This chapter will be relatively short due to an announcement I feel like I have to make so here goes:
This story will no longer continue and will eventually be remade due to the multiple mistakes I made when I was writing. Here below is a list of some of the cons I made when I was writing this story.
Some of the mistakes include me making my character Lucas the protagonist when I clearly have Jaden Yuki in this story whom is the MAIN Protagonist.
I'm afraid I also made Lucas a bit too likable without even exploring him as a character.
Another issue was how I also gave him the Wicked Gods, at the time those were a few of my favorite cards other than the Sacred Phoenix of Nephthys and Horus the Black Flame Dragon.
Another mistake that I felt I made was that I gave Lucas and Rose no Chemistry and that they were immediately attracted to one another.
A grave error I felt I made was the Inclusion of some of the cards I made up, I felt that some of their effects and abilities were overpowered.
Another error I would like to address was how I wrote the Duels and monster effect descriptions, In my Opinion In some of the other stories I wrote I feel as if I got better at writing them and I would like to include that in my Remake of this story.
An issue I had after I read this story was that I feel as if I made the plot and the characters a bit too generic, along with revealing the motives and not revealing enough of the villains.
I also feel as if I revealed the Villains and their plot a bit too early into the story without giving them many characteristics or traits along with the protagonists.
A personal issue I had while reading and writing this story was how short the chapters were. I had a busy schedule,, I wrote this while I was in college, and even wrote while I was sick and I wrote as much as I could when I had the time to write, but I felt like the chapters could be a bit longer and have more content to them.
So all in all, I won't be erasing this story after all the hard work I put into it, there are some people who would enjoy this, so I won't delete it. I also may be using a similar idea for the remake of this story.
If you did enjoy reading this story, I'm sorry it has to come to an end, but I will remake this story and make it better than before, so you might have something to look forward to in the future.
It's been fun writing this story and it's been fun meeting the people who like it. Hopefully my Remake will be better than this story and I hope you'll like it just as much as you did this one.
Look for it in the future and Happy Reading!