The Other Option

by juxtaposed92

Bella is devastated after Edward leaves her even though he promised he wouldn't. Can she overcome her heartbreak and accept the person she's destined for but doesn't want or will she cling onto the memories of the person she wants more then anything?

26. Chapter 26

Hi everyone,

Sorry for not updating you about the sequel this past year has just been crazy busy. I have almost finished writing the sequel but I'm not satisfied with it. I wasn't too satisfied with this story either, but I decided to publish it anyway, something which I have come to regret and I don't want to make the same mistake with the sequel. So I'm looking for 3 people to read through the entire story and give me their opinion and some constructive criticism on it. I think the story is currently about 20,800 words but that stands to increase so it will probably be quite time consuming reading through and giving feedback, so if you are interested in doing this please take that into consideration.

I want people who can specifically:

- Give me feedback and by this I mean picking out what works and what does not work, not just the general 'this sucks' or 'this is good'.

- Find inconsistencies in the story

- Look at characterisation, and growth in the characters

- Offer suggestions about how the story could be improved/strengthened.

If anyone is interested in doing this please PM me.

Thanks.