Super Fantastic Chapter, you know why? Because I did it in James' POV.
Oh yeah James is in the action.
This might be one of the 'few' James POVs in this story, I had to make James boring and serious here.
The great thing is I might be starting a New FanFiction, because James is MINE.
Well I don't own him yada yada yada, but I Know who he is... never mind lol
The point is this one is Fantastic!
Have you noticed my word is 'Fantastic' I just love that word.


Ally dragged them for what seemed like years before they arrived at a grey and yellow building. It was a massive building, with a huge window that displayed the words "out of business" Ally made a circular movement on the glass door with her index finger.

She then pulled it open shoving them inside. "Come on"

Inside it was just an empty store, a huge empty store. It was dusty and old and nothing great. It had white walls and gray trimming. Ally walked over to a door that said "Storage" on it in gold letters. She did the same circular motion with her finger as she did outside and opened the door, a blinding light came from it and noise poured out.

The group walked next to Ally and inside the door was a street, a massive street, made of stone with children running around, people shopping, it looked completely different than Diagon Alley. It was vibrant and color full, it had pinks and greens and blues everywhere you turned. A specific store caught James' eye.

"Quidditch broom world" he said in awe.

Ally giggled. "You like quidditch?"

James nodded blushing. "At home I'm seeker"

Ally nodded. "I play keeper"

James eyes opened wide "You play quidditch?"

Ally nodded. "I play for my school. ' Plotplague School of witch craft and wizardry'"

'Oh this girl is perfect' Though James 'To bad I still love Lily'

"You are perfect" James said in awe.

Ally smiled "You really gotta stop saying that"

James really did fancy Ally, but never enough to give up on Lily. James looked at the others who were pointing at stores and talking of shopping. Lily was giggling with Remus about a store around the corner.

'Owe'

"So James" Came Ally's voice from behind him. "Why don't you and I go into the broom shop?"

James nodded taking Ally's arm and walking into the shop, inside was broom hanging from the ceiling a huge wall full of names of quiditch teams and their logos.

Many people were crowded around a specific broom.

"The nimbus 1978- Thunder" James read in awe.

"Pretty penny that is" Ally sighed. "I've been trying to buy it for three months."

James bit his bottom lip. He was thinking about buying until Ally said that.

"Well, Ally, tell me something about you?"

"Hmm. Let's see, I love quidditch I'm sixteen, I drive both cars and brooms" She giggled. "I have a sister, and a roommate" This triggered James' memory.

"Sarah right?"

"Yeah, how'd you know?" She asked raising an eyebrow.

"I met her at the park earlier."

"Oh right her day job" Laughed Ally, "I keep begging her to come work at the diner"

James shrugged. "It seemed like she enjoyed her work."

Ally nodded. "She loves making people laugh, she's been able to do it most of her life"

James took Ally's arm as they walked out of the broom store and onto the street.

"So what about James Potter?"

James pondered for a moment. "I also love the sport, I'm sixteen as well, I don't drive muggle cars, I have no siblings, and I have over ten roommates"

Ally tilted her head. "Wha?"

"I go to Hogwarts. I share a dorm with around ten other blokes"

"Oh" Ally said with a smile. "Sarah goes to school with me too, only six girls per room though, it's a massive place"

"Oh so she is a witch?"

"Yeah, actually a very good one"

"With her attitude I wouldn't be surprised." James said with a chuckle and Ally joined in. "Well Hogwarts is massive as well, I've heard it is the largest magical school in the country, of London"

"Hogwarts, I've read up on that, I've heard that is the largest in London, Plotplague is the largest in America, it's said that Hogwarts beats Plitplague by one thousand feet or something like that"

James shrugged. "I wouldn't know.. I should get a measurer and check though"


They stopped at a coffee shop to set down and get to know each other.

"Seeker any good?" Ally asked with a devious smile.

"Why yes I am" James said proudly pumping out his chest. He then exhaled and burst with laughter which Ally had joined him in.

Inside the shop from where James and Ally sat you could see the people on the street shopping through the window.

"So tell me?"

"Tell you what Ally?"

"You and that Lily girl, more than what it seems eh?"

James laughed, how could his date ask him that?

"No, her heart is taken"

"By that Romus guy?"

"Yes by Remus" James corrected her with a smile. "Why do you ask?"

"Well the fact that I heard her call me a street walker had to mean something" Ally said with a smile.

"You heard that?" James sighed. "I'm sorry I don't even know why she said that"

"She likes you James"

"No, trust me I've been through this many more times than you can imagine" James said with a small laugh. "Lily Evans does not fancy James Potter"

Ally shrugged. "Maybe not now, but you'll see, I mean I know that your not that interested in me"

James eyes opened wide. "I am!"

"Not as much her?"

"Uh… true"

"I thought so" Laughed Ally. "Want to tell me why I'm the fake love interest?"

"Not fake, I like you, but just – I'll tell you why" Sighed James. "Remember when Romus and came to the diner?"

"Mhm"

"Well he showed way too many signs that they were fancying each other" Sighed James. "I'm not sure if their together, but I know he fancies her, and she most likely will say yes."

Ally looked sad, almost upset. "So you're left hurting?"

"Uh- in a way yes- so I decided to ask you out, I figured it best; I don't want Remus to feel guilty. I decided I should at least pretend to be over Lily"

Ally put a hand through James' hair- which right now was soothing whatever he was feeling- James sighed as Ally spoke.

"You're a really good friend and the fact that Remus would do such a thing is horrible"

"No, no not at all" James said biting his lip. "She never liked me"

Ally shook her head furiously as she played with his hair. "You're really sweet"

Her face was closer to James' she was rubbing his hair a bit more rough.

"Thanks" He said calmly, Ally's face getting closer.

"You're really cute" She whispered.

"Than-"Ally was kissing him, and from kissing it led to snogging and that went into a rough public snog. Ally was not setting in James' lap before he even knew it, her hand in his hair twining it in her fingers. Ally made small audible moans, and although James couldn't see he knew that people were watching.

Regretfully and hesitantly James pulled away from Ally. Her face looked disappointed.

"You're making this fake love thing really hard" Panted James.

"Whys that?" Ally asked with a sly smile.

"A few moments like that and I'll be in love" James said with a smile. Ally stood up and returned to her own seat. She took James' hand and held it; she then began to rub it.

"You're a vixen" James chuckled.

"Oh I am not; I'm a quarter veela though" Ally said with a laugh.

Ally stubbed rubbing and stood up. "I'll be back I have to go to the ladies room"

James nodded and beckoned the waitress for their bill. Ally's hips swerved as she made her way to the bathroom, she was really quite fit.

James stood their looking out the window. He could have sworn he saw Remus, but he shook his head of the thought, the memory of Sirius was making its way back.

'Flashback'

'"I've got to speak with James for a moment" Sirius said pulling James into the lobby of the hotel, he sat him down on the armchair. Sirius began pacing.

"Sirius mate what's wrong?" James asked looking at a nervous looking Sirius pace the lobby.

"Prongs mate do you know about Evans?"

James sighed. "About Lily and Remus?"

"Yeah"

"Sort of"

"So you know that she fancies Remus?"

"Yeah"

"Well?"

"Well what?"

"Aren't you upset?"

"No"

"Than what are you feeling"

"Honestly Sirius"

"Honestly"

"Sad, depressed, like nothing anyone can do will make it better"

"I knew you wouldn't be happy"

"I'm not planning an attack on Moony so cool your jets" James Sighed.

"I wasn't – I can't believe either of them" Exclaimed Sirius.

"I do, I'll be fine, and I have a date with Ally that Wal-mart girl"

"So, you're over Evans?"

"Course not"

"Then what?"

"I'm giving Remus the spot light"

"I hate them both"

"Don't Padfoot"

"Why, their backstabbing-"

"Adelina" James said in pain. "Oh poor Addy"

"I know I said that and Moony-"

"Sirius are you done?"

"No not ye-"

"Good let's go" James said standing up. Sirius stopped pacing.

"I'm not done!"

"Yes you are" James chuckled. He grabbed Sirius and walked him back down the corridor as he did the door to Amy and Adelina's room swung open. Adelina walked out in her jeans and T-shirt, beaming at them.

'Ended FlashBack'

"James?" Ally's voice snapped James back into reality.

"Y-Yeah"

"You looked like you were watching a movie inside your head" Ally laughed.

"A- I was just thinking"

"About Lily?"

"Actually no, about a friend of mine"

"Which one you have ten" Ally laughed.

"Adelina, the one with the blue streaks" James said and Ally nodded. "She fancied Remus; she's going to be really hurt"

Ally sighed. "You know this little couple is hurting a lot of people"

James nodded. "Yes they're causing a lot of pain"

Ally had already paid for the bill at the register and grabbed James back onto the street.

As they walked Ally had her arm around James and her hand in his hair.

"I love your hair" she cooed. "It's so soft"

"Thanks" James said with a chuckle "I try"

Ally giggled and leaned her head on his shoulder.

'Face it James, no matter how much you like Ally, Lily always wins'


I came up with the name of the school, I liked it!
I was setting in my room on my bed and it came to me!
I was sort of weighing on two titles "Shurst Street" Or "Lily always wins"
guess you see which I piccked.
I loved it, I hope you loved it, please love it, please review it, please ask questions, please be detailed, please be honest!
Please is all I ask.
Please is all I want.
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I'll Update soon!