Her story, My Mission: Beginning with Fables

by AbandonedLongAgo

There's a story I've been asked to tell her in the hospital, the story of a girl, a man and his blue box. From beginning to end I'll tell her the life of Lorraine Sanford, then maybe a new story can go on from there. But for now, with each page I read her, danger looms closer and closer for me, and I worry the last page might mean the end. UPDATE AUTHORS NOTE: 29/6/2017

26. AUTHORS NOTE REWRITE

AUTHORS NOTE

Hello readers! I'm going to start this off with a groveling apology. I'm so sorry it's been at least more than a year since the last upload. Excuses of time management with university and life could be inserted here and it wouldn't be wrong, but honestly my problem for the past few months has been re-reading my work and just… not liking it.

Not that I hate this story in anyway, in fact it is one of my centre favorites. (Lorraine has her own playlist in my laptop, and I don't do that for my other characters. P.S. let me know opinions about a possible 8tracks list?).

I started this when I was 16, and did not have anything close to the writing baby teeth I have now. I'm still learning, but the foundations I built all this on are so choppy and just… cringe. You can't build a castle on bad foundations guys.

So, this is a warning about a complete rewrite, the following will absolutely be gone:

1. The hospital book reading side plot (so inconsistent and just… why?)

2. With that the title and summary will be different too (I know that will make it hard to find, I'll try to make it easier)

3. That 'I can't feel emotion thing' with the Keller Machine (Might keep the Keller Machine, not sure but let me know what you think.) It just got inconsistent.

4. More condensed chapters. I know Classic episodes are long, but probably not as long as I made them feel. I do know that the chapter about Claws of The Axos was read more, probably because I condensed it.

5. NO MORE ALL ITALICIZED CHAPTERS. (I'm sorry, I'm so sorry. I don't know what I was doing there.)

Also there is going to be a few big plot changes that will require a complete re-read of the story (again I'm sorry, but I gotta fix this up).

So, that is the update. Again I'm really sorry about this but I'm gonna do my best to make this story better.