Finding the disappearances

Deleted/Alternate scenes

Tom comes through the doors: Thanks for hanging with us for another chapter. Sorry, there was a little mix up for between both this chapter and one for Transformers Cybertron 2: A New Beginning. At times, we really are just pushing buttons, like what Tim did with trying to pull up the original chapter for this story. Owelp, we don't always push the right button. Hmm? What's this one do?" Hits the touchscreen buttons.

Me: Before we do get into this chapter, I would like to apologize for the late update for this chapter. Been nearly a year since it was announced and i lost the flash drive that had little changes on it. But I'm glad to get back to it for you all. Now, let's get to this.

TP1

Chapter 11:

This was what I came up with before I made it to where they discovered they needed to search the outside. I decided to leave it out and put in the chapter where TR comes in and shows them everything just to show their learning from their mistakes. So enjoy.

But while at Brocks house Misty, May and Dawn were beginning to look in the room that Ash disappeared. They looked everywhere and nothing. "Sorry Misty. There's nothing here either." May said. Misty was about to cry a third time until… "Hey guys. I've found something!" Dawn explained. Misty and May looked at her. They saw Dawn holding a camera. "I think Ash may have left it here. It may have what had happened." Dawn said. "Then play it." Misty demanded.

So Dawn Opens it and plays it. It shows Ash writing his notes. He looks to the camera. "Ok now. I'm done with all these notes and hope they get to the right people. Plus…" He picks up the camera and places it on the floor. "I'm gonna be sure this camera is fully charged for who ever finds this." he plugs it in. "And…" he places it under the bed. "Hide it." The light goes out. "Shoot." he turns it off. They knew where that would've came from and looked at the window

That was the end of the recording.

Chapter 15:

"Yes! But you can't take me and my team down." he said. Ash gave a quizzed look.

What team are they? "And what's your team name?" Ash asked.

Chapter 18:

This one was added on cause I thought of a cliffhanger for it. Although both this one and 19nare the same, I decided for separate chapters. I do like cliffhangers. But I won't use them all the time.

Chapter 20:

In this one, I was thinking of Misty hiding somewhere is this one and grabbing the keys to join Ash in this one, but found it stupid. So I simply had her found out by Johnthro. I put a lot of changes into this chapter. Didn't think correctly in this one. That was till I had time to think it over.

Chapter 21:

Then Ash felt something on his head. He touched it to see... "My hat!" Ash exclaimed. He looked at Misty who had it. "B-but how?" he asked.

"Team Rocket had it and gave it to me. Pikachu sniffed it and we came here." Misty said.

"How are the Pokemon I gave you guys?" he asked her. She tell him everything. "So you guys wanted to find me?" he asked her. She gave a few nods to him. He hugged her and she returned it. They looked at each other.

Misty smiled at him and he returned it. They shared another kiss, since they were finally together. But they didn't have long.

I didn't about this part until AFTER the story was done. A Pro-logue to the first chapter. It was going to be about the news reporting on the guys and what all they had accomplished. Drew was in the quarter finals for the ribbon cup. May was as well and she was smiling at him. Kenny went into the semi finals with Dawn, Zoey and their friends. Ash had won the Sinnoh League and was beginning to face Cynthia. The friend and family were watching the broadcast of them. As they were Johnthro and Team Element had been studying them and been planning their attack on the trainers and coordinators.

As for the update, feedback or reply from Misty to Brock to the others. I completely forgot to do those parts. In one of the chapters of the second investigation Misty was supposed to get in contact with Brock and let him know what all they had found out after their first investigation. After they interrogated the member of Team Element that's when Misty got in contact with Brock again and kept him up to date. When the girls had found most of them she did another contact with him. After the downfall of Team Element and Ash was badly wounded, was when Misty had gotten in contact with Brock for one last time. The whole time she did, he kept their friends up to date.

The amount of two days should've been altered to a few days for a more accurate effect to the time zones or the timing of the characters on their ships. In this story, I was trying to be completely or very accurate for the story. The other thing that had to be accurate was tracking down the guys that had disappeared. For that part was the main key, Ash's hat. I had randomly thought of the girls heading in a certain direction to find them at, but knew that didn't make any sense. So I added the hat and Pikachu as the main key combinations for the story. Him sniffing Ash's hat, plus having a GREAT bond with his teenage trainer, gave the story the push it needed to go on.

As for Team Element, it was something I thought of at random, but did make a good connection in the story. Since they could bind themselves with different nature elements, it showed how well they were put together. When Misty told Ash it was all technology of the suit they wore, she was right. Plus, it was to help them balance their abilities to use the forces of nature at will to make it work to their advantage. If they didn't have the suites on, they couldn't have used their nature powers correctly. Thus they would get overwhelmed and possibly die, get hurt badly or somehow merged with their powers or the element of nature their powers were associated with. That is what Misty didn't know about.

The "epilogue" chapter is where it tell what had happened after a month. So far you all saw what had happened and what will happen. But where May said that she though she was pregnant is where I was going to say she was. But I leave it to you all if she is or isn't. Of course her father would kill Drew if she was. Plus of where Misty was pregnant and it was specified that their friends and family didn't know. I was told they wouldn't care, but I left that scene as is.

In each scene is possibly something either deleted or altered for the story to work properly or to make it flow better. That's how I am wanting my stories to operate. It's to set a proper story line in the stories I do and much more. But when I'm stumped I look to my friends or my girlfriend, AL1028, for help. That's how I get my flow going for my chapters in the story.

TP1

Tom: Well, that's it for this chapter folks. Spring semester is over next week for TimPrime1. But he's going to be be in summer college to not be held back by a year. HE may miss out on some fun, but at least someone is coming for a visit. Also we finally found out where that transmission was coming form. It's origin is earth and it's a trailer for Iron Man 3. It's going to be in theaters 05/03/2013. We all know this is going to be epic. But the Absolution is still malfunctioning a bit." Hits the touchscreen buttons. No response. "Come on now!" Does it more and it cooperates. "Instead of a symbol, he's doing this the old fashioned way. Don't forget. This is not completely accurate." Hits the play button.

Aleski: I was on a trip with my family to Jhoto.

Ash: You could stay with us.

Evan: It barely matters. Hardly any of us can take on Frieza.

Timothy: As long as we stay together, we're unstoppable.

Tom: Another chapter of Pokemon: Frieza and the Astray Dragon Balls is up next. Just remember to stay gold and you all can see all of this and more. Only Toonami.

I hope you all enjoyed this semester. Summer is next and I'll be even more busy doing that. Hope to see you all there. Till next time.

TimPrime1 out