Writers Comments
Ok people this is the chapter after the big battle…hope you enjoy…word of warning something bad happens
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto
"WOW…OW…my head hurts…where am I…last thing I remember I was in a…battle…with…SASUKE"!!! Naruto said with a snarl. "Looks like I am inside the hospital back at the village" Naruto said while taking a look around the white room. A nurse walked in and gave a gasp when she saw Naruto awake.
"Y-You're…awake…b-but you were supposed to be out for at least a week"! She said with a shocked expression.
"A week...Lady I when I go down it is normally only for the night…never a week"!! Naruto shouted at her while his stomach gave a grumble
"Hungry"? She said with a new smile.
"YA…you got any ramen around here" Naruto said while rubbing his stomach
The nurse gave a sigh "Yes…I will be right back with a bowl" she said as she opened the door but was stopped by Naruto's voice
"A BOWL…you better make it about 15…at the least lady"!!! Naruto said to the stunned nurse. She turned around with an angry face. "What"? Naruto said with a worried look for the look she was giving him was the look that Tsunade or Sakura would give him.
"WHAT DO YOU THINK WE ARE A CHARITY"!!! She shouted almost blowing Naruto out the window "We have other patience you Baka"
"Well you didn't have to yell…Jeez…I think I am deaf now" Naruto said while climbing back into bed and digging in his ear
"I will bring you three bowls…no more no less…GOT IT"!!! She said with a raised fist
"Only three" he said as a fist came onto his head making a god sized lump as the nurse stomped out of the room. Naruto rubbed his bump until it went away "Jeez…what is her problem…all I did was ask for my usual ramen order…OW…she hits just as hard as Sakura-Chan does" Naruto said as he sat down and got comfortable waiting for the nurse to come back. When she finally arrived she sat the three bowls of ramen on the table next to him and he turned around and started eating while she cleaned the room for the next patient. "YUCK…you call this ramen…it taste like boiled garbage…and even the broth is…HORRIBLE" Naruto said as he shoveled down the ramen fast to avoid the bad taste but did not notice the death stare he was getting from the nurse.
"WHAT DID YOU SAY…I made that ramen from scratch you little…ungrateful…BAKA"!!! She said as she charged him. Naruto ran out the door while grabbing his shirt on the way out with the nurse hot on his trail. "WHEN I CATCH YOU I AM GOING TO SKIN YOU ALIVE AND BURN YOUR BODY….YOU LITTLE TROLL"!!! Naruto only ran faster until he was out the door but when he slowed down he found that there was a shoe on his butt and in one quick movement Naruto was sent flying through the air like a football. "THAT WILL TEACH YOU"!!! She shouted as he disappeared from sight into a cloud. "IF he never comes back it will be too soon" she mumbled to herself while giving the staring people a death stare. Naruto was still going until he began to descend back down toward the ground at fast speed. He was about a mile out of town and heading for a large tree. Only one thing went through Naruto's mind as he closed in on the tree. "WHY…ME" he then hit the tree face first making a large dent in the tree trunk. Naruto slowly peeled off like a large gum wad. "I can't…feel…my…face" Naruto said while rubbing his face extremely hard. "Man how far did she kick me…doesn't look that far from town…better get walking…I need some real food…all that bad ramen is starting to make me sick. Naruto kept walking for about ten minutes until the village gates came into view, he just walked in and went straight to his favorite ramen shop and ate about 18 servings to make up for the three bad ones.
Naruto took off in the direction of the mansion. On his way in he was stopped by Hiashi.
"Naruto-kun…where have you been…you have worried me beyond any imagination…not to mention my daughter"!!! Hiashi thundered
"Taking care of some things…But they are done and now I need to do some training…I am not exactly very happy right now" Naruto said as he started remembering that he failed to bring back Sasuke.
"FINE…but I hope you know…you hurt my daughter and in so doing you hurt me" Hiashi said as Naruto began to tremble
"Stop it" Naruto said in a small voice. But Hiashi only continued.
"You caused her to cry for the longest time…you made her experience pain that I did not think existed…you broke her heart" he was cut off by Naruto
"SHUT UP" He shouted as he fell to the ground.
"I hope you are hurt by these words because it is nothing compared to what you have done to my daughter…AS OF NOW YOU ARE NO LONGER A HYUUGA…I DISOWN YOU…MY DAUGHTER IS FORBIDEN TO EVER SEE YOU AGAIN" Hiashi roared at Naruto.
"NOOOOO"!!!!!! Naruto screamed as it echoed through the village. Naruto was suddenly gone in a flash that ripped wind and dirt into the air like a whirlwind as he ran through the gate. Back at the Hyuuga mansion Hiashi only smiled and then was gone in a cloud of smoke as Hiashi, Hinata, Hanabi, Neji, and about half the Hyuuga house hold came running inside the room looking for the source of the scream that they knew was Naruto. When they looked outside they could still see a dust cloud like something had left in a hurry.
"Naruto-kun" Hiashi said to himself as he sent Hinata and Neji to pursue him
Meanwhile in the forest next to the village
"How did it go…Kisame" Itachi said with an emotionless tone
"Mission success…I said enough to cause him to leave the village…now all we have to do is…put our plan into action" Kisame said with a large grin.
"Good…let us go after him then" Itachi said as the two ninja vanished in smoke and speed
Meanwhile with Naruto
Naruto was still running as tears began to well from his eyes."I…I…Can't believe that happened…I just got a f-family, a true love…and they already left me for nothing…" Naruto just kept running until a wave of sound hit him from a tree and sent him into a boulder. It was about ten sound ninja's sent to try and assassinate him in his sleep but instead found him on there way to find him anyway. Naruto just sat, motionless as the sound ninja got closer hoping he was already dead for even they saw what he did to Sasuke and Orochimaru. Naruto slowly raised his head and saw the sound ninja and began to let a tear fall.
"This is supposed to be a threat…this is just a scared little kid…this is going to be easy" on ninja said as a sudden rush of killer intent came over them. They looked at the source only to find that the scared little boy was now an enraged demon with fangs, claws, red eyes, and a tail coming from his back. Naruto just let a tear fall as he flashed forward and ripped every single ninja in half like they were paper. Naruto stopped after he killed the last one when he heard a voice form behind him.
"Naruto-kun…I see you are now a killer" Itachi said with a emotionless voice
"Ya kid…didn't think you had it in you…but you ripped them apart…literarily….good work…even I could not of done better" Kisame said with a slightly sarcastic voice. Naruto just glared at them and took a step but then found that his killer intent and threats were not working so he was about to charge them when Itachi said something.
"Naruto-kun…I see that the village has abandon you…disowned you…even the one you thought loved you…no longer loves you" Itachi said with a dead voice that caused a tear from Naruto.
"Shut up…THAT'S A LIE…Hinata-Chan still loves me…" Naruto said as Kisame interrupted
"Hate to break it to ya kid…but…that whole I love you thing she did at the valley of the end…it was only to get you to release more power…she doesn't love you…she is a Hyuuga and she cannot be trusted anymore then the rest of that village…to them you are only a weapon…and that is all you ever were to them…they never loved you, not one of them" Kisame said as Naruto's tail went away and as did his physical features. "But…join us…and you can have power and respect and even recognition…look at us…I mean he is a killer…I am a shark faced freak…you are a demon killer…really that is all the Akakski are…just a whole bunch of misfits and people who never fit in…we were trying to get to you before you found out the hard way but…we were to late…so join us and you can be happy again…trust me" Kisame said as Naruto slowly got up.
"L-like me….you mean…you all had…bad lives…and you just want to help me" Naruto said with a sad voice
"Yes Naruto…we all had more then our share of horrors and hate upon us…and if you join us you will have a family of people who understand you…not people who just want your power and abilities…hell me and Itachi will even be your mentors and train you our selves" Kisame said kind of fast because he knew that the 'Friendship Squad' was on there way. "So what do you say…come with us…or go back to that world of pain"? Kisame said with a smile and nervousness knowing that in another minute this plan would become fifty times harder to get to work.
"Fine…But…I want you to promise me one thing"? Naruto said in a dead tone "I can have the freedom to go where I want when I want without question or someone following me" Naruto said as the two men looked at each other and nodded.
"Deal…now come on…the village of hate is coming to try and 'take' you back" Kisame said as he leapt away with Naruto, Itachi stayed behind and left a note for the others to find that said where Naruto was going, because he knew it would only help there plan if he did this and then he disappeared after Kisame and Naruto before the he was detected.
When the group arrived all they could do is stare in shock at the horrible sight of death and blood. Sakura finally found the note that seemed to be written in Naruto's hand writing. She read it out loud so everyone could hear it. Here is what it said:
Dear People of the Hidden Leaf,
By now I am already gone…I have left with the Akakski on my own will and I will not be coming back…I hate all of you for hating me and now I will become stronger and faster and better and one day come back and destroy that which destroyed me
Signed Naruto Uzumaki Hyuuga EX Hyuuga
They all stood in shock not knowing what to think or do except for Hinata. She on instinct started running in the direction she knew Naruto-kun went just by the smell of ramen. She was caught by Neji before she could go any further and then she turned around and started crying her eyes out on his shoulder.
"B-but…why would Naruto-kun…ever in a million years do such a thing" Sakura said as a tear ran down her cheek. Neji answered suspiciously
"I have a theory…back at the mansion….we heard what sounded like Hiashi talking to Naruto and thought he was…and then we heard him scream and we ran over to find out what had happened…when we arrived there was a faint but still apparent trace of Jutsu in the air…I believe that…The person Naruto was talking to was an imposter…and tricked Naruto into this action…because when I confronted Hiashi he did not recall speaking to Naruto since Hinata and He left for there mission not to long ago…making it apparent that someone wanted this to happen…I believe that we have serious situation on our hands…let us report back to the Hokage with our findings…" He said while lifting the still tearing Hinata off his shoulders.
Writers Comments
Wow…this whole idea just came to me because losing Sasuke is still fresh in Naruto's mind so he is very emotional right now…and Dam it came out better then expected…Please if you want to ask a question about this chapter then please email me about it…don't ask it in a comment…if you email me I will answer it. Thank You to all my valued readers
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