Hey Skaiwalkers! Just know that I'm not gonna respond to every review anymore, it just takes a lot of time amd it will make the chapter about 300 unneeded words longer. I will reply to some, but not all anymore.
So, KrystalINSANE Girl asked me to update before the weekend because she won"t have internet, so here I am, unplanned updating!
Responses to reviews:
A nobody (Guest): Yes, Jack knows how to play the guitar, as said in the flashback chapter. I'll make him play later in the story.
PurpleRoseFromYou: I will not let someone murder Lane! But I haven't said anything about a car crash or anything like that... *Evil grin*
Jennlee1: I know right, that's so touching!
autumn1999: Thank you! I'm glad you like my writing!
AllDaydreamsAreDangerous: Ahw thanks! I think I need to start making a list of my own quotes then... Hahah.
Alex. G (Guest): Hahah, thanks!
KrystalINSANE Girl: Hahah, ain't nobody got time for that! I love that soo much...
Previously on 'You spin my World':
She saw Jack's thumb softly caressing her hand.
The hospital: Room 394
"Grace, what's wrong?" Asked a concerned Jerry, looking at the shocked expression on Grace' face. "He-He m-m-moved. He moved! Kim get a doctor! Jack moved!" Grace exclaimed happily. Both Jerry's and Kim's face lightened up, as Kim jolted out of the room, frantically searching for a doctor.
Kim almost tripped like a dozen times, but she couldn't believe it. Jack moved. Just that one little thing that gave her hope. She soon saw doctor Snape sitting in a chair in the waiting room. She stumbled towards him, stopping in front of him, breathing heavily. "Mrs. Crawford, for what do I owe the pleasure?" He asked, his voice monotone.
"Jack, he moved. Grace felt him move." Kim cheered, still breathing heavily from her marathon run through the hospital. Doctor Snape stood up and quickly paced towards Room 394, with Kim following behind.
(A/N: See what I did there... Snape... 394... Get it? No... Oh, alright...)
Snape silently paced into the room, seeing Grace and Jerry smiling at the sleeping boy in front of them. "Mrs. Brewer, Mr. Martinez, is it alright if I take a look at Jack?" Snape asked sincere. Jerry and Grace nodded and stepped away, making space for the doctor.
Snape walked towards Jack. First, he felt his pulse, which was beating at a regular pace. He took out his stethoscope and listened to Jack's heartbeat, just to make sure. It sounded quite alright, calm and most importantly, beating.
Five minutes later (A/N: Sorry...!)
Snape laid down his things and turned to the three awaiting teenagers. "It seems that Jack is slowly waking up. The movement was just an impulse, but it shows that he is in fact, waking up. I don't know when he will, but I don't think it will last longer than a month. He's a fighter, I can see that. He'll get through this. You're lucky to have him, you know, I've seen people in this state who didn't fight and just died, families were heartbroken, but I don't think Jack is the same, he'll make it." Snape told, a small smile twitching on his lips.
Grace, Jerry and Kim stood there amazed. He was going to wake up, within a month! "I'll stay here!" They all said in unison. "Alright," Grace started, "The one with the best reason stays. Me first, I'm his sister!" Grace said. "Well, I'm his best friend and um-um I'm a potato!" Jerry reasoned.
Grace and Kim shot him confused look, but shrugged it off. "I'm his girlfr-person. Yeah, I don't know what we are exactly, but I was here the whole time!" Kim butted in. "How about we take turns, Kim stays today and tonight, then I'll take over tomorrow, and Jerry the day after that, and then Kim again and we repeat the cycle." Grace reasoned.
"What, what cycle? Like, a motorcycle?" Jerry said, being dumb once again. "I'll explain later, but in this way, we can still do whatever we want. And Kim can be there for the release party, because we're already missing one DJ, and we can't miss both." Grace smiled. "I guess you're right." Kim said smiling, knowing things will be better from now on.
Time skip (We skip to Friday the 27th of August, the day of the release party.)
Kim sat down at her table, watching all the guests having fun. She saw Debby Ryan, Spencer Boldman, even Victoria Justice! She was happy that the party was such a success, but it would have been a lot more fun if Jack were there. I mean, it was their song, they made it together, and now she's here alone.
"Hello, my name is Gustavo Rocqué, producer and founder of Rocqué Records. Before I announce all the important thing, will the dogs please get their butts away from the chocolate fountain!" Gustavo yelled. Carlos, James, Logan and Kendall pit their hands up in defense, slowly stepping away from the chocolate fountain.
"Great, now that's covered, I'm proud to announce the song we've all been waiting for, the collaboration between Kim Crawford and Jack Brewer, known as Snowflake and Mr. Kicky Kicky Chop Chop. So, I present, burn it down!" Announced Gustavo, hitting the play button.
The song started playing, and Kim looked around anxiously. Eventually, the singing was done by Duvall, and he was at the party too. Kim looked at the people, listening to their song. She had no idea what everyone was thinking, but the small smiles and heads softly moving along with the music made her feel happy inside. 'Maybe people do like it.' She thought happily.
The song ended, and everyone bursted out in an applause. Kim smiled greatly, knowing that people actually liked the song. "Come up here Kim!" Gustavo cheered. Kim took shy steps towards the stage, feeling nervous. As soon as she set foot on the stage, Gustavo motioned to her, and the applause became even greater. Kim stood on the stage, bowing slightly at the people in front of her.
She slowly took her steps towards the mic, standing in front of it, motioning for people to calm down. "Thank you. Thank you so much. I-I'm so glad you people actually like it. I was so nervous, you wouldn't believe it! Well, speaking for me and Jack, who unfortunately isn't able to come, I say, thank you so much and we hope that both Jack and I can collaborate more in the future." Kim said, smiling at the people watching her.
"Kim, we have one more surprise for you." Kelly said, motioning for Kim to sit down on the chair on stage. Kim sat down, not knowing what the hell was going on. Kelly took the mic and started speaking. "As most of you know, since the paparazzi were everywhere, Jack has been in the hospital. Today, his best friend Jerry Martinez stayed with him, in order for Kim to come to the party. Jerry called me about an hour ago with some great news, and at this moment, we are going to show you all, but especially you Kim." Kelly said sweetly.
She placed a ginormous beamer on the stage with a large white screen in front of it. "Kim, I hope you're happy, cuz' if you're not..." Kelly warned, joking. The beamer went on, revealing Grace and Jerry on the screen. They were in Jack's room. Kim had no idea what was going on, and she felt anxious to find out.
"Hey everyone!" Grace squealed, trying to hold back her excitement. "Well, this afternoon, I was sitting here, waiting for Jack to do something, and something happened." Jerry beamed in. "Kim, I hope you're just as happy as us now." Grace said sweetly. Jerry turned around the camera, almost letting it drop. He got a hold of it again, and pointed it towards Jack's bed.
Jack was leaning against some pillows placed against his headboard. His breaths were deep, and his hair messy. The wires were everywhere, but Kim didn't care, the only thing she saw, were his beautiful chocolate eyes. Jack lifted up his hand a little, giving a small wave.
"Hey baby girl... How's the party?" Jack said, his voice muffled by his breaths. Kim felt the tears sting up in her eyes, and she wasn't scared to let them fall. 'He woke up!' She squealed. "Can-Can he hear me?" Kim asked Kelly. "I can hear you Kimmy." Jack said softly.
"Jack, I-I love you too."
Tada! Jack woke up! Wooooooo! And he remembers everything, because memory loss, ain't nobody got time fo dat!
Okay, completely loose from the story, am I the only one who thinks Spencer Boldman and Debby Ryan would make a super cute couple? Just a random thought here...
"I love you." "I love you squared." - Cody Martin and Bailey Pickett
Xx Skai
