leaned over to table until our lips touched. "But.." I stated when we pulled away. "If I'm gonna come home from work to find your dad and Donna making out on the couch then I'm gonna continue living with my dad." I stated.

"Don't worry babe, that was a one time thing." Jack stated. I pulled him into another blissful kiss.

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