This story is ending. I'm sorry, but it is. Really soon.
It's not you guys, it's me. I can't write this well. I finally noticed the bad critiques this story gets. I appreciate that the 'Profileless-Lurker' actually said it to me directly and tried to be polite about it, but the other critique (which was on a blog by some random person) was just someone copy-pasting the first chapter and snarking between the lines calling me out on grammar (like I don't know what these: ~* are supposed to be for, using 'their' when it's plural and I couldn't find a gender neutral possessive pronoun besides 'its', the censoring) and saying I'm stupid.
I'm not going to pour my heart and soul into a work that sucks. No matter how fun it is and popular it was. I can understand if you're mad at me, or sad, and I know there are going to be a lot of 'Don't give up!' rants on the review page later.
So this story will end soon, if I update it after this chapter at all. The sequel to this is cancelled. I'm sorry. I don't own Hetalia. I never will, nobody would want me to. I'd just fuck it up like I did this fic.