Hey everyone! I'm sorry this one took so long, but its very long and i wanted it to be epic-ly awesome! The final chapter will be out soon i hope! So here is the second to last chapter! *Alot happens, so pay attention ;)*


===Peter===

Whether she was dead or not, I was coming up with an apology anyways. Knowing Lorelei-if she's alive, anyway- she won't forgive me easily.

A doctor exits the room after three hours, "Mr. Parker?" He asks me, as I look up to him red-eyed.

"Yes?" I ask with hope.

"Go home, Son." He said sadly.

I knew it wasn't good. I stood and exited.

===Lorelei===

I couldn't see a thing, it was pitch black, and I couldn't even see myself. What was going on? Wait, I should try and remember what happened last. Okay…I asked Peter if he still loved me if Gwen and Mary Jane were still here, then I blacked out, and then Peter told me he hated me. Peter…He doesn't love me. Why doesn't he love me? I thought he did. What was wrong?

A bright spot light forms in front of me; I used my hands to block the bright light.

"You're so stupid." It was me, Inferno, she stood in the light, crossing her arms at me, "Darling, you're in a coma."

I stood up, "Coma? Oh, that makes sense."

A light came up. I was surrounded by white light, but mirrors surrounded me, "What the-"

"Shhh, don't be worried." Inferno stepped forward to me, "It's nothing, just the chemical magic you created."

"Chemical magic?" I asked confused, as she put her hands on my shoulder.

"Yes, while you created the costume, you brought out the twelve of us. We are all in here," She gestured around, "I am the dominant one. There you have the laughter one, the angriest one, the sexy one, and some others." She waved the rest off.

"Hey!" They all chirped.

"How do I get rid of you, you guys have caused me such damage to my body." I look around.

"You can't, we are forever with you." Inferno laughs a bit.

One of the ones in the mirror put her hands on the mirror and laughs, "Lorelei, your all wrong!"

She snaps her head, "What? I am not possibly wrong!"

She laughs, "Its right that we are forever with you…But the twelve of us we always a part of you, these chemicals just brought us out." She laughs again, "It's been so much fun!"

"What? How come I never found this out?" I looked at them all.

She laughs "You weren't the one who kn-"

"Shut it!" Inferno shouts, and the laugh-y one quiets.

"So then…why can't I wake up?" I looked at Inferno.

"We wanted to talk to you." Inferno smirks.

"Then can I go back?" I ask impatient.

"Don't you love us?" I didn't respond, "We wanted to talk about your current occupancy on Earth." She walked around me, a finger going over my back, "We all wanted to give it try."

"What?" I looked at her as she stepped forward, placing her hand on my shoulders again.

"We all wanted to see the real world ourselves….Maybe even fool around with Peter. We have all agreed he is pretty damn hot, and even though I have fucked him, we have twelve other girls who wanna try…." She thinks for a second, "Make that thirteen."

"Your being a bitch." I squinted at her.

"Really? Because shooting yourself? C'mon, girly." She cocks her head to the side.

"You guys can't have me, I'm really sick anyways." I cross my arms, stubbornly.

"The more reason we want to try before you croak." She smirks, "You're not going to win this one, Lorelei, just work with us."

"No! It's not right! I don't want you doing anything stupid!" I shout.

She shakes her head, "Fine, I'll have it my way." She shoves my back, and I fell back to a pitch black area.

It was inside the mirror, I saw the ones around me, and Inferno.

"Sorry, Girlies, I gotta take care of something." Soon she was gone.

"Wait! No, stop Inferno!" I place my hands on the glass.

It was soon replaced with what I figured was going on through my-or currently Inferno's-eyes.

===Peter===

When I woke up that morning, I went to the Asylum. Lorelei needed to be fine.

When I got there, I was disappointed to see a golden-eyed smirking Lorelei in front of me, "Peter!"

"I'm not here to see you. Give me the real Lorelei." I went to the foot of the bed.

"She is a bit busy right now." She laughs a bit, "Come here." She fingers for me to get closer.

My eyes narrow and I get closer to the bed. She kisses me passionately. I knew then it was Inferno, it was the fiery kiss she gave that made my body light up, "Peter," She hushed into my ears, "I want your skin against mine while you cradle my back, and nudge my neck with your nose, while I gasp." She moved to my other ear, "Like last time."

I exhale roughly, and try to resist her sexual attraction. I clear my throat, "No, you're not the real Lorelei."

She moans, "Oh, but Peter. Don't you remember what you said to me?" She smirks into my ear, "Oh wait, you weren't saying anything, it was all groans." She lightly blows in my ear.

She knew that was my weak spot. I grab her waist roughly.

"You're what I came for, Peter. I want you." She grabs my chest.

===Lorelei===

"Damn her and her seductive skills!" I scowl, looking at Peter place a hand on her cheek.

"Lorelei, psst." I hear a whisper next to me.

I kept my eyes on the screen, seeing Peter straddle Inferno, making out with her.

"Damn!" I shout.

"Lorelei! I know how you can talk to Peter!" I snap my head to the young girl talking to me.

"How?" I look at one of the twelve mirrors in front of me.

The one with a twelve-year-old me signals for me to look, "Just think really hard about his mind and say what you want."

"Why are you helping me? Why should I believe you?" I ask a bit harshly.

"Because I'm Twelve, and always will be, so what would I do with a sixteen-year-olds body? I like the way your life is, anywho, so I wanna help." She smiles that sweet innocent smile I had when I was small.

"Thank you." I return my less sweet smile.

I think about Peter's mind as I take a good glance at my shirtless boyfriend. What are you doing?!

He jolts back; "Ah!" he grips his temples.

Keep your goddamn promise to me! Get out! Show me you love me by figuring out what's wrong with me!

Peter gets off of Inferno, "Where are you going?"

At the door frame, Peter turns his head, "I have a promise to my real girlfriend." And he leaves.

"Yes!" I pump my fist into the air.

I couldn't see him anymore; it only lasted to where Inferno could see.

"Damn." I whisper to myself.

"Damn." Inferno says.

Peter, are you home yet? Communicate through your mind; think deeply about my mind maybe that will work.

I heard nothing for a few minutes.

I'm home now. He responded finally.

Good, no figure what the hell is wrong with me! I'm horribly sick! I mentally shout.

Inferno giggled, "I hear everything you think to him, Lorelei."

I was surprised with what she said, but I remained quiet.

"Oh my god," Inferno shouted, "Lorelei, I think there is something you should know."

"What, that you nearly had sex with my boyfriend?" I said snapped back.

"No, no, you already knew that. It was about Peter, I need you to think about him for a second, now about Inferno Glow." She sounded like this was important, which didn't happen often.

I remembered every time I went out as Inferno. There was the time I first went out, I met Spider-Man. I thought longer.

"Lorelei, what happened that morning when Peter got back from wherever he was?" She asked, making it sound like she knew the answer, and was trying to give me a hint.

"His arm was hurt." I said.

Yeah, that's what happened….wait.

Peter was really intrigued when I said Chicago had Spider-Man fan club. Whenever I saw Peter leave, I saw Spider-Man out on the town. Those things are two probably coincidences. But how come Spider-Man cared so much about Holly's death, or my almost death?

"How about that time we crushed the bug?" Inferno chirped in.

I remember the one time I saw Peter shirtless, "OH MY GOD! MY BOYFRIEND IS FRIGGIN SPIDER-MAN! HOLY SHIT!" I shouted.

"I have to get out of here." I said to myself.

"No!" Some said, "You have to stay!" some laugh or scream, "I haven't gotten out yet!"

"I hate you all!" I scream, "You're not even real!"

"Of course we are real!" The laugh-y one shouts.

"No…! You're…!" I pound on the glass, causing it to crack, "Not….!" I kick it, causing it to shatter to many pieces.

They all shouted at my escape, except the young one, who was smiling.

"You all ruined my life! How could you!" I look around to them, "What do you have to say for yourself?"

There was an eruption of voices, trying to explain themselves.

"Nah-uh," I wag my finger and shake my head; I approached the laughter mirror, "Can't get rid of you my ASS!" I kick the glass, and the girl shatters, no longer there.

I went to the rest of the ten, till I reached the one that was younger than me.

"How do I get out of here?" I ask her, putting a hand on the glass.

"You need to get Inferno back here, and then destroy her." She says importantly.

"How do I bring her back?" I ask in anticipation.

"I'm not sure how, but I know it's possible." She nods her head.

"I got it." I smirk slyly.

Inferno, I need you to do me a favor, get up and find the gun I shot myself with, I need to some closure. I think hardly for her to hear.

"Well, I guess I could give you one thing before you die." She sighs and walks to the hallway, going further and picking up the gun.

Inferno was never particularly smart, and was very gullible.

A cop quickly jumps her, hitting her head on the hard floor.

Inferno is soon seen in the white room, "Well, you made my job easier…." She looks at the younger me, "Oh you forgot one." She walks over to it, ready to elbow it before I stop her.

"No! Stop inferno, I am in charge of this body!" I shout, throwing her on the floor.

She laughs, "Honey, I'm the one with the powers here, remember?" she gets up, her hands light on fire, throwing one on me.

I laugh, "I'm still immune to it."

She laughs back, extinguishing her flames, "Right, but words will hurt you."

"Sticks and stones." I hiss, Inferno quickly approaching me.

"Bull shit," She smirks, "You want wanna sit for this." She pushes me, causing me to fall on my butt, "You know, when I had sex for the first time, it was really awesome." She whispers, crouching close to me, "Peter really has no sense of control."

"You're ganna use that to break me?" I laugh a bit.

"I'm you, I know its working." She laughs, "But as I was saying," She sits, "So what happened was after we were past all the making out and stuff, he started feeling me up and down. I loved his soft hands against my skin." She teases me.

"You're a bitch." I spit.

"I'm only you, just remember that." She stands up, walking away, "Oh, and when we reached the top of the 'rollercoaster' the first time, he didn't stop….because he loved it." She says in a nasty tone.

I jump up, balling up my hands, "I am not YOU!" she turns around just in time for me to punch her in the face, "I am a kind person, I don't hurt a hero who is trying to help you. I don't find that I should dress like a whore!" I punch her in the face, it making a big crack, like a clay pot, right down the middle of the face.

"Even if you kill me, there will always be a part of me in you." She smiles.

"I don't need to control my powers if the payoff is you, I would rather have killed my sister by accident then killed my father because of you." I spat.

"No, honey, you did that yourself." She shakes her head, laughing.

I almost dropped my jaw, "What?"

"Yeah, that was all you." She smiles, her face cracking a bit more.

"Stop it with the games! You ruined my family! You ruined my love life! You ruined my sanity! You ruined everything! I don't want you!" I kicked her face, shattering her left eye, "I used to think of you as a friend."

"See…you were crazy even before all this." She laughs, more of her face cracking.

"One more kick, and you'll be dead." I smile.

"Go ahead, but I won't be gone. I'll always be with you." She smirks once more.

"If that's even true, I'll control it! I'm a strange girl, I am more than capable! You aren't needed, you never were, and you were just a mess waiting to explode! You have to be destroyed, and you'll only trying to scare me out of it like usual!" I raised my leg high above her face, "Well, I'm done with all of that!" I slammed my foot down, her smirking face exploded, shards flying everywhere. I blocked my face, but I still heard cracking.

I turned around to see my younger self standing there, hands placed on the glass, Inferno's shards in the glass, "Thank you for showing all these things."

"Wait!" I shout, but before I could finish, the mirror shattered. Then she was gone.

I gasped. Jumping up in the hospital bed, "Shit." I breathed heavily, "I made it out." I smile.

It wasn't long before I jumped to the phone in the room. I dialed Peter's cell phone number I had memorized. I rang a few times before he actually picked it up.

"Hello?" He answered suspiciously.

I felt a rush come over me as I spoke very fast, "Peter, this will probably sound crazy as it is, but I'm not crazy anymore. I destroyed Inferno and the other personalities. I safe now, and-" I couldn't finish my sentence before I began to cough repeatedly.

"Lorelei! Are you alright?" He panicked into the phone, "I'm coming closer to finding out what's wrong."

"I'm going to lay back down Peter, I feel a bit light headed." I saw, tired.

"You probably just need more blood." He says casually. The end goes silent for a bit, "That's it! Lorelei! I know what's wrong with you! I'll be over soon!" He hangs up the phone.

I took a trip to the trash can before I got into bed. My hair was glowing, levitating even. Everything under my skin burnt. I didn't know what was wrong with me, but fortunately, Peter did. I laid there, looking up at the sealing, I felt like shit. I couldn't stop coughing and vomiting. It was horrible.

I was lying sideways on the bed, clutching my stomach, finger nails digging into my skin. I was in such pain, vomiting every few minutes. Below my skin was burning, feeling like I could explode.

"Lorelei," Peter ran through the door, his feet sliding slightly, "I know what's wrong!"

"Go ahead, explain." I moaned out, clutching my constricting stomach.

"So you know the first time you went to the hospital?" He sat in the chair in front of me. He sounded a bit excited, while I was here looking like crap.

"No, Peter, I completely forgot of the time my father almost murdered me." I sarcastically said.

"Well," He continued, ignoring my comment, "Because of the Oscorp fire, those chemicals got into your bloodstream, and created a whole new blood type, so when they gave you more blood at the hospital, it slowly reacted this way. First it took your body, then suddenly your mind." He grabbed my hand, smiling.

"Great," Being sarcastic once more, "You figured out what's wrong with me, so why don't you fix me?" I got up, running to the trash can, burning hot fluids flying out of my mouth to the trash.

He was silent for a few minutes, while I crouched at the trash. I could only assume he was thinking, when I rose up, I had been right, I saw him contemplating this in his mind. I didn't even make it back to my bed before I collapsed.

"Lorelei!" Peter jumps up, going to my side.

"Peter, I already said this, but I am going to die. We should both face it together." I grip his hand, coughing, but this time it was an eruption of embers flying from my mouth, like I had just puked glitter.

"No, I won't let you die! I should know how to fit this!" He assured me, "I will figure this out."

"Peter, we have to face the truth, I am going to die very soon. I want you to stay with me." My eyes began to tear up, "I love you, Peter."

It had rubbed off onto him, his eyes began to get glossy, "I love you too, Lorelei." He paused, whipping his eyes, "But I will make you better!"

Before I can say another word, he is out the door.

I lay onto my back, sighing, but the sigh soon becomes a violent cough. I spewed embers from my mouth, falling back onto my face. It was already so hot that I couldn't feel the embers as they landed.

I looked at the ceiling.

So this is how I'm going to go, huh? What a creative and cruel way.


:O Once again, i am leaving it off with Lorelei about to die. How many times have i done this? I dunno, a lot.

Reveiw please! especially now! i wanna hear all of your creative ideas how you think this is going to end!

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