Hello, hello! --waves-- I.Hate.Running here - this part, where I normally will just talk and talk oh! and talk some more - is going to be known as IHRHC (I Hate Running's Happy Corner). Just to you all's information! First of all - thank you very much for the many reviews --cough--six--cough-- It was more than I expected!
Well … when I first posted this story I had taken it from my account on Quizilla, so … it was just if anyone here would like to try and read it - you might have gotten ideas for your own stories, who known?! But - I'm close to 3000 hits by now (more than expected too -.-) - so I guess it's pretty much liked or something (no?), so I wanted to post yet another chapter as I've had some requests or whatever. :)
So! Here's my thankies! (I'd appreciate if others read the reviews too, because there might be some info or whatever do I know - I'm only writing it!)
To Lonely Salsal - Weeeeelllllll … Don't know if it's a thank you, but I understood, what your point is! Yes, it is a story where I made a girl cross-dress and get her into the boys' team (Dang, that's one lucky gal) - and I doubted too, that anyone would read it - I'm not even sure, if you'll ever read this! XD Ha! The mysteries of life - you never know what you'll get (though I hope for a strawberry ice-cream!). But, I'm rambling - as usual - so … I don't think it's that normal - well, except it's pretty Mary Suish to cross-dress etc. - but she's so much not like the others! First of all, she's the richest in the entire WORLD! Right, everybody else just got a heap of gold - but this girl here, she got a MOUNTAIN of gold! … Doesn't that make it even more MS? ………………… But, well - I hope, that people who doesn't like this kind of story just … bug off (sorry 'bout the French). :) Thank for the review!
To pontaalover - Right, first of all - do you read ALL of my stories or what? Damn, I really love you, you know? You're one of my favs, always reviewing - I can TRUST YOU! Well … I'm glad you liked it a lot … and about the soon-to-be-updated part … --looks at date-- Is this enough answer? --wipes off dust-- Let's get this started again, ne?
To invisible-gurl - Thank you very much for liking it! When I read your review, I somehow imagined a person, sitting with a laptop (I'm guessing it's a laptop - could be something else O.o) and making the neighbours freak out, sell the house and leave as fast as possible. But … what do I know?! XD Here's another update (at last!) so I hope, I won't make the cops drag you away - we don't want to loose a reader, now do we?
To DarksAngeloftheNight - another one of my favourite reviewers (excuse me while I hang you on the Wall of Fame. --pauses-- Ahhh! There hangs a great gal!) And now --breathes in-- THANK YOU SO MUCH! You love my stories, I'm so happy! And yes, you do not have a life, as you state yourself so very clearly - but hey! Let's go have no life together! --runs off into the sunset-- Once again, thanks!
To kur-chan - first of all, I'm probably the same as you … I don't like unorganized (phew, hard to spell -.-) things nor the problem with too little spacing between paragraphs! But! Here's my pathetic excuse XD Well … as you might know I posted this from Quizilla. At first I just used the good old Ctrl and then copi and then pasted it onto Word. But, here I looked it through for typos and stuff like that (I tell you, there was a lot!) and then I just made a document on fanfiction. I didn't know it came out like that T.T And being more lazy than … well, than any other person in the world, I did nothing to it. Therefore I'm thinking about finishing up this story (only a few more chapters) and then I'll re-write most of them :) except those chapters with reviews XD I'd like to keep those!
To LovingMystery0927 - Once again, thank you, you too! And yes, I think she's screwed too - or, I mean I know she's screwed since --gasp-- I'm the author! Mwuhaha! The power is in MY control! --writes on paper - note to self: World Domination-- Here's an amazing update (or … something else, but don't know about amazing … haha …) and I hope you'll enjoy it!
That's about it … isn't it? --glances around-- I hope so … Right! Let's get on with it. First of all, sorry about the lack of pretty-ness in the previous chapters, but as I explained to kur-chan I'm going to do something about it when I've finished this story! This might continue for around … well, I might stretch it to 10 more chapters, but we'll see!
Oh yeah, and I've always in the beginning of each chapter come with a character description, but I've dropped that out of it all - but there's a surprise at the end of the chapter! :)
This story is not as long (each chapter) as Powerful Rikkai Dai as that are around 3000 words, while this normally was in-between 700-3000. Normally, around the 1200 or so.
Now, let the story commence!
--pulling curtains away and reveals stage--
How the heck did that come in here?!
………………… What the …………………
MeMeMeMeMe--I feel self-centred-MeMeMeMeMe
-- Fan Girl-lism at its Best --
Even though they had all stared after you, trying to get in contact with you and getting answer to all their silly questions, you had continued walking. Gracefully away, trying to ignore their shouts. Don't mind, don't mind. You told yourself, even though you could feel it prick at your neck.
Living in your sister's shadow … It may even be that your sempai had somehow gotten onto the right tracks, but still … you weren't living in your sister's shadow - as he nicely had put it - no, not at all! You were living in your own shadow, which was actually more pathetic …
The throne of the Rich. Well seriously, was EVERYONE in Seigaku that stupid?! Yes, yes, it was true, you were the heir but way to go, pointing that out … because, why again had you come to that (crappy) school in the first place? To get away from it all … you mused in your mind.
You walked into the dressing-room where you quickly changed, keeping your eyes on the door too, if a boy (or girl, which was totally obvious there wouldn't!) burst in, to then, as quick as a fox, jump down under the bench, covering yourself with the shirt. Now that wouldn't be obvious …
But luckily you managed to unseen get dressed and leave the room, no one around as both teams were in the middle of practicing. But what you didn't know, as you slipped out through the door, was that two, green-clad girls were watching you from the shadows, hate written … well, all over at least one of the girls' face. "I'll get you for this, Mikoi!"
MeMeMeMeMe--I feel self-centred--MeMeMeMeMe
Returning to the happily unknowing you, that was making your way to the school gate - completely ignoring that you actually had practice (and the captain would kill you later on I might add) - and freedom. Yet, as you were about to step out onto the pavement on the other side, you once again got a feeling of being watched …
Hmm …?
Slowly, you turned your head backwards, glancing around. Thanks to many years of finding journalists and photographers on stakeouts, your now skilled eyes easily made out two girls, watching you from around a corner. "Oh?" You muttered lowly, eyebrow scurrying upwards. "Fans?" The tip of your lips curled upwards. Yet still you grimaced. "As long as they aren't going for any of my clothes …" You thought, remembering as you had been to a party once, where one of the celebs got attacked, stripped and left on the ground by rabies-hit fan-girls.
So, deciding to be on the safe side and not get attacked, you started walking again, hurrying away from the school-grounds. But once again you were unable to step outside the perimeters. "TAKE COVER, JAI-KUN!"
Before your reflexes were able to kick in, you found yourself tackled to the ground by … none other than Minako. What the … heck?! You thought, falling through the air and - when painfully making an impact with the ground - wondering how often this actually happened to you …
Having your face only pressed against the pavement, you were unable to see anything that was going on, and therefore had to rely on your hearing. "Reika, Reiku, take them out!"
HUH?! Take them out?!
That rather odd outburst was then followed by some more cries, the sound of something exploding and … other stuff, which you were unable to make out what was exactly. "O-Oi! Minako, get of off me! I want to see!" You cried out to her, trying to shake her off. But in stead she started dragging you off, away from the crime-scene and back to school. "I. Want. To. See!"
Finally you managed to pry yourself away from her and ran back around the corner, towards the school-yard. And … you froze in mid-air, staring at the thing going on in front of you. I can't possible live in the real world … no way … this is some crazy fiction or something. Because, THIS CAN'T BE REAL!
The two twin-girls from your fan-club were battling it all out with the one other (the fourth girl only watching), somehow dressed as people from Star Wars. At that very moment, your eyes popped as you in disbelief watched it. Then your brow furrowed, wondering. "Why …" You started off, watching them running around, slinging light-swords at each other. "Why are the ones fighting for me … the bad guys …?!"
"Jaiiiiiiii!" At first you wanted to run away, before being tackled again, but … too late. Minako hugged you from behind, tears in her eyes. "You can't just run away from me like that, I was worried!"
What am I? Your younger brother or something …? I sure don't hope I'm your pet?!
"Think if they'd spot you! Think about what they'd possible do! They could hurt you, or- or kill you perhaps!"
"Sorry, Minako-chan … but I'm at a loss here."
"Alright, alright!" The girl shook her head at you, as if you were stupid or something?! "I'll explain it to you."
"Thank you." You then retorted sarcastic, since you were starting to get ticked off. Well … it was you, who apparently got attacked by some girls from your school, thinking of themselves as Jedi's, and it was you, who got tackled to the ground by your - apparently - bodyguard! Who was the victim? You. Who was the only one not being in on anything? YOU!
"You see … those girls are from a different fan-club and, since they want the best for their own idol, they take out others, so that theirs will stand on top."
"…" Of course, why didn't I figure it out - it makes perfect sense! You rolled your eyes, not even bothering with freaking out, but rather going with the flow and see where it would lead you. NOT! Because, it would probably end up with you tumbling over a cliff … or worse … "So …" You started off slowly. "Are you saying they were sent out by someone to … assassinate me …?"
Minako nodded quickly, still trying to get you to come with her away from the battle. Yet you stood firmly on your feet, not wanting to move before it was over. Too awesome! Well, too awesome if - of course - Reiku and Reika didn't loose, since … that would end up in your death. Say, perhaps I actually should get out of here? That was apparently your conclusion … that was, of course before the twins decided to go into sync (also seen in tennis …) and totally annihilated the enemy in one, final blow. The only thing left was … dust …
"Wow …" You whispered, now starting to question your sanity - which everybody else had done years ago. "A person just got totally blown off Earth in front of my eyes … that's not something I see every day …"
Minako once again shook her head at you, also questioning your sanity - well! As you thought it was a bad thing, she actually found it cute. So, whose sanity should we question?! "Of course they don't kill off people - though I might add, we would for you-" Right … "No, no, we've captured her, along with the other."
"That's … great …" I think? Then again, they were trying to kill me, who says they won't go for it again?! And so, while the two girls were presented in front of you, you pondered if you should either let them live (giving of the chance of you being killed later on) or ordering Minako to murder and bury them under a bridge (which you actually thought she'd do - it was for you). As you looked down on the two, you were absolutely split between the two options. One of the girls, the one thinking she was some great actor from Star Wars, was rebelliously glaring back at you, seeming as if she didn't care she would perhaps have been a murderer at that time (thank you, my loyal bodyguards). The other rather looked like she had been dragged into all this (just like you) and … was on the brink of tears somehow too.
"Mikoi-sama, what should we do about these two?" Minako asked, shaking the defiant one's hair. Though, you were too busy wondering; since when she had started calling you Mikoi-sama. Really, you weren't royalty or anything! Not what she knew of (third cousin on mother's side's; aunt's; nephew's; son-in-law's; little sister; who is married to the queen of Shiba's second son - but! That's another story …!). You laughed inwardly, but as everyone stood, staring at you and waiting for an answer, you snapped out of it.
"Right …" You chuckled nervously, waving your hand. "Let's hear their explanation. And if I like it, we'll might let them live. Ne?"
Minako seemed to question your judgement, but dared not to go against her beloved's orders. So she in stead vended her anger and annoyance on the nearest one, pushing the girl onto her knees again, as she was about to stand up. "Stay." She hissed, making you recoil just a little. Am I sure I'm on the good side in this?!
"…" Then you blinked, once again snapped out of the trance. "Right! What about telling me your name to start off with?" Let's try with the good cop! … which only made you receive a glare, ten times worse than the sun. Or not …
At first she looked like she'd rather bite of her tongue than answer, but after Minako had whispered something in her ear (you only heard something about "immense pain"), she lowered her head and muttered out her answer. "Osakada Tomoka …"
"I see." You nodded, still being the good cop - even though it seemed that made you an 'easy target' - go for the weak I tell you! "You seem to be a freshman, am I right?"
"Yes."
"Aha …!" You smiled at her, which made you get in return … a look that told everything - "I want to kill you". Quickly shaking it off, you turned to the other. "And you seem like a freshman too. What's your name?"
"R-Ryuzaki Sakuno …" She stuttered, glancing side-ways at the girls around her, murder written in their eyes.
Your eyes narrowed. "Ryuzaki … Ryuzaki? I've heard the name before …" Then it hit you. "Ah! Are you possible related to coach Ryuzaki?!"
"H-hai! She's my grandmother …"
"Ohh …" This made your eye go into a serious attack of twitching. I feel laps coming up … "Right, let's quickly skip ahead!" You said nervously, feeling scared that your fan-club was holding the Devil Coach's granddaughter a hostage. "Why again were you trying to … assassinate me, for a lack of better words."
"Because you were stealing the spotlight from our beloved!" The red-head decided to join the conversation again, once again defiance and murder written all over. You raised an eyebrow, somehow being able to match her quite well with a certain president of another club. A club that was admiring the air you breathed.
"So … who's your beloved?"
"The prince!"
"… I can think of more than one prince at this school …" You said. Somehow the image of you (not on purpose, I'll quickly add) stepped into the dressing-room as the regulars were changing. Embarrassing, but dang! It was worth dying for! Quickly keeping your drool inside your mouth, you started talking again. "Which one?"
"The only freshman in the tennis club!" Oi! Just leave me out - I'm not that old! … Am I …? "Echizen Ryoma!"
"Oh, Echizen Ryoma!" You clapped your hands together. "I should have known! That cocky little bastard, right?" Perhaps that was the wrong choice of words? Anyways, it resolved once again in Reiku and Reika going all out again the other girl in a battle, which Minako decided to join and … You glanced at Ryuzaki's granddaughter and smiled, deciding to completely ignore it. "Well … I'm going home." You waved at her and turned to leave. But then you paused, turned back again and grinned apologizing. "Sorry 'bout the whole incident … please tell your grandmother, when she hears of this, that I had nothing to do with it! Thanks! Bye!"
And then you finally disappeared in a cloud of dust, running for your life before you were spotted.
MeMeMeMeMe--I feel self-centred--MeMeMeMeMe
Corner of Crack
The Shiina-Twins about
Blood
"It's red."
"Oh, that's figured, isn't it?"
"What do you mean by that?!"
"Well, nothing at all! Except everybody knows that blood is red!"
"I'm sorry that I'm not as smart as you, Einstein! Jeez … I was only starting off slowly …"
"Tsk … How lame."
"Then why don't you say something too? So far I've said more than you!"
"Fine. Sticky."
"Sticky?"
"Yes, sticky."
"Of course! Why didn't I think of that?! Stupid me - I pity myself for not being as smart as you … why did I have to be the stupid twin?!"
"Don't feel so bad … bird-brain."
"Bird-brain?! Who's a bird-brain?!"
"You."
"That was a rhetoric question!"
"…"
"Don't you dare ignore me!"
"…"
"Stop it! I'm telling mom!"
"…"
"You want to have a go at it, huh?"
"I thought you'd never ask!"
"Well, fu-!"
Censored
We're sorry, but we're having trouble with the main cable, please enjoy Nadjai about Candy
"It's sweet, isn't it? I don't know … Well, I know it tastes good, but I don't know how you make it or anything! So … I'm not sure … what exactly am I supposed to answer? No! Wait!
Is this a trick question?"
Once again, sorry … It seems that the question was too hard and … she … passed out … Please enjoy the black screen until we return!
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IHRHC! Right, at last I've updated! Isn't it amazing! Well, don't know what you think so I'd appreciate some reviews etc. Just click the little button, left corner!
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