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This is a short little chappie to clear things up. I personally think it's REALLY cute, but some people have different opinions, I'm SURE. Tell me about them in a REVIEW! YAY REVIEWS!
AFTERMATH
Lily POV
I couldn't believe it. James had lied. He LIED! "My parents are dead," my foot! I can't believe I fell so hard for him. Did he think he was saving me in his own twisted way? Protecting me? Making me fall for him? If that was it, he sure succeeded. I know it's wrong, but I still love him. I felt like those hazel eyes revealed his soul. I liked what I saw. I saw such a care, such a longing, for me. I'll just hide here under this disillusionment charm, and pray no one comes this way, and sit here, looking at the frame, looking at the memories, and think on how life was all too perfect for a little while.
My plan was foiled. I heard a, "Lily is my princess," whispered in that perfect tenor voice of his. I held back a sniffle. He whispered, "Lily? I know you're here!" I let out that sniffle, and knew he'd hear and follow. He tickled my neck, laughing. I could never fool him in the almost two months we were together.
I squealed; I was VERY ticklish. He laughed again, and then asked, "Lils, what are we?" in a saddened voice.
"You tell me," I answered, in that same tone.
James POV
I sighed, and made my revelation, solemnly, "Okay, I know you think I'm a dirty liar and you're wishing you never fell for me, but I can assure you, I never lied for you to want me or feel sympathy for me. I only told you that they were dead to keep you and them safe. My parents are Aurors, and they are immensely skilled at their job, but that doesn't mean that they aren't at risk of death or worse. I didn't want you to know the truth, break up with me and then tell the whole school, though I didn't think you would. I wanted to be sure I was telling the person who loves me, and not the one that hates me. I rather have my small family of you, my parents, the Marauders and Flowas safe than risking anyone just for the sake of truth. I'm sorry if you ever thought I lied to make you mine. I never did and never will have to, 'cause I'll always have you, Lily. I always will."
"Oh James! Even if we may…well…die?" she asked, in a melancholy tone; she didn't like to think of the end, I'm sure.
"Even if I die," I said resolutely and confidently. My Lily-flower wasn't going to go down unless I did FIRST.
"I love you, James," she told me, kissing my lips softly. I broke it, saying, "I told ya, Lils, ALWAYS!" we laughed and looked to the memories. Christmas dinner was flashing before us and I couldn't stop looking at Lily. MY Lily…ALWAYS…
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I think it's my cutest chapter yet. You get to see James's thoughts. YAY! I love James. He's such an easy character to write because of how his emotions never show and he pranks and jokes to hide his really sad and emotional side, but he puts all that aside for Lily. He loves her, and wants her to know it. Everyone in agreement? tell me about it in a REViEW!
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