Shiningstarwhiteback asked me to make a poem that made Tigerstar look kind, so this is it. Tell me if I succeed!

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-Life Long Hurt-

Tigerstar

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I was a kit

Same as the rest

My life wasn't perfect, I admit

But all I wanted to do was past my test

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I was mischievous and cunning

And I didn't always do what I was told

Sometimes I had the other kits running

But I didn't know my life was planned out and sold

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Then you gave me the clawed thistle for my mentor

And I was changed

And my heart grew cold and sore

I grew distant from the clan, almost estranged

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It isn't my fault that I grew cold

Or that my heart felt like ice

I only did what I was told

The most pleasurable thing was taking the life of mice

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So I blame you

For the way I am

He was evil and blood thirsty, but that you knew

You don't know how many times I would have ran

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I felt tortured and scared

And all alone

He was cruel and unfair

And his crimes stayed unknown

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So Bluestar, this is it

And I have every right

You ruined my life when my world was already dim

You lying dead is already in sight

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But you don't understand how I feel

It isn't my choice

Killing is the only thing that makes me feel real

And even when I tried to tell you about him, you ignored my voice

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Deputy, sure, whatever helps you sleep

You think that can change what you did to me

But I know that for nights you would stay up and weep

But only if you could see

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You were my friend

And my hope

My fathers' absence, you helped mend

And back then, you would help me cope

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But now, in my wake

I stare at you

I want to go back for old time sake

Bluestar, if you only knew

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I love my golden flower, it is true

And I am proud of our kits

But I know she will never be you

Deep down in the pits

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I want to cry

But hold it back

You are nothing but a lie

And I have all the strength you lack

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StarClan forgive me for what I'm about to do

I don't want to kill her

I want to say I'm done; I'm through

But she gave me the mentor who turned me into a killer!

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I close my eyes

And listen for a sound

Then I hear him ad it was no surprise

I can hear his paw steps trampling on the ground

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The fire came

And for now

Things will stay the same

And I will secretly bow

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The fire never gave up

Even when all odds were against him

But sadly, I haven't finished or done enough

So I hope for the thunders' sake, he can win

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