Authors Note- Hey, so this is a bit of a late update. I am sorry. I had an extremely busy last day and a half or so. I am making it up to you though, by posting a few chapters, heh!!! I was alsoi really hungry and tired while writing the review responses, so they might be short.
Disclaimer- This is my disclaimer for the rest of the story, and anything htat should come before it. The characters are not mine, anything from the show is not either. Poems, Songs, anything like that, does not belong to us!
"You are pissing me off lately." I say walking behind Bryce into his bedroom. He sighs, falling down onto the bed. "I'm pissing you off? You are the one who was fucking some guy, while your ten month old lay crying in the crib." He retorts rudely. Some guy? I think I'm catching onto this, his attitude has been rather rough lately, not to anyone in particular, but I have a feeling this could have a lot to do with the wedding. Why he is so upset about the wedding, I am not sure. He was pro marriage since the beginning, now he's behaving like this. "First off all, watch your mouth, second of all that's not some guy that's your father." I chide, he rolls his eyes at me, an act I have been seeing too much of lately. "Whatever." He picks up his game boy off the night stand and starts to play with it. I am not sure what to do to get through to him, he has to respect people, he has to respect his parents and lately I am seeing none of that. I walking over to game boy and pry it out of his tight grip. "Mom!" He whines standing up, his face full of rage, mine full of worry and anger. I am not so sure what to do or say to him to get him to open up to me, to tell me what's wrong. I guess he is like me in that sense. "You're grounded." I say it firmly, confidently so he doesn't know that I am breaking down inside from fear of loosing him, sometimes it seems so easy for Bryce to just slip away emotionally. "That's not fair." He stomps his feet angrily. "It is fair. You can not play on any of your games for a week. No watching television. No Ozzy Osbourne, cause god knows that's probably where you are getting your attitude from. No pixies. No nothing, you can sit at home and be a good little boy." I say, rubbing his arm, he shrugs my hand off looking at me with pure hate in his eyes. "I hate you, you know that? I hate you and I hate Carter. I hate both of you. You are both so fucking mean, and you only care about yourselves. He's probably using me to get close to you, he's a fucking-"
"THAT'S ENOUGH!" I shout, I can't stand this anymore, where the hell is he getting this from? "No extra activities that we have enrolled you in. You will go to school, you will come home from school simple as that. You will do exactly what we tell you for the week. Right now you're playing Cinderella, go vacuum the carpet, NOW!" He looks at me like I am crazy, he has pushed his luck, he can not speak to me like that, he can not say those things. His language is completely out of hand. I have avoided having to ground him in the past, but I think its about bloody time he gets some punishments. He looks at me again scoffing. "I hate Addi too, only because he's Carters. Who I hated more then you until NOW!" He says emphasising on now. I debate grounding him more, or smacking him, but I know he only wants attention, I wait until he has left the room, holding in my tears and anger. He slams the bedroom door, I immediately open it and watch him pass Carter, who says hi politely while Bryce just ignores him. "Vacuums in the laundry room." I manage to holler at him without my voice breaking. Carter walks up to me, expecting me to fill him in on the recent happenings, but I don't. I do exactly what Bryce did too him, then walk into our bedroom.
I don't know what the hell I am going to do with him, in the meantime I will stick the grounding I have. I can feel Carter enter the room I turn around and look at him. "What happened?" He moves closer to me wrapping his arms around my waist pulling me into a tight hug. "He is swearing, saying he hates us. You mainly." I sigh, resting my head against his chest. "Me?" He asks surprised. I nod my head, I don't even have to look at him to know how hurt he right now. "Its the wedding John, not you." I move away from him, he looks hurt, like someone just punched him in the stomach. I don't know what to do or say. "Maybe I should talk to him?" He manages to choke out. "No." I say firmly. "He's not getting away with being a shit. He can hate us all he wants, he is grounded." John collapses onto the bed, he looks distant. "Hey, don't worry this will all blow over." I kiss his forehead, he pushes me away. What is with these men today? I don't know what I am going to do, the only thing I can think of is talk to Bryce. Carter has to harden up with him. Bryce would work him if he went in there to talk to Bryce. He would guilt trip him, or kiss his ass. It's too risky of a situation. I walk to down the stairs of our beautiful house seeing Bryce vacuuming, he glares at me, then continues the vacuuming. "Bryce." I am standing a few feet away, but he continues to ignore me. "Bryce-" I say again with more force.
"BRYCE!" I shout, I can hear the baby start to cry, great this is just what we need. I walk over to the vacuum cleaner and switch it off. "First you make me clean and now you stop me from cleaning?" He spits. I am at my wits end with this kid. Carter walks by us with Addi, "You need to apologize." I say firmly. He shakes his head and tries to start the vacuum cleaner up again. "Bryce." I scream. "What the hell is your problem tonight?"
"I don't have a problem, you want me to me to apologize for having feelings." He tries to get the vacuum back from me, but I won't let go of it. "Those aren't your feelings, that is your bratty attitude coming out. And frankly I don't want to hear it." I place my hands on my hips for added 'mom sternness' effect.
"Whatever." He moves towards me again, again I push him off.
"What the hell is wrong Bryce?" I scream at him. "Nothing. Why does there always have to be something wrong? You are marrying some guy, you move me a billion times, you don't even ask me if I want any of this." He throws his hands in the air, so now the truth comes out. "Carter is not some guy Bryce." I say back, Carter walks by us and puts his hands on my arms, "Leave it alone Abby, if he wants to be this way he will." He says looking at Bryce, he obviously now knows that he is just trying to get attention, he should know by now that if he wants our attention he can just ask as for it. "Shut up." Bryce spits at Carter.
"Excuse me?" Carter asks flabbergasted.
"You heard me. This is none of your fucking business." He yells back, Carter walks over to the play pen and set Addison in it. I can tell this is not going to go very well. "Watch your mouth." Carter says calmly.
"You can't tell me what to do. I can do whatever the hell I want. Your not my dad." "Bryce. Gets your ass in the chair." Carter says fuming.
"What?"
"Chair. Now." Carter says with more force.
"No." Bryce seems a little bit afraid now.
"GET YOUR ASS IN THE DAMN CHAIR NOW BRYCE!" He hollers, even I am a little taken aback by this sudden change in attitude. Bryce looks at me for answers. "You heard him, now Bryce." I say my eyes focused in on Bryce. Bryce walks by us, avoiding Carter and heading over to the kitchen table to sit down. "Put the chair in the corner." Carter says not moving a muscle, Bryce drags the chair into the corner and sulkily sits down. Carter grabs Addison and walks back up the stairs. I watch Bryce sit in the corner, his head down, he won't look at me. I decide to follow him upstairs.
I find him lying in bed. "How long are you going to make him sit in the chair?" I look over at the alarm clock before crawling into bed. It reads 10:07, he is suppose to be in bed by now, he has school tomorrow. "All night." Carter rolls over onto his side. As much as I want to argue this, I don't. He could be onto something to here. Verbally reprimanding him seems to be wearing off. So maybe if we make him spend 8 hours sitting in a chair, and then make him go to school all day tomorrow he will watch how he speaks to us. Only one problem, how are we going to make sure he stays there? "Carter?" I call from my side of the bed. "Yeah." I can tell he is upset by having to do this, he is upset by Bryce's words. "How are you going to make sure he stays there?"
"We have the security camera's that pick up on movement, so that is set. Then we have the dog that barks at anything." Carter tells me in monotone. We just got a new dog, Annie. Bryce wanted a dog, and it goes with our white picket fence. I watch as Carter lays there, I know he is not sleeping, I wish I could make all his troubles go away, but I can't. "Don't you think you should tell him he is going to be down there all night?"
"No." Carter snaps. I realise this could be a good time to go to sleep, or pretend to sleep. Or just shut up altogether
~*~
I walk down the stairs, Addi in my arms, I look over to see a slouched over, sleeping Bryce. I can't help but laugh. I better wake him up, he has to be at school in a bit. "Bryce." I whisper, rubbing his back with my free hand, he moves a bit almost falling off of the chair, he wakes up looking at me. "Mom." He rubs his eyes.
"Hey sweetie go get ready for school." I help him up.
"Owe my back." He whines rubbing his aching back, I'm no longer the enemy, Carter is. This should be interesting. "I thought Carter was going to come down and wake me?" He has gone from calling him dad to Carter, this is definitely going to be an interesting week.
"He thought it would be best if you learned your lesson by sleeping in the chair." Bryce rolls his eyes walking up stairs. I take Addison and put him in his chair, at least we don't have to worry about this for a while from him, he won't have a real opinion for at least six years, he'll just cry a lot. Carter and I are suppose to be getting married in a month's time, and despite what he says I like the friends and family idea of the wedding. I mean I don't want it huge, maybe fifty people? or less? thirty? We can talk about it later, right now I have to make breakfast, Carter works today and I work tonight. So Bryce and Carter will have to stay together tonight, I hope it ends up better then last night did. I grab the boxes of cereal and set them on the table pouring a bowl for Addison. Bryce walks down the stairs, he seems like he is quite stiff. "Agh." He says standing up at the table and pouring himself some coco puffs. "Don't you want to sit down?" I say looking up from bibbing Addi. "I am never sitting down again." He sighs. I can't help but laugh a bit at this. He starts to eat his cereal, just as John is tying his tie and walking into the kitchen, he kisses me on the cheek, while Bryce shoots him a dirty look. "Morning baby." He hugs me and then sits down at the table, he looks Bryce up and down noticing he is not sitting down. "Why aren't you sitting?" He says barley looking up from his paper.
"I don't wanna." He says not looking at Carter. "Besides I spent all last night sitting down when some jerk made me sleep in a chair."
"That jerk can make you sleep in the chair again so I'd watch it." Carter says back, his newspaper on the table. "I don't need this shit from you. I hope mom comes to her senses and doesn't marry you." He tosses his spoon in his cheerio's leaving the kitchen, but not before Carter can catch up to him and call him on his comments. "Why? Because I am punishing you for being a rude smart ass to your mother and I?" He turns around and looks Carter squarely in the eye. "No, because you use to be fun. Now your just a jerk who wants to get in my moms pants." I know what this is about, Bryce knows once we are married things will never go back to the way they were, it will never be just him and I again. "Yeah well its just you, Addison and me tonight." He hollers after him. I walk over to an upset Carter, realising that is at a complete loss for what to do. "Hey, he's just getting use to the wedding." I say rubbing his arm.
"He hates me." He pushes by me and walks out the door. Good morning to you too baby.
*~ReViEw ReSpOnSeS~*
MrsWyle- I don't think we ever get tired of hearing the compliments, I don't. Bryce always seems to be in the wrong place at the wrong time.
mandi- I am glad you enjoy the other fic. We wanted a change of pace. Something new and different, so we decided on that!
ER-Carby-Luva- YES! Angst stories ROCK!!! But an angst story with no fuzz, not so much lol. We haven't discussed teh sequel issue in a while, we should though seeing as this ones ending soon.
Kaitlin- I was hoping the first time I was watching dear abby I might be drunk, or I might have dreamt it. Not such luck:( Turns out carter really is that big of a coward:(! Ehhhh what can you do, Abby could kick his and Kems ass anyday lol. (I'm not bitter... really I'm not)
Kaitlin- Thank you I am glad you enjoy the story:)
smilez4eva- Sequel is still up in the air. Its not going to be like this fic though. I will reveal in the last chapter what I mean and what is going on. Bryce is a brat for the next little while, I guess all kids are from time to time.
vkh214- hahaha yeah that was a nice line.
Amanda- so many things all rolled into one lol
Amanda- yeah, but these next few chapters aren't Bryce's best lol.
Tilde8884- I'd be freak over getting married, I'd say no like the first seven times... ahhhh lol. Bryce and Abby did make up, this here is a whole new ballgame lol.
smilez4eva- i know, i wish carter and abby would talk on the show.
carbybubbles- thank you, I am glad you like the story:) Sequel, we are not so sure about.
Caroline25 - haha the car heh. That would be weird though, lol, they'd just leave bryce to go screw in the car lol. I think they should stick to beds, but that would be boring lol.
carbybubbles- I'm glad you like the story. You should read the first half, it clears alot of things up. It is a long read though lol.
carbylobsterandavrilfan- I am glad this is your favourite story!!!
hyperpiper91- Sorry that florida wasn't that sunny dude. :( Maybe another time. Addison is a pretty cool kid.
TooLazyToSignIn- I put a disclaimer at the top of this page. Are you happy? I am sorry, but get off your high horse and jump down here with the rest of us. I made a mistake okay? I did not know that there was a poem in hat chapter, because I did not write it and I am not familar withthe poem. So get of my back. if you want to be nicer about it thats one thing, it was a simple mistake, we all make them. Sometimes even more then once. If you want to critiqe our work thats one thing, people even do that in a nice way. If you are really that discouraged with it, STOP READING! Shit happens, you get over it, so move on.
honeybear1- No they are engaged. It was just a tiff. lol.
Disclaimer- This is my disclaimer for the rest of the story, and anything htat should come before it. The characters are not mine, anything from the show is not either. Poems, Songs, anything like that, does not belong to us!
"You are pissing me off lately." I say walking behind Bryce into his bedroom. He sighs, falling down onto the bed. "I'm pissing you off? You are the one who was fucking some guy, while your ten month old lay crying in the crib." He retorts rudely. Some guy? I think I'm catching onto this, his attitude has been rather rough lately, not to anyone in particular, but I have a feeling this could have a lot to do with the wedding. Why he is so upset about the wedding, I am not sure. He was pro marriage since the beginning, now he's behaving like this. "First off all, watch your mouth, second of all that's not some guy that's your father." I chide, he rolls his eyes at me, an act I have been seeing too much of lately. "Whatever." He picks up his game boy off the night stand and starts to play with it. I am not sure what to do to get through to him, he has to respect people, he has to respect his parents and lately I am seeing none of that. I walking over to game boy and pry it out of his tight grip. "Mom!" He whines standing up, his face full of rage, mine full of worry and anger. I am not so sure what to do or say to him to get him to open up to me, to tell me what's wrong. I guess he is like me in that sense. "You're grounded." I say it firmly, confidently so he doesn't know that I am breaking down inside from fear of loosing him, sometimes it seems so easy for Bryce to just slip away emotionally. "That's not fair." He stomps his feet angrily. "It is fair. You can not play on any of your games for a week. No watching television. No Ozzy Osbourne, cause god knows that's probably where you are getting your attitude from. No pixies. No nothing, you can sit at home and be a good little boy." I say, rubbing his arm, he shrugs my hand off looking at me with pure hate in his eyes. "I hate you, you know that? I hate you and I hate Carter. I hate both of you. You are both so fucking mean, and you only care about yourselves. He's probably using me to get close to you, he's a fucking-"
"THAT'S ENOUGH!" I shout, I can't stand this anymore, where the hell is he getting this from? "No extra activities that we have enrolled you in. You will go to school, you will come home from school simple as that. You will do exactly what we tell you for the week. Right now you're playing Cinderella, go vacuum the carpet, NOW!" He looks at me like I am crazy, he has pushed his luck, he can not speak to me like that, he can not say those things. His language is completely out of hand. I have avoided having to ground him in the past, but I think its about bloody time he gets some punishments. He looks at me again scoffing. "I hate Addi too, only because he's Carters. Who I hated more then you until NOW!" He says emphasising on now. I debate grounding him more, or smacking him, but I know he only wants attention, I wait until he has left the room, holding in my tears and anger. He slams the bedroom door, I immediately open it and watch him pass Carter, who says hi politely while Bryce just ignores him. "Vacuums in the laundry room." I manage to holler at him without my voice breaking. Carter walks up to me, expecting me to fill him in on the recent happenings, but I don't. I do exactly what Bryce did too him, then walk into our bedroom.
I don't know what the hell I am going to do with him, in the meantime I will stick the grounding I have. I can feel Carter enter the room I turn around and look at him. "What happened?" He moves closer to me wrapping his arms around my waist pulling me into a tight hug. "He is swearing, saying he hates us. You mainly." I sigh, resting my head against his chest. "Me?" He asks surprised. I nod my head, I don't even have to look at him to know how hurt he right now. "Its the wedding John, not you." I move away from him, he looks hurt, like someone just punched him in the stomach. I don't know what to do or say. "Maybe I should talk to him?" He manages to choke out. "No." I say firmly. "He's not getting away with being a shit. He can hate us all he wants, he is grounded." John collapses onto the bed, he looks distant. "Hey, don't worry this will all blow over." I kiss his forehead, he pushes me away. What is with these men today? I don't know what I am going to do, the only thing I can think of is talk to Bryce. Carter has to harden up with him. Bryce would work him if he went in there to talk to Bryce. He would guilt trip him, or kiss his ass. It's too risky of a situation. I walk to down the stairs of our beautiful house seeing Bryce vacuuming, he glares at me, then continues the vacuuming. "Bryce." I am standing a few feet away, but he continues to ignore me. "Bryce-" I say again with more force.
"BRYCE!" I shout, I can hear the baby start to cry, great this is just what we need. I walk over to the vacuum cleaner and switch it off. "First you make me clean and now you stop me from cleaning?" He spits. I am at my wits end with this kid. Carter walks by us with Addi, "You need to apologize." I say firmly. He shakes his head and tries to start the vacuum cleaner up again. "Bryce." I scream. "What the hell is your problem tonight?"
"I don't have a problem, you want me to me to apologize for having feelings." He tries to get the vacuum back from me, but I won't let go of it. "Those aren't your feelings, that is your bratty attitude coming out. And frankly I don't want to hear it." I place my hands on my hips for added 'mom sternness' effect.
"Whatever." He moves towards me again, again I push him off.
"What the hell is wrong Bryce?" I scream at him. "Nothing. Why does there always have to be something wrong? You are marrying some guy, you move me a billion times, you don't even ask me if I want any of this." He throws his hands in the air, so now the truth comes out. "Carter is not some guy Bryce." I say back, Carter walks by us and puts his hands on my arms, "Leave it alone Abby, if he wants to be this way he will." He says looking at Bryce, he obviously now knows that he is just trying to get attention, he should know by now that if he wants our attention he can just ask as for it. "Shut up." Bryce spits at Carter.
"Excuse me?" Carter asks flabbergasted.
"You heard me. This is none of your fucking business." He yells back, Carter walks over to the play pen and set Addison in it. I can tell this is not going to go very well. "Watch your mouth." Carter says calmly.
"You can't tell me what to do. I can do whatever the hell I want. Your not my dad." "Bryce. Gets your ass in the chair." Carter says fuming.
"What?"
"Chair. Now." Carter says with more force.
"No." Bryce seems a little bit afraid now.
"GET YOUR ASS IN THE DAMN CHAIR NOW BRYCE!" He hollers, even I am a little taken aback by this sudden change in attitude. Bryce looks at me for answers. "You heard him, now Bryce." I say my eyes focused in on Bryce. Bryce walks by us, avoiding Carter and heading over to the kitchen table to sit down. "Put the chair in the corner." Carter says not moving a muscle, Bryce drags the chair into the corner and sulkily sits down. Carter grabs Addison and walks back up the stairs. I watch Bryce sit in the corner, his head down, he won't look at me. I decide to follow him upstairs.
I find him lying in bed. "How long are you going to make him sit in the chair?" I look over at the alarm clock before crawling into bed. It reads 10:07, he is suppose to be in bed by now, he has school tomorrow. "All night." Carter rolls over onto his side. As much as I want to argue this, I don't. He could be onto something to here. Verbally reprimanding him seems to be wearing off. So maybe if we make him spend 8 hours sitting in a chair, and then make him go to school all day tomorrow he will watch how he speaks to us. Only one problem, how are we going to make sure he stays there? "Carter?" I call from my side of the bed. "Yeah." I can tell he is upset by having to do this, he is upset by Bryce's words. "How are you going to make sure he stays there?"
"We have the security camera's that pick up on movement, so that is set. Then we have the dog that barks at anything." Carter tells me in monotone. We just got a new dog, Annie. Bryce wanted a dog, and it goes with our white picket fence. I watch as Carter lays there, I know he is not sleeping, I wish I could make all his troubles go away, but I can't. "Don't you think you should tell him he is going to be down there all night?"
"No." Carter snaps. I realise this could be a good time to go to sleep, or pretend to sleep. Or just shut up altogether
~*~
I walk down the stairs, Addi in my arms, I look over to see a slouched over, sleeping Bryce. I can't help but laugh. I better wake him up, he has to be at school in a bit. "Bryce." I whisper, rubbing his back with my free hand, he moves a bit almost falling off of the chair, he wakes up looking at me. "Mom." He rubs his eyes.
"Hey sweetie go get ready for school." I help him up.
"Owe my back." He whines rubbing his aching back, I'm no longer the enemy, Carter is. This should be interesting. "I thought Carter was going to come down and wake me?" He has gone from calling him dad to Carter, this is definitely going to be an interesting week.
"He thought it would be best if you learned your lesson by sleeping in the chair." Bryce rolls his eyes walking up stairs. I take Addison and put him in his chair, at least we don't have to worry about this for a while from him, he won't have a real opinion for at least six years, he'll just cry a lot. Carter and I are suppose to be getting married in a month's time, and despite what he says I like the friends and family idea of the wedding. I mean I don't want it huge, maybe fifty people? or less? thirty? We can talk about it later, right now I have to make breakfast, Carter works today and I work tonight. So Bryce and Carter will have to stay together tonight, I hope it ends up better then last night did. I grab the boxes of cereal and set them on the table pouring a bowl for Addison. Bryce walks down the stairs, he seems like he is quite stiff. "Agh." He says standing up at the table and pouring himself some coco puffs. "Don't you want to sit down?" I say looking up from bibbing Addi. "I am never sitting down again." He sighs. I can't help but laugh a bit at this. He starts to eat his cereal, just as John is tying his tie and walking into the kitchen, he kisses me on the cheek, while Bryce shoots him a dirty look. "Morning baby." He hugs me and then sits down at the table, he looks Bryce up and down noticing he is not sitting down. "Why aren't you sitting?" He says barley looking up from his paper.
"I don't wanna." He says not looking at Carter. "Besides I spent all last night sitting down when some jerk made me sleep in a chair."
"That jerk can make you sleep in the chair again so I'd watch it." Carter says back, his newspaper on the table. "I don't need this shit from you. I hope mom comes to her senses and doesn't marry you." He tosses his spoon in his cheerio's leaving the kitchen, but not before Carter can catch up to him and call him on his comments. "Why? Because I am punishing you for being a rude smart ass to your mother and I?" He turns around and looks Carter squarely in the eye. "No, because you use to be fun. Now your just a jerk who wants to get in my moms pants." I know what this is about, Bryce knows once we are married things will never go back to the way they were, it will never be just him and I again. "Yeah well its just you, Addison and me tonight." He hollers after him. I walk over to an upset Carter, realising that is at a complete loss for what to do. "Hey, he's just getting use to the wedding." I say rubbing his arm.
"He hates me." He pushes by me and walks out the door. Good morning to you too baby.
*~ReViEw ReSpOnSeS~*
MrsWyle- I don't think we ever get tired of hearing the compliments, I don't. Bryce always seems to be in the wrong place at the wrong time.
mandi- I am glad you enjoy the other fic. We wanted a change of pace. Something new and different, so we decided on that!
ER-Carby-Luva- YES! Angst stories ROCK!!! But an angst story with no fuzz, not so much lol. We haven't discussed teh sequel issue in a while, we should though seeing as this ones ending soon.
Kaitlin- I was hoping the first time I was watching dear abby I might be drunk, or I might have dreamt it. Not such luck:( Turns out carter really is that big of a coward:(! Ehhhh what can you do, Abby could kick his and Kems ass anyday lol. (I'm not bitter... really I'm not)
Kaitlin- Thank you I am glad you enjoy the story:)
smilez4eva- Sequel is still up in the air. Its not going to be like this fic though. I will reveal in the last chapter what I mean and what is going on. Bryce is a brat for the next little while, I guess all kids are from time to time.
vkh214- hahaha yeah that was a nice line.
Amanda- so many things all rolled into one lol
Amanda- yeah, but these next few chapters aren't Bryce's best lol.
Tilde8884- I'd be freak over getting married, I'd say no like the first seven times... ahhhh lol. Bryce and Abby did make up, this here is a whole new ballgame lol.
smilez4eva- i know, i wish carter and abby would talk on the show.
carbybubbles- thank you, I am glad you like the story:) Sequel, we are not so sure about.
Caroline25 - haha the car heh. That would be weird though, lol, they'd just leave bryce to go screw in the car lol. I think they should stick to beds, but that would be boring lol.
carbybubbles- I'm glad you like the story. You should read the first half, it clears alot of things up. It is a long read though lol.
carbylobsterandavrilfan- I am glad this is your favourite story!!!
hyperpiper91- Sorry that florida wasn't that sunny dude. :( Maybe another time. Addison is a pretty cool kid.
TooLazyToSignIn- I put a disclaimer at the top of this page. Are you happy? I am sorry, but get off your high horse and jump down here with the rest of us. I made a mistake okay? I did not know that there was a poem in hat chapter, because I did not write it and I am not familar withthe poem. So get of my back. if you want to be nicer about it thats one thing, it was a simple mistake, we all make them. Sometimes even more then once. If you want to critiqe our work thats one thing, people even do that in a nice way. If you are really that discouraged with it, STOP READING! Shit happens, you get over it, so move on.
honeybear1- No they are engaged. It was just a tiff. lol.