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User Name: Vanilla River
Story: Rukia Blue Gown
Summary: Rukia picks out a very specific gown for the school dance only to have Orihime copy her in order to try and tempt Ichigo away.
Rating: T

Genre: Romance/Tragedy
Fan Work Number: 2.4.1

oOo

I read Chocolate Kisses story "Orihime Blue Gown". That ISN'T how it would work. For starters it takes place in an AU setting.

Rukia Blue Gown

Rukia passed by a poster in the school hallway. She paused and then back tracked to take a good look at the poster. "A school dance is coming up..." She then read the poster for further detail. "This dance is non-casual." Glancing to the side Rukia spoke up again. "I need to get myself a dress then." She let out a deep sigh wondering what kind of dress she should get herself.

She was excited when she went to the dress shop with her allowance and looked through the racks to find just the right dress. Eventually she came across a beautiful blue dress that was her favorite shade of blue. As she spun around holding it a voice came to her. "There is no way you would look good in that."

Rukia glanced up to see the class slut glaring at her. She didn't know what to say but the cashier of the shop spoke up. "I think that will look lovely on you. Why don't you go and try it on?"

The small female went into the changing room and came back. The woman clapped her hands while Orihime glared. "Now doesn't that look divine?"

"I'll take it." The female smiled and bought the dress. She hoped that Kurosaki Ichigo would ask her but she gave up hope when the bitch stepped into the room and claimed he had already asked her. After that she avoided him. She showed up at the dance only to find herself surrounded by Orihime's little group of friends.

The female was wearing the same dress but unlike Rukia the girls chest stuck out big time. She shoed quite a bit of cleavage and obviously more skin. The girl splashed water on Rukia. "How dare you pick the same dress as me. Did you think that would actually look good on you? Or did you thing you stood a chance with Ichigo?"

Suddenly though Orihime found a glass of water dumped upon her. "Leave Rukia alone Inoue."

"You're supposed to be my date to the dance." The female whined.

"Since when? I never asked you to the dance. You made that all up so just get lost." The orange haired teen spoke up. He then turned to Rukia after she had left. "Why did you avoid me this week?"

"I thought you had asked her?"

"Inoue Orihime? She is a slut who will sleep with any guy she can." Ichigo let out a deep sigh. "I really tried asking you, you know."

"Now I do. I'd ask for a dance but I'd rather you just take me home."

"All right. That dress looks better on you by the way."

OMAKE

"While I like most of your stories I honestly don't think Orihime would have done something like that to Rukia." Macho Nacho wrote to Vanilla River. "However her being a bitch was completely hot in its own way."

"Thank you for your review. I think Orihime is this way though so I'll opinions will differ here. She's also not supposed to be sexy."

Chocolate Kiss however was completely livid. "Can't you come up with anything original! This is the second time you've copied one of my stories! This is plagiarism!"

"I did not copy your story. They have similarities and that is about it. I am simply writing fanfics in response to the crap you write so I don't see what the big deal is."

Ichigo wrote then with his account. "Look. Orihime is NOT this way at all. She is a very nice person and very good friends with Rukia."

"How can she be very good friend with Rukia when they barely know each other in the Anime?"