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Rated M for language and sex.

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Tiny-Great chapter! ;) Yeah I agree, it would be very boring if the story it's about Lightning, Sally and Rayne. But I think I didn't express myself clear, what I mean is that Doc sometimes has more connection with Rayne than Lightning being her own father, I understand Doc maybe your fav character and he's so important for Rayne but he's turning what Lightning should be, for example, sometimes Doc gives some advices to Rayne that Lightning can give to her easily because he's now old enough and has almost the same experience as Doc, but Doc isn't a father so he can't pretend to give Lightning lessons to be 't get me wrong, I adore Doc! and in this story you're writing him fantastic but sometimes you make him take Lightning's place. You said it was Rayne's story after all, so I think you should put more attention on her and some in Lightning because is her father, because as you say if it's all about him and Sally it would be very boring so Doc and Sophia, I mean I rather read a hot night with Rayne and storm than Doc and Sophia just because it's her story, if this were Doc's story it's ok, go ahead, but it's about her and maybe Lightning. I'm telling you this because I almost don't feel connection between Light and Rayne as much as in her and Doc.-Okay, I understand. Besides, I'll never put Rayne with Storm. Rayne does find somebody to…. I'm going to shut up before I give anything away.

oh, so you put the "pit scene" all together, it's ok! I love the part where Lightning tells Sally about having sex with other girls there and Sally telling him "no" that was very good, she has such a strong personality that was good, she ended teasing Light knowing that he would pass out soon hahaha-Yep, Sally knows her husband's habits very well, and yes she took her time getting ready for bed, knowing that Lightning would pass out before she got out of the bathroom.

Anyway, it's a very good story after all, it's worth to read it and I'm so glad that you accept the critics without offending, you know, we give you our opinions then you write whatever you want, the important thing is that you enjoy writing it ;)-We all have the right to voice our opinions. Most of your has been helpful, you even have given me some really great ideas and for that I thank you.

HMG-Nice to know what happened with Sally and Lightning after his hangover, Lightning is so sweet by feel sorry for want to have sex with Sally, even when she didn't want to…-Sally loves Lightning and knows that racecars are very sexually driven. Something that Sophia has discovered over the years.

Aww Light will get some loving by Sally, finally, can't wait. You know, I've been reading some of the comments here and almost all of them were asking for a L&S hot moment, I think you should write one soon, if you need help I'm sure we can give you some tips ;)-Don't have too… They have some 'alone time' at the end of the chapter.

guest 2-Wow. Its sure not nice or pleasant suffering a hangover. Storm is a real cheating deceptive, conceit and disloyal car. Rayne isn't so stupid by the sound of her curiosity. Storm will have the hammer down on him at some point. Good chapter. Keep going-I had a hangover like that, and I learned my lesson about drinking that heavily. Rayne is slowly caching on that Storm just want her for one thing, sex.

This is an extra long chapter, so enjoy!

Chapter 28.- Anger And Passion -

The green flag dropped: Lightning, Doc, and Sally watched the beginning of the race unfold. Rayne drifted to the inside while Storm raced ahead of her. She kept in Storm's draft for the majority of the race. The race was only two hundred laps, a distance both Rayne and Storm could easily sprint, so Lightning was not worried when both cars increased their distance from the rest of the pack. Rayne's first pit stop one hundred laps into the race, she was still in second behind Storm. Rayne and Storm were an entire lap ahead of their competitors. "Good work so far, Kiddo" Doc said as Rayne came in for a pit stop. "Thanks" Rayne said and grinned to her parents before speeding off, resuming her spot behind Storm. Ninety laps later, Doc instructed Rayne to start making her move. Start moving up a little, Kid" Doc said. "Try to get even with Storm so you're at a better position to take the lead." Lightning saw Rayne respond by moving to the outside and increasing her speed. She got even with Storm and stayed there for a lap until Storm took off at his usual blistering speed. Rayne followed Storm and matched his speed. In the last lap, both cars increased their speeds to one hundred and twenty miles per hour, which was insanely fast for teenagers. Around turns one, two, and three, the cars changed leads constantly. First, Rayne was in the lead, then Storm, then Rayne again. "She needs to use her slingshot move!" Lightning said, excitement in his voice.

Out on the track, Rayne and Storm swept into turn four. "Okay, use the move" Lightning murmured. Rayne did not even attempt to do her move. She didn't drive deeply into the corner, or pick up speed. The speed duel continued down the last portion of the track, but right before the finish, Storm surged ahead and won. "Damn it!" Lightning said angrily. "Why the hell didn't Rayne use her move?" "Watch your mouth" Sally said. Although her tone was even, her facial expressions showed deep disappointment in her daughter's performance. "I'm sure she tried her best." "I'm not so sure she did, Sally" Lightning said. "She was set up to execute that slingshot move perfectly but she didn't. What do you think, Doc?" "Something is wrong with Rayne" Doc mumbled. He looked down from his crew chief podium at Lightning and Sally. "I need to get a tape of the race" he said before backing off the podium and driving away. "Why does he need a tape of the race?" Sally asked. "I'm sure he thinks he saw something" Lightning said grimly. "Doc has a good eye out there. He doesn't miss anything." Just then, Rayne drove up to her parents. "Hey" Rayne said. "What happened out there?" Lightning asked angrily "What do you mean?" Rayne asked faking stupidity. "Why didn't you use your slingshot move?" Lightning asked bluntly. "You mean I didn't, thought I did!" Rayne said, false anger flooding through her voice. "I came in second place, that's good right?! A lot of cars would be thrilled to come in second place!" "You know very well that isn't what I mean!" Lightning said angrily. "You had that race won, and you blew it!" "Mom!" Rayne said, spinning to face her mother. "Do you hear what dad's saying?" "I'm staying out of this" Sally said evenly. "This is your argument, just because I married a racecar doesn't mean I know enough about racing to get involved." "Dad, I can't believe you think I lost a race on purpose!" Rayne said furiously, turning back to her father. With that, Rayne sped away.

Lightning sighed and shut his eyes. He drove back to his trailer with Sally in his wake. "If wish Sally" John said. "I can track her down, and bring her back to the trailer" "Thanks for the offer, John" Sally said "Rayne just needs some time to cool off. If you drag her back right now, it will only make things worse." "Yes Ma'am" John responded. Once they were back at the trailer, Lightning got an icepack and parked on top of it. He glared at the empty space ahead of him. "Lightning" Sally said. "Relax, it's going to be ok" "How can I, Sally?" Lightning asked. "It went against everything I originally said about her racing, and now she's taking advantage of it!" Sally drove up to Lightning and kissed him softly. "She's young, and this is her first boyfriend." Sally said, her lips still touching Lightning's. "I know that's not an excuse, but it explains her actions." "I know" Lightning sighed. "But she needs to learn she can't just sacrifice a win like that. It's not fair to herself, and it's against the rules. If the racing officials find out that she been losing races on purpose, Rayne will be suspended." Sally backed away from Lightning and parked beside him. "I know" she said. "I'm sorry" The couple sat in silence; both cars were lost in thought. Just then, Doc pulled up. He did not look happy. "What did you find?" Lightning asked urgently. "What did the tape reveal?" "In the last two seconds of the race, I thought was the sun was reflecting off Rayne's break lights" Doc said heavily. "I was wrong, she was actively breaking, and Rayne lost on purpose."

A half of an hour later, Rayne rolled into the McQueen camp. "Where were you?" Lightning asked, getting off his icepack. "I was hanging out with Storm" Rayne said defensively. "I should have known!" Lightning said harshly. "He is your boyfriend after all!" "Dad!" Rayne exclaimed "We're just friends! I already told you that." "Your lips say one thing now, and a whole different thing when they're touching Storm's" Lightning said, almost smirking. Rayne's face went blank. "You know about us kissing?" she asked in a small voice. Tears filled her eyes and began spilling over. "Several times" Lightning said in a dangerously low voice. "And we also have proof that you lost on purpose today, so I suggest you don't try to deny that either. Get your rear in the trailer and don't you dare come out until tomorrow morning!" Rayne drove past her father. When she did, he gave her a couple of firm slaps to her rear bumper to make sure his words sunk in. Rayne choked back a sob, raced up the ramp to the trailer, and slammed the door shut. Lightning sighed and looked at Doc and Sally. They both wore grim expressions that mirrored his own. It has been close to eight years since Lightning felt the need to spank Rayne. She might be fifteen, but there are some instances were a swat to the rear, drove home the point.

After dinner: Doc took Rayne something to eat, but she refused to open the door. Although Doc didn't like it, he knew that Rayne wasn't going to be hurt by missing one meal. Sally and Lightning headed back to hotel. "I don't know what we are going to do about Rayne" Lightning fretted. "Stickers, relax... We'll figure something out." Sally said "You need to be relaxed or you'll not do well in tomorrow's race." "I know" Lightning said. "But I don't know if I can…" Suddenly Sally had a brilliant idea to make him relax . She drove over to him and kissed him passionately. "Have I told you that you are a hot sexy, stud muffin." Sally quipped playfully as her tire reached out to trace his jaw line. Lightning tried to ignore Sally's advances, but his penis twitched eagerly. One of Lightning's tires was creeping up under her right front tire well and he deftly removed Sally's bra. Sally moaned as Lightning fondled her breasts, finding his touch very pleasurable. Sally's tires skillfully slipped underneath him and removed his codpiece. Lightning moaned as she slowly ran her tire up and down his length. "Mmm, I can't tell you how I've missed you, and our 'alone time'." Lightning moaned. He closed his eyes, enjoying the feeling of her tires as she played with his growing erection.

Lightning and Sally headed to the bedroom. Suddenly Lightning pressed his lips gently below her tattoo; Sally pushed him on to the bed. "I know that your axle is sore." She said "So roll onto your roof." Lightning eagerly rolled over, and Sally pounced on him. She ran her tongue his shaft exploring and tasting every little nook and cranny, before giving his penis a gentle suck. "Don't… stop…" was all Lightning could say. Sally took more and more of him into her mouth, increasing the amount each time until she succeeded in capturing most of Lightning's length. Sally drew her tongue to his tip, running it along his breadth, making his whole frame arch off the bed. Lightning's tires trailed down Sally's sides and then he slipped under her. His tire began tracing over her delicate folds, then venturing between them. Lightning felt Sally, she was very wet "Fuck Sally… are you that desperate?" Lightning asked "Yes!" Sally said as took Lightning's penis and bit it gently. Lightning screamed in pleasure. "You sound like you're just as desperate!" She smugly said.

Sally climbed on top of Lightning, straddling him. His tires began to find their way up to her sides then to her breasts. In another moment, Lightning brushed his tip against Sally's opening, sending jolts of pleasure through both of them. Sally wordlessly sank down on top of Lightning's erection and he threw his hood back with an intense groan. Sally was so tight around him that his hood whirled, her movements sending excruciating pleasure down his shaft. Sally arched her roof from the intensity of the sensations that were flooding through her, and it seemed that she never could get enough of this feeling. Carefully she started moving her entire body in an erotic rhythm. Sally slammed her undercarriage to Lightning's with each time she came down, forcing him deeper into her, and making him grunt happily. Lightning gasped, feeling her grip him tighter. "You like your wife's tight pussy?" Sally moaned "Don't you?" Lighting moaned louder, he was now the past point of being able to form words. Soon: Sally's muscles started to spasm and she lanced herself down hard on Lightning's erection, crying out as she had a massive orgasm. Finally, unable to hold back any longer, "Sally!" Lightning cried out as he lost himself in his exquisite orgasm. Exhausted from their night together, they laid beside each other under the blankets "I love you." Lightning replied, kissing Sally softly as he gently rubbed her body. Sally pressed her lips to his; "And I love you!" Sally responded as she snuggled close her eyes beginning to close. A contented sigh escaped lightning's lips. "Goodnight, My Queen" Lightning said. A small smile played at the corners of her mouth. "Goodnight, My King." Sally said as she kissed him once more before snuggling his strong fender. Lightning pulled the covers further up over them. Sally was asleep in moments, but Lightning found that he could not fall asleep. He turned on the TV and watched it quietly, until he fell asleep a few hours later.