A/N: WHOO! Chapter 28! ;D alright! I've noticed a lot more reviews lately, and I really apreciate the effort all of you put into your reviews, so I'm not saying when, but soon I'm gonna have an EXTRA long chapter for you guys. Just hold on a while, it's coming.
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p.s. all questions answered at the end of the chapter. YAY!
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Enjoy the chapter! (H-A-W-A-I-I!!!)
CHAPTER 28
"There's only 2 words to describe Kim, Roxas." Riku sighed. "Man eater."
"Yickes." Roxas flinched.
"Yeah." Riku shook his head. "Whatever, I'm going to sleep."
"Whatever." Roxas grunted.
They still had a ways to go before they reached Maui, Hawaii.
Hayner took a deep breath, leaning up against the window next to his seat in the plane. Could this trip take ANY longer?
Olette stayed quiet, staring up at the TV, Pence messed around with his camera, Roxas continued to glare greivingly at Kim, Sora and Kairi were going on and on about god-knows-what, Namine's dad and mystery woman continued to stay out of sight, and Riku was too busy flirting with Namine to notice Kim looking at Namine like she wished she had a gun. Fa'an stayed out of it.
1 whole hour left before they made it to Maui, Hawaii, 7 P.M. More than 24 hours from where the plane took off.
"Haha," Namine laughed, "I used to be afraid of hights, now I can't stop staring out the window!"
"Cool, huh?" Riku laughed.
"I never knew the ocean was so big... It's like it's endless." Namine gawked, gazing down from the window next to her seat.
"Mn Hm." Riku grunted, searching for something else to talk about.
"Hey," Namine turned her head from the window to him. "How much longer do you think it'll take till we're in Hawaii?"
Riku shrugged. "I dunno. Soon, I guess..."
Namine freaked. "I'm so excited!" She sighed greatfully, "2 whole weeks in paradise!"
Riku relaxed, smiling at his ever-excited girlfriend. "Yeah, 2 whole weeks of-"
"OH MY GOD!" Roxas cut him off.
Riku growled, "What is it this time?"
"Dude, get up!" Roxas stood up, pulling at his friend's arm, "we're here!"
"Really?!" Namine shot up, pushing her way past Riku and Roxas and to the front of the plane where everyone waited unwillingly for them to let them off and into the airport with their things.
Riku and Roxas followed her. "Wow, she's so happy, you'd think she forgot Kim was here." Riku commented.
"Kim's a bitch." Roxas huffed.
"I heard that!" Kim snarled, pushing inbetween and past the both of them, followed by Fa'an who laughed at the two boys.
"Riku, hurry up!" Namine rushed back to where Riku was, grabbed his arm, and dragged him all the way up to where the people were finally being let off.
Roxas rolled his eyes and proceeded onward and off the plane, where the others were waiting.
Namine was jumping around in a hurry, making sure everyone was present, and Riku was carrying her bags. Roxas dashed the rest of the way to where the group was, got his bags, and Namine's dad lead Namine and all her friends out of the air port and into several different taxi cars. Tidus, Selphie, Wakka, Hayner, and Olette in one. Riku, Namine, Pence, Roxas, Sora, and kairi in another. Namine's dad and the mystery woman had a taxi car by themselfs. Namine ignored it though. Kim and Fa'an went their own way to only god-knows-where and Riku was releaved that at least Kim didn't follow them to the hotel also.
Once at the beach-side hotel, Everyone unloaded out of the taxi cars with their bags and belongings and faced the beach where the hotel was located.
Kairi, Olette, Selphie, and Namine's jaw nearly dropped to the sandy ground.
"Oh... My..." Selphie started.
"Gosh." Kairi and namine finished in unison.
Olette was too stunned to even breath. The destiny Islands had some competition. This was BEUTIFUL! Never had any of them seen something so breath taking.
Even Roxas's mouth was shut.
"Wow..." Namine gazed off out at the white beach and glossy waters, where the single most stunning sun-set was taking place right before her.
Riku walked up behind her and wrapped his arms around her waist from behind, resting his head up against hers. "Jeez," He snorted, "Destiny Island doesn't even compare."
Namine hugged his arms. "Tell me about it."
"The hotels not that bad looking ether." Riku's statement made Namine's focus swich to the hotel.
"Yeah, it doesn't." Namine agreed.
"So," Riku started, laughing seductivly, "how about that date?"
Namine opened her mouth to reply but was cutt short by her father shouting over the crowd of her friends. "Let's get to the hotel and unpack, then you all can do whatever. There's enough rooms for you all to split up." He told, leading everyone onward to the hotel.
Riku sighed and pulled away.
Namine smiled at him. "Give me a bit to unpack, okay?"
Riku laughed, "Sure."
"Namine, hurry up!" Selphie shouted, "come on!"
"Coming!" Namine shouted back, grabbing her things as Riku did and heading off into the hotel with the others.
Once there, she and Riku ended up getting a room together after all, considering sora and kairi took a room, wakka, tidus, and Selphie shared a room, Olette, hayner, and pence shared a room, Roxas had his own room, ect. There were 2 empty rooms left. One room on the side of the building closer to the ocean, and the other right next to Roxas on the other side of the hotel; the side nearest the small, pleasn't little town that they were next to. Namine's dad was sure to pick a quiet, but pretty area.
While everyone unpacked in thier rooms, Namine's dad and the new woman were already unpacked and strolling around on the top level of the hotel.
"Ah," Namine's dad breathed in the sweet air, "things here haven't changed one bit.
"Have you told Na-" The woman was cut off.
"Namine'll be fine." He reassured. "She's tough."
"But I really think you should-" She was cut off again.
"Just give her some time to warm up, okay?"
She nodded, "Okay."
Meanwhile, in Sora and Kairi's room they were also talking about more serious things.
"There's gotta be a catch, I know it." Sora sighed while unpacking his clothes into the closet.
"Oh, there's no catch!" Kairi laughed at him. "Namine's just really nice."
"Oh, come on!" Sora faced her, "why in the world would she all of a sudden be like, "wanna go to Hawaii?"
"You didn't suspect anything when Olette took us to Las Vegas." Kairi folded her arms, sitting on the bed. She figured she'd finished unpacking later in the night.
"That's different." Sora groaned.
"How so?" Kairi pressed on, tilting her head in confusion.
"Olette's just, like that. Namine's not." Sora finished up un packing and stood in front of Kairi.
"Well, you're right," Kairi started, "but just enjoy yourself, okay?" She then got up and smiled at him, "We're in hawaii! There's nothing to worry about."
"But what if something horrible happens? What then? I don't wanna say "I told you so." Sora was even more distressed. "What if Namine's dad had something up his sleave or something!? I really don't trust that man."
Kairi punched him playfully in the arm, "Get over it!"
"But what if-" Sora had been cut off.
"Wat if, what if, what if!" Kairi mocked him, "Tell me, has anything happened yet? No."
"But-"
"Don't worry about it," Kairi repeated, "you'll be fine."
"It's not me I'm worried about." Sora said under his breath, too softly for kairi to hear.
"What?" She asked, making a face.
"It's nothing," He grabbed her hand and lead her out of the room, "let's go find something to eat at the buffet upstairs..."
"Whatever, Sora." Kairi laughed.
000
"Oh, would you look at this place!" Kim danced around on the beach while Fa'an watched her, seemingly emotionless.
"Mn." He snorted. "Whatever."
She stopped and looked at him. "What's the matter with you?"
"Everythig." He rolled his eyes. "Look, I'm going to unpack at that hotel you mentioned. Follow."
Wait, wait, wait, wait, WAIT!
Did he just give KIM and COMAND!?
Kim looked down for a moment, then sighed. "Whatever, Fa'an."
DID SHE JUST OBEY!?
Whatever happened to 'nobosy crosses Kim'? What was the world coming to?
She reached for his hand, but he rejected it and walked faster, making Kim have to keep a quick pace to keep up with him. What ever got into he head? What was with handing over all her forceful power?
This wasn't good...
000
"Are you finished yet?" Riku asked, laying on the bed in the hotel room he and Namine now ofically shared. "It's been an hour! Not much longer before it's pitch black out there! Come on, Namine!"
"Hold on!" Namine howled, "I'm almost finished!"
"You said that 10 minutes ago." Riku mumbled under his breath.
"Done!" Namine turned around to face him, her hands placed on her hips.
Riku sat up. "Took you long enough!"
"Well I'm so-rry!" Namine then folded her arms, obviously not very happy at the moment.
Riku sighed. "No, it's okay. Let's just go before it's too la-"
"Namine!" Namine's father barged into the room, not bothering to even knock.
"What!?" She asked coldly.
"I have to talk to you for a moment." He then looked at Riku, who's eyes widened when he looked at him. almost like he was scraed. "Alone."
Riku grunted and got up, "Fine!" He then looked over his shoulder and at Namine. "Meet me outside when you're finished."
As soon as Riku was gone, Namine walked up to her father and asked, "What do you want, dad?"
"I just wanted to say... Sorry."
Namine cocked an eyebrow. "About what?"
Her father sighed. "About bringing Brittny." (A/N: GAWD. I hate that name)
"Who?" Namine made face.
"The woman I brought along."
"Oh," Namine rolled her eyes, "So? You're just friends, I mean, it's not like she's your girlfriend or anything."
"Uh, That's the thing-" He was cut off.
"Namine!" You could hear Riku moan from all the way outside, "HURRY UP!"
"I gotta go, Riku promised me he'd take me somewhere tonight." Namine started for the exit.
"Aw." Her father commented.
Namine ignored him. "We'll talk later."
With that she left the hotel and walked off into the little town with Riku while her father made his way back up to the top level of the hotel, where you-know-who was waiting.
000
"Your dad sure likes to talk a lot." Riku sighed. "I thought I'd never get you outa that hotel!"
Namine laughed, finally in a better mood. Unpacking was never all that much fun, 'specially when you've got your boyfriend breathing down your neck the whole time. "I warned you that my dad might get in the way."
"Yeah..." Riku's stomach growled, "Let's find a place to eat, and fast."
"Agreed." Namine smiled at him.
They ended up finding a small shack close enough to the beach that they'd get to see the ocean from the windows they had put in.
Namine and Riku ate rather slowly, and when they were finished they ended up not having to pay for the meal because the manager thought they were cute.
After exiting the place, they wandered off onto the beach next to the ocean.
"Look!" Namine exclaimed, pointing at the sky beyong the sea. "The sun set, it's still taking place!"
Riku shoved his hands in this pockets and stood next to her, grinning. "Yup."
Namine clung to his arm. "It's almost over though." She looked up at him. "It'll be too dark to stay out soon."
"So?" He asked, then laughed. "I'll stay out as long as I want!"
Namine laughed at him and let go of his arm. "Well I'm not gonna come find you when you're lost."
"Who says I'm not gonna keep you here with me?" He grinned.
"Who says I'm gonna listen to you?" She nudged him playfully. namine then began walking in the direction of the hotel. "Look at me, Riku! I'm walkin' away, what'cha doing to do about it?"
"This." Riku grabbed a hold of her suddenly and picked her up off of her feet.
"Riku!" Namine laughed.
Riku than neared the water with her, laughing evilly as if he were about to throw her into the ocean. Namine gave him a look that read 'bring it on.' he gave her a look back that rea d 'it's been brought.'
With that, Riku tossed Namine into the water and he jumped in after her happily.
It was a good thing it was just the shallower water that went up to their waist, or namine would've murdered him.
"R-riku!" Namine didn't expect he's actually do it. He could've let her take of her shoes first at least...
He laughed histerically and fell into the water, floating on his back. "Take that." He chuckled.
"Oh yeah," She stood above his and grabbed his face, "TAKE THIS!" She dunked his head under the water several times, as if trying to drown him.
Riku managed to break free of her death grip and waved his hand in the air in defeat, "Okay, alright, fine. You win."
Namine folded her arms. "Well, what now? I'm already all wet, along with everything else I'm wearing. What do we do now?"
"Might as well go back to the hotel then..." Riku sighed.
"Really?" Namine sounded suprised.
"No!" Riku charged at her, wrapping his arms around her waist
"Wha-" Was all Namine managed to get out before Riku swept her off her feet and silenced her with a kiss.
She sighed against his mouth and flung her arms around his shoulders, for the moment forgetting that they were ever waist-deep in salt water.
Riku pulled away for a short moment. "There," He said, "Take that."
Namine's hand reached the back of his head and down the side of his face as she grinned mischievously, pulling his face back towards hers, kissing him back. He tiled his head and pressed his lips against hers harder and tightened his grip around her small frame.
(A/N: XD I know, this is totally random, but I'm listening to nelly furtado again. I don't really like her kind of music, but I've been dancing to it all day! Kim was over not too long ago, and we were dancing to Promiscuous and man eater XD)
Namine grinned seductivly and massaged the back of his neck, kissing him back with just as much force.
Yeah... They'd be out after dark.
000
Roxas sighed, walking around town, trying to ignore all the skateboards that were on sale, that he still didn't have enough money for.
He ended actually walking into one of the stores and fussing over one of the skate boards that caught his eye, which brought a lot of un-needed attention to himself.
Is whinning also attracted the manager of the store, who walked up and laughed at him, "No money, I'm guessing?"
Roxas noddded his head slowly, not even bothering to look and see who it was.
"Tell you what, work here the rest of the night and I'll let you take it home with you."
"What!?" Roxas turned to look at the man, "seriously?"
"Yeah, seriously."
"Alright!" Roxas nearly jumped ten feet into the air. "What do i do first?"
+TO BE CONTINUED+
A/N: Oh yeah. FLUFF. 3 chapters in a row too, haha, I spoil you guys.
First off... the awards!
AWARDS!
Top reviewer: Jakall Alivair!!!!
2nd place: Volume-5!!! haha, she's a man eater, make ya work hard! lol, I was listening to that song when i wrote the chapter.
3rd place:sayshello3!!
4rth place:hitman33333!
QUESTIONS ANSWERED
Q: In the preview you gave, what happens to Kim? A: I can't tell yet, but it's bad. Here's a hint: listen to the song face down by the red jumpsuit apparatis. That gives away a lot.
Q: Where's Namine's Dad? A: Off flirting with "Mystery Woman."
Q: Where's Kyle, and does he have his whip cream? A: Yes, he's been re-united with his beloved whip cream. He's been off partying lately. He won't be back for a bit.
Q: What's in store for Hawaii? A: Drama, lots of it. A lot of romance too, and beach parties. Christmas, and a WEDDING... (dun dun dun)
Q:What new charecters do you plan on adding? A: It depends what I come up with. I already have planned onadding a girl names "Nammah" she's a charecter I'm working on now, actually. I might change her name though XD I've also been working on another... Let's just say she's Kim "reborn."
Q: What happens next for everyone? A: Well, Roxas gets a girl, there's a wedding in hawaii, Kim gets a taste of her own meddicin (although it's a bit much, even for her) Sora and kairi get a little closer, what with... A'hem, you'll see. XD but it's not what you're thinking. Ah, too much stuff to name.
Q: what will happen in Hawaii? A: Romance, a wedding, and... oh... violence on Fa'ans part.
Q: who's the woman Namine's dad brought along? A: Someone Namine doesn't like XD You'll see. Things get "difficult"
Q:Will there be an "ANOTHER STORY 3?" A: Something like that. Now, I am planning on doing a thrid story. But a short one. probably not more than 15 chapters. I'll reveal more about it around the end of Hawaii.
Q:What's gonna happen next? A: Drama.
Q: Is Namine gonna be happy in Hawaii? A: Half in half. Goos things happen and really bad things happen. Let's just say there's a "wedding" involved.
Q: What's gonna happen with Roxas and Kim? A:They get closer, because of an incedent coming up. by the end of it, they're kind of "friends" and then... well... You'll have to wait and see.
Q:Will the blitz Ball team go to the Bahamas? A: yes.
Q: Will you add vincent Valentine? A: maybe, I might. I don't know much about him.
Q: Will there be a scene with leon and everyone durring Christmas? A: Yes, yes there will be.
Q: Is Roxas gonna realize he actually likes Kim? A: But what if he doesn't? XD You'll see how things work out between the two. But the clouds int he sky will be dark before the sun comes out.
Q:I remember in Another Stroy, Namine mentioned her 'brother'. Will he show up in this story? A: haha, maybe. Still haven't made up my mind.
HEY, GO EASY ON ME
My dog, A'hem... the one I got for my B-day. Yeah... He's well... -bursts into tears- HE'S DYING! For all I know, he's only got months left. And there's something about that dog that just reaches my heart, this sucks so bad. I broke down twice durring school, too. He just doesn't deserve this.
A note I want EVERYONE to remember: Life is precious, breath every breath like it's your life. We aren't eternal.
BYE!
I'm gonna go play with my dog...
Don't forget questions. :D more will be answered in chapter 31!
And then, the teacher rapped to grammer... -Cracker-Jacks0000
